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class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_by_Jaguarnik"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1</span> <span>Comments by Jaguarnik</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Well-written" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Well-written"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1.1</span> <span>Well-written</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Well-written-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Verifiable" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Verifiable"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1.2</span> <span>Verifiable</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Verifiable-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Neutral" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Neutral"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1.3</span> <span>Neutral</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Neutral-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Stable" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Stable"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1.4</span> <span>Stable</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Stable-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Media" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Media"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.7.1.5</span> <span>Media</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Media-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Wonder_Woman_(2017_film)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Wonder_Woman_(2017_film)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.8</span> <span>Wonder Woman (2017 film)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Wonder_Woman_(2017_film)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.9</span> <span>Daniel in the Lions' Den (Rubens)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Noriko_Takaya" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Noriko_Takaya"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.10</span> <span>Noriko Takaya</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Noriko_Takaya-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Aoba47" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Aoba47"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.10.1</span> <span>Aoba47</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Aoba47-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.11</span> <span>Discovery (Daft Punk album)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Lynch_Fragments" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Lynch_Fragments"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.12</span> <span>Lynch Fragments</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Lynch_Fragments-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Steven_Universe" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Steven_Universe"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.13</span> <span>Steven Universe</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Steven_Universe-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.14</span> <span>Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.15</span> <span>Maxwell's Silver Hammer</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-I_Feel_It_Coming" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#I_Feel_It_Coming"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.16</span> <span>I Feel It Coming</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-I_Feel_It_Coming-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.16.1</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Tyla_(album)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Tyla_(album)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.17</span> <span>Tyla (album)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Tyla_(album)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.18</span> <span>Kill Bill (SZA song)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Midnights" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Midnights"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.19</span> <span>Midnights</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Midnights-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.20</span> <span>Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">1.21</span> <span>Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Everyday_life" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Everyday_life"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2</span> <span>Everyday life</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">19 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Everyday_life-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Everyday life subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Everyday_life-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Mario_Andretti" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Mario_Andretti"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.1</span> <span>Mario Andretti</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Mario_Andretti-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_2" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720_2"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.1.1</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_2-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.2</span> <span>New England Revolution in international competition</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.3</span> <span>LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-BP!" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#BP!"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.3.1</span> <span>BP!</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-BP!-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-LunaEclipse" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#LunaEclipse"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.3.2</span> <span>LunaEclipse</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-LunaEclipse-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">2.4</span> <span>Fenerbahçe S.K. (basketball)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Engineering_and_technology" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Engineering_and_technology"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">3</span> <span>Engineering and technology</span> </div> </a> <button aria-controls="toc-Engineering_and_technology-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Engineering and technology subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Engineering_and_technology-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Buangkok_MRT_station" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Buangkok_MRT_station"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">3.1</span> <span>Buangkok MRT station</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Buangkok_MRT_station-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-General" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#General"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4</span> <span>General</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">4 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-General-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle General subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-General-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Fabienne_Wohlwend" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Fabienne_Wohlwend"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4.1</span> <span>Fabienne Wohlwend</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Fabienne_Wohlwend-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Yoshi's_New_Island" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Yoshi's_New_Island"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4.2</span> <span>Yoshi's New Island</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Yoshi's_New_Island-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4.3</span> <span>Paul Hayes (radio presenter)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Badger_Conference" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Badger_Conference"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4.4</span> <span>Badger Conference</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Badger_Conference-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">4.5</span> <span>Lakeshore Conference (Wisconsin)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Geography_and_places" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Geography_and_places"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5</span> <span>Geography and places</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">7 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Geography_and_places-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Geography and places subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Geography_and_places-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Geography" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Geography"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.1</span> <span>Geography</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Geography-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Taguig" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Taguig"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.2</span> <span>Taguig</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Taguig-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.3</span> <span>List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Hadhramaut" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Hadhramaut"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.4</span> <span>Hadhramaut</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Hadhramaut-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Airship" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Airship"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.4.1</span> <span>Airship</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Airship-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Cremastra" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Cremastra"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">5.4.2</span> <span>Cremastra</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Cremastra-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-History" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#History"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6</span> <span>History</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">39 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-History-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle History subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-History-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Mother_Solomon" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Mother_Solomon"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.1</span> <span>Mother Solomon</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Mother_Solomon-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Operation_Encore" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Operation_Encore"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.2</span> <span>Operation Encore</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Operation_Encore-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.3</span> <span>ToNiePokój escape room fire</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-SS_Dixie_Arrow" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#SS_Dixie_Arrow"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.4</span> <span>SS Dixie Arrow</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-SS_Dixie_Arrow-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Margaret_Sanger" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Margaret_Sanger"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.5</span> <span>Margaret Sanger</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Margaret_Sanger-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Melisende,_Queen_of_Jerusalem" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Melisende,_Queen_of_Jerusalem"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.6</span> <span>Melisende, Queen of Jerusalem</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Melisende,_Queen_of_Jerusalem-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.7</span> <span>Japanese occupation of West Sumatra</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.8</span> <span>Ancient History Of Bangladesh</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.9</span> <span>8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Bertrand_Clauzel" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Bertrand_Clauzel"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.10</span> <span>Bertrand Clauzel</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Bertrand_Clauzel-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Central_Powers" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Central_Powers"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.11</span> <span>Central Powers</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Central_Powers-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.12</span> <span>List of foreign-born samurai in Japan</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-4th_Army_(France)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#4th_Army_(France)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.13</span> <span>4th Army (France)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-4th_Army_(France)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-William_D._Hoard" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#William_D._Hoard"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.14</span> <span>William D. Hoard</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-William_D._Hoard-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Query_from_Z1720" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Query_from_Z1720"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.14.1</span> <span>Query from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Query_from_Z1720-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-750h" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#750h"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.14.2</span> <span>750h</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-750h-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-4"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.14.2.1</span> <span>Comments</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Nayib_Bukele" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Nayib_Bukele"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.15</span> <span>Nayib Bukele</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Nayib_Bukele-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_3" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720_3"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.15.1</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_3-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Urien" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Urien"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.16</span> <span>Urien</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Urien-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Airship_2" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Airship_2"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.16.1</span> <span>Airship</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Airship_2-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Request_for_Reappraisal" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Request_for_Reappraisal"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">6.16.2</span> <span>Request for Reappraisal</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Request_for_Reappraisal-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7</span> <span>Natural sciences and mathematics</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">13 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Natural sciences and mathematics subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Outline_of_caves" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Outline_of_caves"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.1</span> <span>Outline of caves</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Outline_of_caves-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Carl_Friedrich_Gauss"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.2</span> <span>Carl Friedrich Gauss</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-European_rabbit" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#European_rabbit"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.3</span> <span>European rabbit</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-European_rabbit-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Homo_erectus" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Homo_erectus"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.4</span> <span>Homo erectus</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Homo_erectus-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-54_(number)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#54_(number)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.5</span> <span>54 (number)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-54_(number)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.6</span> <span>Valve-sparing aortic root replacement</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.7</span> <span>Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Neurocysticercosis" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Neurocysticercosis"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.8</span> <span>Neurocysticercosis</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Neurocysticercosis-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Stingless_bee" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Stingless_bee"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.9</span> <span>Stingless bee</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Stingless_bee-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Jens" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Jens"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.9.1</span> <span>Jens</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Jens-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Query_from_Z1720_2" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Query_from_Z1720_2"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.9.2</span> <span>Query from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Query_from_Z1720_2-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Review_updated_version" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Review_updated_version"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">7.9.3</span> <span>Review updated version</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Review_updated_version-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Language_and_literature" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Language_and_literature"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">8</span> <span>Language and literature</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">6 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Language_and_literature-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Language and literature subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Language_and_literature-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Grammar_Nazi" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Grammar_Nazi"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">8.1</span> <span>Grammar Nazi</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Grammar_Nazi-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_LEvalyn" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_LEvalyn"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">8.1.1</span> <span>Comments from LEvalyn</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_LEvalyn-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Lucky_Loser_(book)" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Lucky_Loser_(book)"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">8.2</span> <span>Lucky Loser (book)</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Lucky_Loser_(book)-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_4" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720_4"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">8.2.1</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_4-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Philosophy_and_religion" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Philosophy_and_religion"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">9</span> <span>Philosophy and religion</span> </div> </a> <button aria-controls="toc-Philosophy_and_religion-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Philosophy and religion subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Philosophy_and_religion-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Orphic_Hymns" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Orphic_Hymns"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">9.1</span> <span>Orphic Hymns</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Orphic_Hymns-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Social_sciences_and_society" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Social_sciences_and_society"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10</span> <span>Social sciences and society</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">31 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Social_sciences_and_society-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--icon-only vector-toc-toggle"> <span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-expand"></span> <span>Toggle Social sciences and society subsection</span> </button> <ul id="toc-Social_sciences_and_society-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Senior_assassin" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Senior_assassin"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.1</span> <span>Senior assassin</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Senior_assassin-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Elliot_Rodger" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Elliot_Rodger"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.2</span> <span>Elliot Rodger</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Elliot_Rodger-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Evolutionary_economics" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Evolutionary_economics"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.3</span> <span>Evolutionary economics</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Evolutionary_economics-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Victoria_Starmer" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Victoria_Starmer"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.4</span> <span>Victoria Starmer</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Victoria_Starmer-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Economy_of_Tanzania" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Economy_of_Tanzania"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.5</span> <span>Economy of Tanzania</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Economy_of_Tanzania-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Ben_Roberts-Smith" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Ben_Roberts-Smith"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.6</span> <span>Ben Roberts-Smith</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Ben_Roberts-Smith-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Tham_Nguyen" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Tham_Nguyen"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.7</span> <span>Tham Nguyen</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Tham_Nguyen-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Troubled_teen_industry" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Troubled_teen_industry"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.8</span> <span>Troubled teen industry</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Troubled_teen_industry-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Gitmo_playlist" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Gitmo_playlist"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.9</span> <span>Gitmo playlist</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Gitmo_playlist-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Airship_3" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Airship_3"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.9.1</span> <span>Airship</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Airship_3-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_5" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720_5"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.9.2</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_5-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Cisnormativity" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Cisnormativity"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.10</span> <span>Cisnormativity</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Cisnormativity-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Airship_4" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Airship_4"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.10.1</span> <span>Airship</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Airship_4-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-RoySmith" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#RoySmith"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.10.2</span> <span>RoySmith</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-RoySmith-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Spoiler_effect" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-2"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Spoiler_effect"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.11</span> <span>Spoiler effect</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Spoiler_effect-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> <li id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_6" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comments_from_Z1720_6"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.11.1</span> <span>Comments from Z1720</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comments_from_Z1720_6-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Comment_from_lethargilistic" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-3"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Comment_from_lethargilistic"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">10.11.2</span> <span>Comment from lethargilistic</span> </div> </a> <ul id="toc-Comment_from_lethargilistic-sublist" class="vector-toc-list"> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> </ul> </li> <li id="toc-Lists" class="vector-toc-list-item vector-toc-level-1"> <a class="vector-toc-link" href="#Lists"> <div class="vector-toc-text"> <span class="vector-toc-numb">11</span> <span>Lists</span> </div> </a> <span class="ext-discussiontools-init-sidebar-meta">3 comments</span> <button aria-controls="toc-Lists-sublist" class="cdx-button cdx-button--weight-quiet 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class="mw-page-title-namespace">Wikipedia</span><span class="mw-page-title-separator">:</span><span class="mw-page-title-main">Peer review</span></h1> <div id="p-lang-btn" class="vector-dropdown mw-portlet mw-portlet-lang" > <input type="checkbox" id="p-lang-btn-checkbox" role="button" aria-haspopup="true" data-event-name="ui.dropdown-p-lang-btn" class="vector-dropdown-checkbox mw-interlanguage-selector" aria-label="Go to an article in another language. Available in 40 languages" > <label id="p-lang-btn-label" for="p-lang-btn-checkbox" class="vector-dropdown-label cdx-button cdx-button--fake-button cdx-button--fake-button--enabled cdx-button--weight-quiet cdx-button--action-progressive mw-portlet-lang-heading-40" aria-hidden="true" ><span class="vector-icon mw-ui-icon-language-progressive mw-ui-icon-wikimedia-language-progressive"></span> <span class="vector-dropdown-label-text">40 languages</span> </label> <div class="vector-dropdown-content"> <div class="vector-menu-content"> <ul class="vector-menu-content-list"> <li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-als mw-list-item"><a href="https://als.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Artikel_Erwytere" title="Wikipedia:Artikel Erwytere – Alemannic" lang="gsw" hreflang="gsw" data-title="Wikipedia:Artikel Erwytere" data-language-autonym="Alemannisch" data-language-local-name="Alemannic" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Alemannisch</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ang mw-list-item"><a href="https://ang.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikip%C7%A3dia:Br%C5%8D%C3%B0ra_r%C7%A3dsc%C4%93awung" title="Wikipǣdia:Brōðra rǣdscēawung – Old English" lang="ang" hreflang="ang" data-title="Wikipǣdia:Brōðra rǣdscēawung" data-language-autonym="Ænglisc" data-language-local-name="Old English" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Ænglisc</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ar mw-list-item"><a href="https://ar.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D9%88%D9%8A%D9%83%D9%8A%D8%A8%D9%8A%D8%AF%D9%8A%D8%A7:%D9%85%D8%B1%D8%A7%D8%AC%D8%B9%D8%A9_%D8%A7%D9%84%D8%B2%D9%85%D9%84%D8%A7%D8%A1" title="ويكيبيديا:مراجعة الزملاء – Arabic" lang="ar" hreflang="ar" data-title="ويكيبيديا:مراجعة الزملاء" data-language-autonym="العربية" data-language-local-name="Arabic" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>العربية</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ba mw-list-item"><a href="https://ba.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%92%D0%B8%D0%BA%D0%B8%D0%BF%D0%B5%D0%B4%D0%B8%D1%8F:%D0%A0%D0%B5%D1%86%D0%B5%D0%BD%D0%B7%D0%B8%D1%8F%D0%BB%D0%B0%D1%83" title="Википедия:Рецензиялау – Bashkir" lang="ba" hreflang="ba" data-title="Википедия:Рецензиялау" data-language-autonym="Башҡортса" data-language-local-name="Bashkir" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Башҡортса</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-be mw-list-item"><a href="https://be.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%92%D1%96%D0%BA%D1%96%D0%BF%D0%B5%D0%B4%D1%8B%D1%8F:%D0%A0%D1%8D%D1%86%D1%8D%D0%BD%D0%B7%D0%B0%D0%B2%D0%B0%D0%BD%D0%BD%D0%B5" title="Вікіпедыя:Рэцэнзаванне – Belarusian" lang="be" hreflang="be" data-title="Вікіпедыя:Рэцэнзаванне" data-language-autonym="Беларуская" data-language-local-name="Belarusian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Беларуская</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-be-x-old mw-list-item"><a href="https://be-tarask.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%92%D1%96%D0%BA%D1%96%D0%BF%D1%8D%D0%B4%D1%8B%D1%8F:%D0%90%D1%80%D1%82%D1%8B%D0%BA%D1%83%D0%BB%D1%8B_%D0%B4%D0%BB%D1%8F_%D1%80%D1%8D%D1%86%D1%8D%D0%BD%D0%B7%D0%B0%D0%B2%D0%B0%D0%BD%D1%8C%D0%BD%D1%8F" title="Вікіпэдыя:Артыкулы для рэцэнзаваньня – Belarusian (Taraškievica orthography)" lang="be-tarask" hreflang="be-tarask" data-title="Вікіпэдыя:Артыкулы для рэцэнзаваньня" data-language-autonym="Беларуская (тарашкевіца)" data-language-local-name="Belarusian (Taraškievica orthography)" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Беларуская (тарашкевіца)</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ca mw-list-item"><a href="https://ca.wikipedia.org/wiki/Viquip%C3%A8dia:Avaluaci%C3%B3_d%27articles" title="Viquipèdia:Avaluació d'articles – Catalan" lang="ca" hreflang="ca" data-title="Viquipèdia:Avaluació d'articles" data-language-autonym="Català" data-language-local-name="Catalan" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Català</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-cs mw-list-item"><a href="https://cs.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedie:WikiProjekt_Kvalita/%C4%8Cl%C3%A1nky_k_recenzi" title="Wikipedie:WikiProjekt Kvalita/Články k recenzi – Czech" lang="cs" hreflang="cs" data-title="Wikipedie:WikiProjekt Kvalita/Články k recenzi" data-language-autonym="Čeština" data-language-local-name="Czech" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Čeština</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-da mw-list-item"><a href="https://da.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Evaluering" title="Wikipedia:Evaluering – Danish" lang="da" hreflang="da" data-title="Wikipedia:Evaluering" data-language-autonym="Dansk" data-language-local-name="Danish" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Dansk</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-de mw-list-item"><a href="https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Review" title="Wikipedia:Review – German" lang="de" hreflang="de" data-title="Wikipedia:Review" data-language-autonym="Deutsch" data-language-local-name="German" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Deutsch</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-el mw-list-item"><a href="https://el.wikipedia.org/wiki/%CE%92%CE%B9%CE%BA%CE%B9%CF%80%CE%B1%CE%AF%CE%B4%CE%B5%CE%B9%CE%B1:%CE%9A%CF%81%CE%B9%CF%84%CE%B9%CE%BA%CE%AE_%CE%BB%CE%B7%CE%BC%CE%BC%CE%AC%CF%84%CF%89%CE%BD" title="Βικιπαίδεια:Κριτική λημμάτων – Greek" lang="el" hreflang="el" data-title="Βικιπαίδεια:Κριτική λημμάτων" data-language-autonym="Ελληνικά" data-language-local-name="Greek" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Ελληνικά</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-es mw-list-item"><a href="https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikiproyecto:Revisi%C3%B3n_por_pares" title="Wikiproyecto:Revisión por pares – Spanish" lang="es" hreflang="es" data-title="Wikiproyecto:Revisión por pares" data-language-autonym="Español" data-language-local-name="Spanish" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Español</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-fr mw-list-item"><a href="https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikip%C3%A9dia:Atelier_de_relecture" title="Wikipédia:Atelier de relecture – French" lang="fr" hreflang="fr" data-title="Wikipédia:Atelier de relecture" data-language-autonym="Français" data-language-local-name="French" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Français</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-fy mw-list-item"><a href="https://fy.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedy:Artikelhifker" title="Wikipedy:Artikelhifker – Western Frisian" lang="fy" hreflang="fy" data-title="Wikipedy:Artikelhifker" data-language-autonym="Frysk" data-language-local-name="Western Frisian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Frysk</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ko mw-list-item"><a href="https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%ED%95%A8%EA%BB%98_%EA%B2%80%ED%86%A0%ED%95%98%EA%B8%B0" title="위키백과:함께 검토하기 – Korean" lang="ko" hreflang="ko" data-title="위키백과:함께 검토하기" data-language-autonym="한국어" data-language-local-name="Korean" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>한국어</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-hy mw-list-item"><a href="https://hy.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D5%8E%D5%AB%D6%84%D5%AB%D5%BA%D5%A5%D5%A4%D5%AB%D5%A1:%D4%B3%D5%B6%D5%A1%D5%B0%D5%A1%D5%BF%D5%B8%D6%82%D5%B4" title="Վիքիպեդիա:Գնահատում – Armenian" lang="hy" hreflang="hy" data-title="Վիքիպեդիա:Գնահատում" data-language-autonym="Հայերեն" data-language-local-name="Armenian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Հայերեն</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-id mw-list-item"><a href="https://id.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ulasan_sejawat" title="Wikipedia:Ulasan sejawat – Indonesian" lang="id" hreflang="id" data-title="Wikipedia:Ulasan sejawat" data-language-autonym="Bahasa Indonesia" data-language-local-name="Indonesian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Bahasa Indonesia</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-it mw-list-item"><a href="https://it.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Vaglio" title="Wikipedia:Vaglio – Italian" lang="it" hreflang="it" data-title="Wikipedia:Vaglio" data-language-autonym="Italiano" data-language-local-name="Italian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Italiano</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-he mw-list-item"><a href="https://he.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D7%A7%D7%98%D7%92%D7%95%D7%A8%D7%99%D7%94:%D7%95%D7%99%D7%A7%D7%99%D7%A4%D7%93%D7%99%D7%94:_%D7%91%D7%99%D7%A7%D7%95%D7%A8%D7%AA_%D7%A2%D7%9E%D7%99%D7%AA%D7%99%D7%9D" title="קטגוריה:ויקיפדיה: ביקורת עמיתים – Hebrew" lang="he" hreflang="he" data-title="קטגוריה:ויקיפדיה: ביקורת עמיתים" data-language-autonym="עברית" data-language-local-name="Hebrew" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>עברית</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-lv mw-list-item"><a href="https://lv.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vikip%C4%93dija:Recenzijas" title="Vikipēdija:Recenzijas – Latvian" lang="lv" hreflang="lv" data-title="Vikipēdija:Recenzijas" data-language-autonym="Latviešu" data-language-local-name="Latvian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Latviešu</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-hu mw-list-item"><a href="https://hu.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikip%C3%A9dia:Refer%C3%A1l%C3%A1s" title="Wikipédia:Referálás – Hungarian" lang="hu" hreflang="hu" data-title="Wikipédia:Referálás" data-language-autonym="Magyar" data-language-local-name="Hungarian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Magyar</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-mk mw-list-item"><a href="https://mk.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%92%D0%B8%D0%BA%D0%B8%D0%BF%D0%B5%D0%B4%D0%B8%D1%98%D0%B0:%D0%A0%D0%B5%D1%86%D0%B5%D0%BD%D0%B7%D0%B8%D1%98%D0%B0" title="Википедија:Рецензија – Macedonian" lang="mk" hreflang="mk" data-title="Википедија:Рецензија" data-language-autonym="Македонски" data-language-local-name="Macedonian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Македонски</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ms mw-list-item"><a href="https://ms.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Ulasan_sebaya" title="Wikipedia:Ulasan sebaya – Malay" lang="ms" hreflang="ms" data-title="Wikipedia:Ulasan sebaya" data-language-autonym="Bahasa Melayu" data-language-local-name="Malay" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Bahasa Melayu</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-nl mw-list-item"><a href="https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Review" title="Wikipedia:Review – Dutch" lang="nl" hreflang="nl" data-title="Wikipedia:Review" data-language-autonym="Nederlands" data-language-local-name="Dutch" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Nederlands</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ja mw-list-item"><a href="https://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:%E6%9F%BB%E8%AA%AD%E4%BE%9D%E9%A0%BC" title="Wikipedia:査読依頼 – Japanese" lang="ja" hreflang="ja" data-title="Wikipedia:査読依頼" data-language-autonym="日本語" data-language-local-name="Japanese" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>日本語</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-pl mw-list-item"><a href="https://pl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Warsztat_PANDA" title="Wikipedia:Warsztat PANDA – Polish" lang="pl" hreflang="pl" data-title="Wikipedia:Warsztat PANDA" data-language-autonym="Polski" data-language-local-name="Polish" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Polski</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-pt mw-list-item"><a href="https://pt.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikip%C3%A9dia:Processo_de_revis%C3%A3o" title="Wikipédia:Processo de revisão – Portuguese" lang="pt" hreflang="pt" data-title="Wikipédia:Processo de revisão" data-language-autonym="Português" data-language-local-name="Portuguese" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Português</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ro mw-list-item"><a href="https://ro.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Recenzie" title="Wikipedia:Recenzie – Romanian" lang="ro" hreflang="ro" data-title="Wikipedia:Recenzie" data-language-autonym="Română" data-language-local-name="Romanian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Română</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-ru mw-list-item"><a href="https://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%9F%D1%80%D0%BE%D0%B5%D0%BA%D1%82:%D0%A0%D0%B5%D1%86%D0%B5%D0%BD%D0%B7%D0%B8%D1%80%D0%BE%D0%B2%D0%B0%D0%BD%D0%B8%D0%B5" title="Проект:Рецензирование – Russian" lang="ru" hreflang="ru" data-title="Проект:Рецензирование" data-language-autonym="Русский" data-language-local-name="Russian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Русский</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-stq mw-list-item"><a href="https://stq.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Review" title="Wikipedia:Review – Saterland Frisian" lang="stq" hreflang="stq" data-title="Wikipedia:Review" data-language-autonym="Seeltersk" data-language-local-name="Saterland Frisian" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Seeltersk</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-fi mw-list-item"><a href="https://fi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Vertaisarviointi" title="Wikipedia:Vertaisarviointi – Finnish" lang="fi" hreflang="fi" data-title="Wikipedia:Vertaisarviointi" data-language-autonym="Suomi" data-language-local-name="Finnish" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Suomi</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-sv mw-list-item"><a href="https://sv.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Artikelgranskningar" title="Wikipedia:Artikelgranskningar – Swedish" lang="sv" hreflang="sv" data-title="Wikipedia:Artikelgranskningar" data-language-autonym="Svenska" data-language-local-name="Swedish" class="interlanguage-link-target"><span>Svenska</span></a></li><li class="interlanguage-link interwiki-tt mw-list-item"><a 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srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/74/Ambox_warning_yellow.svg/60px-Ambox_warning_yellow.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/7/74/Ambox_warning_yellow.svg/80px-Ambox_warning_yellow.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="386" data-file-height="334"/></span></span></td><td class="mbox-text" style="text-align: left;">The peer review list on this page is <b>automatically generated:</b> please follow the steps on the <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/guidelines" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/guidelines">instructions page</a> to add or remove a review.</td></tr></tbody></table> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Arts" data-mw-thread-id="h-Arts-20241009141400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Arts-20241009141400"></span>Arts<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Arts-20241009141400"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=1" title="Edit section: Arts"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="The_Language_of_Injury" data-mw-thread-id="h-The_Language_of_Injury-Arts-20250216232600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-The_Language_of_Injury-Arts-20250216232600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Language_of_Injury/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/The Language of Injury/archive1">The Language of Injury</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-The_Language_of_Injury-Arts-20250216232600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Language_of_Injury/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: The Language of Injury"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/The_Language_of_Injury" title="The Language of Injury"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Chchcheckit-20250216232600-The_Language_of_Injury"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/The_Language_of_Injury" title="Special:EditPage/The Language of Injury">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Language_of_Injury&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/The_Language_of_Injury" title="Special:PageHistory/The Language of Injury">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:The_Language_of_Injury" title="Talk:The Language of Injury"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:The_Language_of_Injury" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:The Language of Injury">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:The_Language_of_Injury" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:The Language of Injury">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=The_Language_of_Injury&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Language_of_Injury/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because...GA attempt, to eventually lead to a albums good topic (3). Look out for typos, errors, things worded wrong or if i misunderstood the sentiments of things. or other stuff I could do better with. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Chchcheckit" title="User:Chchcheckit">Chchcheckit</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Chchcheckit" title="User talk:Chchcheckit">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Chchcheckit-20250216232600-The_Language_of_Injury" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:26, 16 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Chchcheckit-20250216232600-The_Language_of_Injury"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Chchcheckit-20250216232600-The_Language_of_Injury"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_by_Johnson524" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_by_Johnson524-The_Language_of_Injury-20250217201200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_by_Johnson524-The_Language_of_Injury-20250217201200"></span>Comments by Johnson524<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_by_Johnson524-The_Language_of_Injury-20250217201200"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Language_of_Injury/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments by Johnson524"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Johnson524-20250217201200-Comments_by_Johnson524"></span>Hello! I peer reviewed your page the best I could, but overall, the page looks to be in pretty good shape! I did some minor MOS clean-up around the page: including but not limited to MOS:CURLY, removing double spaces, removing extraneous "|language=en" parameters, and changing one instance of non-past tense wording. None of these actually affect the content of the article, but may have been things you could get tagged on in a GA review. In terms of changes to the article, I've listed them below. By the way, while there is no quid pro quo on peer reviews, if you have any spare time I'd really appreciate if you could take a look at my peer review for the page <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Senior_assassin/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Senior assassin/archive1">Senior assassin</a>, but its TOTALLY fine if not 🙂 Good luck on achieving good topic! <a href="/wiki/User:Johnson524" title="User:Johnson524"><b><span style="color:orange;">Johnson</span></b></a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Johnson524" title="User talk:Johnson524"><b><span style="color:blue;">524</span></b></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Johnson524-20250217201200-Comments_by_Johnson524" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:12, 17 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Johnson524-20250217201200-Comments_by_Johnson524"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Johnson524-20250217201200-Comments_by_Johnson524"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Suggestions" data-mw-thread-id="h-Suggestions-Comments_by_Johnson524"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Suggestions-Comments_by_Johnson524"></span>Suggestions<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Suggestions-Comments_by_Johnson524"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Language_of_Injury/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Suggestions"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li>You use the phrase "<i>The Language of Injury</i>" a lot, when "the album" or "the studio album" might read a little better.</li> <li>While "Music, writing and recording" encompasses the information in the section well, its really long, and could be broken into further sections. The first paragraph could be separated to "Composition", consisting mainly of genre information, and the other two paragraphs could be "Writing and recording", or something like that.</li> <li>The last paragraph of the first section is not a very pleasant read largely due to the one and two word long quotes. Could some of these be unquoted or placed in a way where they don't follow behind each other?</li> <li><span class="example deprecated-content example-bad" style="font-family: Georgia, 'DejaVu Serif', serif; color: var(--color-content-removed, #8B0000);">"release party"</span> probably would be better off without quotes</li> <li>Is the "f" in ArcTanGent Festival capitalised? I did so when doing my MOS clean-up for consistency, but I wanted to know what you thought?</li> <li>Is there a citation that can be put in the track listing section?</li></ul> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Meg_White" data-mw-thread-id="h-Meg_White-Arts-20250213035100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Meg_White-Arts-20250213035100"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Meg_White/archive2" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Meg White/archive2">Meg White</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Meg_White-Arts-20250213035100"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Meg_White/archive2&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Meg White"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Meg_White" title="Meg White"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Watagwaan-20250213035100-Meg_White"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Meg_White" title="Special:EditPage/Meg White">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meg_White&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Meg_White" title="Special:PageHistory/Meg White">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Meg_White" title="Talk:Meg White"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Meg_White" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Meg White">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Meg_White" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Meg White">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Meg_White&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Meg_White/archive2&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Meg_White/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Meg White/archive1"><b>Previous peer review</b></a></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because since its previous one in 2014, it has been expanded drastically, many things have happened and since been added to the article with the best of my ability. I tried to remain as objective and informative as I could whilst providing information that I believed was useful/important to the article. It would be cool to get feedback! </p><p>Thank you, <a href="/wiki/User:Watagwaan" title="User:Watagwaan">Watagwaan</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Watagwaan" title="User talk:Watagwaan">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Watagwaan-20250213035100-Meg_White" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:51, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Watagwaan-20250213035100-Meg_White"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Watagwaan-20250213035100-Meg_White"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Tamang_Panahon" data-mw-thread-id="h-Tamang_Panahon-Arts-20250205105600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Tamang_Panahon-Arts-20250205105600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tamang_Panahon/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Tamang Panahon/archive1">Tamang Panahon</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Tamang_Panahon-Arts-20250205105600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tamang_Panahon/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Tamang Panahon"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Tamang_Panahon" title="Tamang Panahon"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Royiswariii-20250205105600-Tamang_Panahon"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Tamang_Panahon" title="Special:EditPage/Tamang Panahon">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tamang_Panahon&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Tamang_Panahon" title="Special:PageHistory/Tamang Panahon">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Tamang_Panahon" title="Talk:Tamang Panahon"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Tamang_Panahon" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Tamang Panahon">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tamang_Panahon" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tamang Panahon">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tamang_Panahon&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tamang_Panahon/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I need this to nominate this on <b>FAC</b>. I'd like to nominate this before march or april since the anniversary of the this episode are on October 24, 2015. Also, this is have a accolades from Guinness World Records for the most used hashtag for 24 hours. </p><p>Thanks, <span style="border-radius:7px;background:#800080;padding:4px 6px 4px 6px;color:white;"><a href="/wiki/User:Royiswariii" title="User:Royiswariii"><span style="color:white;">ROY is WAR</span></a></span> <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Royiswariii" title="User talk:Royiswariii"><i><b>Talk!</b></i></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Royiswariii-20250205105600-Tamang_Panahon" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">10:56, 5 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Royiswariii-20250205105600-Tamang_Panahon"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Royiswariii-20250205105600-Tamang_Panahon"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="One_Direction" data-mw-thread-id="h-One_Direction-Arts"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-One_Direction-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/One_Direction/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/One Direction/archive1">One Direction</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-One_Direction-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/One_Direction" title="One Direction"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/One_Direction" title="Special:EditPage/One Direction">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=One_Direction&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/One_Direction" title="Special:PageHistory/One Direction">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:One_Direction" title="Talk:One Direction"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:One_Direction" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:One Direction">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:One_Direction" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:One Direction">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=One_Direction&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/One_Direction/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/One_Direction/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/One Direction/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 2 February 2025, 16:05 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 11 February 2025, 12:29 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Forest_404" data-mw-thread-id="h-Forest_404-Arts-20250202143400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Forest_404-Arts-20250202143400"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Forest_404/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Forest 404/archive1">Forest 404</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Forest_404-Arts-20250202143400"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Forest_404/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Forest 404"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Forest_404" title="Forest 404"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-TipsyElephant-20250202143400-Forest_404"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Forest_404" title="Special:EditPage/Forest 404">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Forest_404&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Forest_404" title="Special:PageHistory/Forest 404">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Forest_404" title="Talk:Forest 404"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Forest_404" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Forest 404">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Forest_404" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Forest 404">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Forest_404&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Forest_404/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I have some general questions about the article that I'd like input on. </p> <ol><li>In the synopsis, is the use of quotations for in-universe terminology appropriate? Should I be using the emphasis template instead? Or should I avoid in-universe terminology altogether and simply paraphrase?</li> <li>In the third paragraph of the Production section I've paraphrased the <i>Mississippi Valley Conservancy</i> source saying "<style data-mw-deduplicate="TemplateStyles:r1248585704">@media screen{html.skin-theme-clientpref-night .mw-parser-output .inline-quote-talk{color:#00B785}}@media screen and (prefers-color-scheme:dark){html.skin-theme-clientpref-os .mw-parser-output .inline-quote-talk{color:#00B785}}.mw-parser-output .inline-quote-talk{font-family:Georgia,"DejaVu Serif",serif;color:#008560;quotes:none}.mw-parser-output .inline-quote-talk-italic{font-family:inherit;font-style:italic}.mw-parser-output .inline-quote-talk-marks{quotes:"\"""\""}</style><q class="inline-quote-talk">The all-female cast included LGBT people and people of color, which is uncommon in media related to climate change.</q>" Is this a fact or opinion, and is it appropriate to state it as a fact in Wikipedia's voice?</li> <li>In the episode table, should I include the different broadcast dates in addition to the original podcast release dates? I find that citing sources in a table tends to get messy. Should I provide inline citations for the data in the table or can I get away with not citing sources per <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:MINREF" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:MINREF">WP:MINREF</a>? If I listen to each episode and provide a short summary do I need to cite the episode as a primary reference for each summary?</li> <li>Does the prose of the reception section flow well? Is my paraphrasing okay or did I embellish or editorialize too much?</li> <li>Is there a better word or phrase for the heading "Academic outcomes"?</li> <li>Rather than adding inline citations after each sentence I've opted to simply cite the relevant sources at the end of each paragraph (with the exception of the reception section). Is this appropriate and does it adequately maintain <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:INTEGRITY" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:INTEGRITY">WP:INTEGRITY</a>?</li></ol> <p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:TipsyElephant" title="User:TipsyElephant">TipsyElephant</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:TipsyElephant" title="User talk:TipsyElephant">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-TipsyElephant-20250202143400-Forest_404" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:34, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-TipsyElephant-20250202143400-Forest_404"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-TipsyElephant-20250202143400-Forest_404"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Napoleon_Dynamite" data-mw-thread-id="h-Napoleon_Dynamite-Arts-20250131164000"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Napoleon_Dynamite-Arts-20250131164000"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Napoleon_Dynamite/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Napoleon Dynamite/archive1">Napoleon Dynamite</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Napoleon_Dynamite-Arts-20250131164000"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Napoleon_Dynamite/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Napoleon Dynamite"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Napoleon Dynamite"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-The_lorax-20250131164000-Napoleon_Dynamite"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Special:EditPage/Napoleon Dynamite">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Napoleon_Dynamite&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Special:PageHistory/Napoleon Dynamite">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Talk:Napoleon Dynamite"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Napoleon Dynamite">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Napoleon_Dynamite" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Napoleon Dynamite">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Napoleon_Dynamite&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Napoleon_Dynamite/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because it looks pretty close to Good Article status. I wanted someone to give it some constructive feedback. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:The_lorax" title="User:The lorax">The lorax</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:The_lorax" title="User talk:The lorax">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-The_lorax-20250131164000-Napoleon_Dynamite" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:40, 31 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-The_lorax-20250131164000-Napoleon_Dynamite"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-The_lorax-20250131164000-Napoleon_Dynamite"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-RFNirmala-20250202111500-The_lorax-20250131164000"></span>Hi @<a href="/wiki/User:The_lorax" title="User:The lorax">The lorax</a>! Some points after a quick read. Ping me if you'd like to say anything: <ul><li>Take note of <a href="/wiki/MOS:SEASON" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:SEASON">MOS:SEASON</a> in the lead. When in 2003 did filming take place? Did <i>the entirety of filming</i> only take place in July 2003?</li> <li>Some parts in "Filming and setting" seem to depend on quotes, such as one paragraph on the film being autobiographical. You can paraphrase, add context to the quotes (how does Hess's family background influence the film being autobiographical?) or add info that describe production with minimal use of quotes.</li> <li>Not sure if elaborating "Preston, in southeastern Idaho, located near the Utah border" is necessary.</li> <li>Check the wording in "relied on the generosity" of Preston locals.</li> <li>I recommend checking <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:CRS" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:CRS">WP:CRS</a>, if there are other reviews accessible. I'm currently checking on alternatives for the four <i>Entertainment Weekly</i> critic ratings.</li> <li>Best if there are sources for "Awards"</li></ul></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/User:RFNirmala" title="User:RFNirmala">RFNirmala</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:RFNirmala" title="User talk:RFNirmala">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-RFNirmala-20250202111500-The_lorax-20250131164000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:15, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-RFNirmala-20250202111500-The_lorax-20250131164000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-RFNirmala-20250202111500-The_lorax-20250131164000"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading 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role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-GamerPro64-20250128065300-The_Giant_Spider_Invasion"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_by_Jaguarnik" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-The_Giant_Spider_Invasion-20250129191600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-The_Giant_Spider_Invasion-20250129191600"></span>Comments by Jaguarnik<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-The_Giant_Spider_Invasion-20250129191600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments by Jaguarnik"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p>Good articles need to pass 6 criteria (<a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:GACR" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:GACR">WP:GACR</a>), so I'll comment based on those 6 criteria. </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Well-written" data-mw-thread-id="h-Well-written-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Well-written-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span>Well-written<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Well-written-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Well-written"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p>Consider making the lead a bit longer - the lead should be a good summary of the article; the lead is too short while also having information that isn't necessary for the lead ("The script was written by having Rebane locking Easton in a cabin to on the incentive of being fed." - this isn't necessary, just write "The script was written by Easton".) </p> <ul><li>Some parts feel awkwardly written and could be rephrased. For example, <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Davey Perkins, a reporter, visits Sheriff Jones for a story, but the Sheriff says things are quiet.</q> and <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Davey and Terry drive to a local junkyard where they engage in a romantic encounter.</q> The use of engage here sounds odd, and since they're dating, is it relevant that they have a romantic encounter? <s>This sentence as well <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Ev, heavily intoxicated, swats at spiders Dan dismisses as hallucinations.</q> should probably have "that" between "spiders" and "Dan".</s> In general, try reading it out loud to see if it sounds good.</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Originally conceived as an idea from Richard Huff, he and actor Robert Easton, a friend of Rebane, were tasked to write the script.</q> Should probably be "an idea <i>by</i> Richard Huff. Be careful also with phrasing, because it makes it seem as though "he and actor Robert Easton" were originally conceived as an idea.</li></ul> <p><s>*<link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Gross was also critical on the film's script</q> switch "on" for "of"</s> </p> <ul><li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Michael Weldon, in The Psychotronic Encyclopedia of Film, while criticizing the special effects and comparing them negatively to The Giant Claw, he considered the movie to be "Lots of laughs".</q> Remove "he" between "Claw," and "considered";<s> "considered the movie to be "lots of laughs"" doesn't make sense and can be rephrased as "considered the movie to be funny".</s></li></ul> <p><s>*<link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">thought that the unintentional laughs from the film worn thin quickly.</q> - wore</s> </p> <ul><li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Regarding the episode, Director Bill Rebane thought it was strange, but overall accepted it due to its popularity.</q> - although we know that Rebane is the film's director, I would specify here just in case, because it implies that Rebane is the episode director.</li></ul> <p><s>*<link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">During the episode, as Pearl, Brain Guy, and Bobo were out camping, they inadvertently unleash</q> - "while Pearl, Brain Guy, and Bobo are out camping"</s> </p><p>In case I missed something, consider also looking at <a href="/wiki/MOS:FILM" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:FILM">MOS:FILM</a> for more advice for the article. </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Verifiable" data-mw-thread-id="h-Verifiable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Verifiable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span>Verifiable<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Verifiable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-4" title="Edit section: Verifiable"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p>Citations look fine, I won't go and check them all individually but each statement has a citation and I don't see any problematic sources. I also checked earwig and it doesn't flag any issues. </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Neutral" data-mw-thread-id="h-Neutral-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Neutral-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span>Neutral<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Neutral-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-5" title="Edit section: Neutral"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p>No problems as far as I can see </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Stable" data-mw-thread-id="h-Stable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Stable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span>Stable<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Stable-Comments_by_Jaguarnik"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-6" title="Edit section: Stable"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p>No edit wars as far as I can see </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Media" data-mw-thread-id="h-Media-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-20250129191600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Media-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-20250129191600"></span>Media<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Media-Comments_by_Jaguarnik-20250129191600"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/The_Giant_Spider_Invasion/archive1&action=edit&section=T-7" title="Edit section: Media"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jaguarnik-20250129191600-Media"></span>All three images are licensed for usage. </p><p>That's my advice for good article, hope your nomination succeeds. <a href="/wiki/User:Jaguarnik" title="User:Jaguarnik">Jaguarnik</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jaguarnik" title="User talk:Jaguarnik">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jaguarnik-20250129191600-Media" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:16, 29 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jaguarnik-20250129191600-Media"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jaguarnik-20250129191600-Media"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-RFNirmala-20250204021300-Jaguarnik-20250129191600"></span>Hi @<a href="/wiki/User:Jaguarnik" title="User:Jaguarnik">Jaguarnik</a> and @<a href="/wiki/User:GamerPro64" class="mw-redirect" title="User:GamerPro64">GamerPro64</a>, I did some of the points on copyediting. Did "spiders that Dan", "critical on the film", "while Pearl, Brain Guy...", "lots of laughs", "wore thin quickly", which you can strikethrough. <a href="/wiki/User:RFNirmala" title="User:RFNirmala">RFNirmala</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:RFNirmala" title="User talk:RFNirmala">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-RFNirmala-20250204021300-Jaguarnik-20250129191600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:13, 4 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-RFNirmala-20250204021300-Jaguarnik-20250129191600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-RFNirmala-20250204021300-Jaguarnik-20250129191600"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 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title="Special:PageHistory/Daniel in the Lions' Den (Rubens)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Daniel_in_the_Lions%27_Den_(Rubens)" title="Talk:Daniel in the Lions' Den (Rubens)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Daniel_in_the_Lions%27_Den_(Rubens)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Daniel in the Lions' Den (Rubens)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Daniel_in_the_Lions%27_Den_(Rubens)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Daniel in the Lions' Den (Rubens)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Daniel_in_the_Lions%27_Den_(Rubens)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Daniel_in_the_Lions%27_Den_(Rubens)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because... I plan to propose as FA and need some suggestion Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Agus_Damanik" title="User:Agus Damanik">Agus Damanik</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Agus_Damanik" title="User talk:Agus Damanik">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500-Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:15, 27 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500-Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500-Daniel_in_the_Lions'_Den_(Rubens)"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500"></span>Structurally, the article is in good shape. I found one major issue while I was reading, so I tagged it in the article—the source doesn't support the sentence it's attached to, and the tone is dramatic rather than encyclopedic. I spot checked a few more sources and nothing immediately stood out, but every source needs to line up perfectly with the information it supports. I don't see any mention in the GA review that the content of any sources was checked. If that's the case, it would mean that the article was never checked for original research or copyright violations. So that will need to be checked before any FAC nomination. Most of the GA review related to wikilinks and minor style changes, which are not part of the requirements for good articles. Courtesy ping for reviewer <a href="/wiki/User:Amitchell125" title="User:Amitchell125">Amitchell125</a> since we're discussing the review.<div class="paragraphbreak" style="margin-top:0.5em"></div>I've made a few other minor copyedits myself. If you want to take it to FA, it needs to be a comprehensive overview of the sourcing, so I did a quick search to see if I could find more. I came up with an older one: Farina, Pasquale. <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://archive.org/details/danielinlionsden00fari/">Daniel in the lions' den</a>. 1924. I haven't read it in detail, but it might be helpful. If you haven't, I also suggest going into <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:TWL" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:TWL">the Wikipedia Library</a> and checking every relevant collection one at a time. I've also added this peer review to <a href="/wiki/Template:FAC_peer_review_sidebar" title="Template:FAC peer review sidebar">Template:FAC peer review sidebar</a> so it can get more feedback. <a href="/wiki/User:Thebiguglyalien" title="User:Thebiguglyalien"><span style="color:#324717">The</span><span style="color:#45631f">big</span><span style="color:#547826">ugly</span><span style="color:#68942f">alien</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Thebiguglyalien" title="User talk:Thebiguglyalien"><span style="color:sienna">talk</span></a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:14, 8 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400-Agus_Damanik-20250127041500"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Agus_Damanik-20250210084000-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400"></span>Got another source to explain it. The one you give me so hard to navigate <a href="/wiki/User:Agus_Damanik" title="User:Agus Damanik">Agus Damanik</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Agus_Damanik" title="User talk:Agus Damanik">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Agus_Damanik-20250210084000-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:40, 10 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Agus_Damanik-20250210084000-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Agus_Damanik-20250210084000-Thebiguglyalien-20250208011400"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Noriko_Takaya" data-mw-thread-id="h-Noriko_Takaya-Arts-20250119041700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Noriko_Takaya-Arts-20250119041700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Noriko_Takaya/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Noriko Takaya/archive1">Noriko Takaya</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Noriko_Takaya-Arts-20250119041700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Noriko_Takaya/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Noriko Takaya"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Noriko_Takaya" title="Noriko Takaya"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z._Patterson-20250119041700-Noriko_Takaya"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Noriko_Takaya" title="Special:EditPage/Noriko Takaya">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Noriko_Takaya&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Noriko_Takaya" title="Special:PageHistory/Noriko Takaya">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Noriko_Takaya" title="Talk:Noriko Takaya"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Noriko_Takaya" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Noriko Takaya">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Noriko_Takaya" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Noriko Takaya">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Noriko_Takaya&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Noriko_Takaya/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I have listed this article for peer review because I would like to know if the entire article meets the <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_criteria" title="Wikipedia:Good article criteria">good article criteria</a>. As of January 5, 2025, it was graded as a <a href="/wiki/Category:B-Class_anime_and_manga_articles" title="Category:B-Class anime and manga articles">B-Class article</a>, but the article significantly changed since then. I am wondering if there are errors, other than <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Linter" title="Wikipedia:Linter">lint errors</a>, we need to address before this can become a good article. </p><p>Thank you, <a href="/wiki/User:Z._Patterson" title="User:Z. Patterson">Z. Patterson</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z._Patterson" title="User talk:Z. Patterson">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z._Patterson-20250119041700-Noriko_Takaya" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:17, 19 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z._Patterson-20250119041700-Noriko_Takaya"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z._Patterson-20250119041700-Noriko_Takaya"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Aoba47" data-mw-thread-id="h-Aoba47-Noriko_Takaya-20250126031400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Aoba47-Noriko_Takaya-20250126031400"></span>Aoba47<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Aoba47-Noriko_Takaya-20250126031400"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Noriko_Takaya/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Aoba47"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Aoba47-20250126031400-Aoba47"></span>Apologies in advance as I will not be able to do a full review. I hope that these comments are helpful regardless: </p> <ul><li>I would avoid having citations in the lead for this type of article. The lead should provide an overview of the article, where everything is more fully discussed and cited, and while other types of articles benefit from having citations in the lead, whether it be to cite contested or controversial information or a quote or another purpose, I do not really see a need for this for fictional characters.</li> <li>I also think the citations in the infobox are not fully necessary as this information should be present and cited in the article.</li> <li>Some of the parameters in the infobox seem unnecessary to me. Things like hair and eye colors are not needed, and while I get that <a href="/wiki/Blood_type_personality_theory" title="Blood type personality theory">blood type</a> is a big deal in Japan, it is not something that is usually included in a infobox for a fictional character.</li> <li>I would put the Japanese name in a footnote, as it is done for articles like <a href="/wiki/Jill_Valentine" title="Jill Valentine">Jill Valentine</a>, as it does take up quite a bit of space and is not fully necessary for readers. I think readers who are interested in this can access this via the endnote, and it can keep the prose moving from point to point better, at least in my opinion.</li> <li>I do not think it is necessary to include the original Japanese names for things such as the Okinawa Girls' Space Pilot High School, big sister, space monster, and Gainax Pose, as they do not really add much for an English reader. They also seem a tad random.</li> <li>The article currently uses two pieces of non-free media, with <a href="/wiki/File:Noriko_Takaya_holding_a_jump_rope.jpg" title="File:Noriko Takaya holding a jump rope.jpg">File:Noriko Takaya holding a jump rope.jpg</a> and <a href="/wiki/File:GunbusterSD.png" title="File:GunbusterSD.png">File:GunbusterSD.png</a>. I would be mindful of non-free media usage, as it is encouraged to keep that to a minimal. While the purpose for the infobox image is clear, I am not entirely sure about the purpose for the second image, and that should be more clearly defined to justify its inclusion.</li> <li>Make sure that items in the lead are also linked in the article on their first appearance, as the lead and the article are treated separately for this purpose. For instance, <a href="/wiki/Gainax" title="Gainax">Gainax</a> is not linked in the first instance in the article. On a side note, I would clarify in the prose that Gainax is the name of a studio, as I was uncertain about this when I first read it.</li> <li>The "Characterization and themes" section has interesting information and citations, but it reads more like an essay than anything from Wikipedia. A lot of this information is presented in Wikipedia's voice instead of being more clearly attributed to the authors of the sources. Also, when discussing individuals like <a href="/wiki/Tamaki_Sait%C5%8D" title="Tamaki Saitō">Tamaki Saitō</a> and <a href="/wiki/Hiroki_Azuma" title="Hiroki Azuma">Hiroki Azuma</a>, there should be a short descriptive phrase to clearly identify who they are. I do not the inclusion of the year (2011) after their names is particularly helpful or clear so I would remove that.</li> <li>Why is there not a reception section? The article should discuss how critics responded to the character.</li> <li>Citations in Japanese will need to have an English translation.</li> <li>I know that editors have different opinions on this, but I would avoid using theses, as in my opinion, the level of editorial oversight varies so wildly. Theses and dissertations are generally not considered reliable according to <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Scholarship" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:Scholarship">WP:SCHOLARSHIP</a>.</li></ul> <p>I hope these comments are helpful. Based on my very quick look at the article, I do think that it would need more work prior to a GAN review. That being said, since a GAN request has already been opened, this peer review should be closed, as according to <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Guidelines" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Guidelines">the guidelines</a>, a peer review should not be active at the same time as a GA nomination. Best of luck with your work on the article. <a href="/wiki/User:Aoba47" title="User:Aoba47">Aoba47</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Aoba47" title="User talk:Aoba47">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Aoba47-20250126031400-Aoba47" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:14, 26 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Aoba47-20250126031400-Aoba47"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Aoba47-20250126031400-Aoba47"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z._Patterson-20250126211700-Aoba47-20250126031400"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Aoba47" title="User:Aoba47">Aoba47</a>:</span> I understand. Thank you. I plan to make the changes you suggested. <a href="/wiki/User:Z._Patterson" title="User:Z. Patterson">Z. Patterson</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z._Patterson" title="User talk:Z. Patterson">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z._Patterson-20250126211700-Aoba47-20250126031400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:17, 26 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z._Patterson-20250126211700-Aoba47-20250126031400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z._Patterson-20250126211700-Aoba47-20250126031400"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Aoba47-20250202003700-Z._Patterson-20250126211700"></span>Thank you for the response, but as I have already said above, you should close this peer review as it should not be active while a GAN is open. <a href="/wiki/User:Aoba47" title="User:Aoba47">Aoba47</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Aoba47" title="User talk:Aoba47">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Aoba47-20250202003700-Z._Patterson-20250126211700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:37, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Aoba47-20250202003700-Z._Patterson-20250126211700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Aoba47-20250202003700-Z._Patterson-20250126211700"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)-Arts"><span id="Discovery_.28Daft_Punk_album.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Discovery (Daft Punk album)/archive1">Discovery (Daft Punk album)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Discovery (Daft Punk album)"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Special:EditPage/Discovery (Daft Punk album)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Special:PageHistory/Discovery (Daft Punk album)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Talk:Discovery (Daft Punk album)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Discovery (Daft Punk album)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Discovery (Daft Punk album)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. 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Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Steven_Universe/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Steven Universe/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 1 January 2025, 20:28 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 8 January 2025, 03:35 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)-Arts"><span id="Not_in_Love_.28Crystal_Castles_song.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)/archive1">Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Special:EditPage/Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Special:PageHistory/Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Talk:Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Not_in_Love_(Crystal_Castles_song)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Not in Love (Crystal Castles song)/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 23 December 2024, 14:11 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 7 February 2025, 22:35 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer" data-mw-thread-id="h-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer-Arts-20241216163400"><span id="Maxwell.27s_Silver_Hammer"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer-Arts-20241216163400"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Maxwell's Silver Hammer/archive1">Maxwell's Silver Hammer</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer-Arts-20241216163400"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Maxwell's Silver Hammer"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Maxwell's Silver Hammer"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-BernaBotto-20241216163400-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Special:EditPage/Maxwell's Silver Hammer">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Special:PageHistory/Maxwell's Silver Hammer">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Talk:Maxwell's Silver Hammer"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Maxwell's Silver Hammer">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Maxwell's Silver Hammer">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Maxwell%27s_Silver_Hammer/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> Hey, I'm working on this article. I made a FAC but it failed, so I made all the corrections and I'm here to look for any other issues it might have. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:BernaBotto" title="User:BernaBotto">BernaBotto</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:BernaBotto" title="User talk:BernaBotto">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-BernaBotto-20241216163400-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:34, 16 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-BernaBotto-20241216163400-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-BernaBotto-20241216163400-Maxwell's_Silver_Hammer"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600-BernaBotto-20241216163400"></span>Hey there!</dd> <dd>I read through the article and it is a great article in my opinion, however I believe some more citations in the "Commentary by band members" could be used to improve and add more credibility to the article. Happy holidays! <a href="/wiki/User:Sophisticatedevening" title="User:Sophisticatedevening">Sophisticatedevening</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Sophisticatedevening" title="User talk:Sophisticatedevening">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600-BernaBotto-20241216163400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:06, 19 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600-BernaBotto-20241216163400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600-BernaBotto-20241216163400"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-BernaBotto-20241220231500-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Sophisticatedevening" title="User:Sophisticatedevening">Sophisticatedevening</a>:</span> Happy holidays! I made this request before my review been reversed, so the article is probably fine rn. <a href="/wiki/User:BernaBotto" title="User:BernaBotto">BernaBotto</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:BernaBotto" title="User talk:BernaBotto">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-BernaBotto-20241220231500-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:15, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-BernaBotto-20241220231500-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-BernaBotto-20241220231500-Sophisticatedevening-20241219200600"></span></dd></dl></dd> <dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Leafy46-20241221163800-BernaBotto-20241216163400"></span>Just a few things I immediately spotted in this article (some of which also pertaining to your GA nom of "<a href="/wiki/Her_Majesty_(song)" title="Her Majesty (song)">Her Majesty</a>"): <ul><li>A lot of <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:OVERQUOTE" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:OVERQUOTE">WP:OVERQUOTE</a>: the "Retrospective assessments and legacy" section is almost entirely made up of quotes by other authors, with little prose connecting the three together. Same with the "contemporary reviews" section; see <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:RECEPTION" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:RECEPTION">WP:RECEPTION</a> for some tips on improving these sections</li> <li>There is some information in the lead not included in the article's body, which goes against <a href="/wiki/MOS:INTRO" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:INTRO">MOS:INTRO</a> --- see <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LEADDD" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LEADDD">WP:LEADDD</a> <ul><li>Also check for <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LEADCITE" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LEADCITE">WP:LEADCITE</a>. Not a requirement, but generally one should be able to do away with citations in article leads altogether if the information there is truly a summary of the rest of the article</li></ul></li> <li>No composition or lyrics section, a must in any song article <ul><li>No release section, either. This is also a necessity, but I understand that a song like this may not warrant a dedicated section and could probably be merged into the background</li></ul></li> <li>As has been mentioned to you previously, the Beatles Bible is not a reliable source per <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:SPS" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:SPS">WP:SPS</a></li> <li>I also see some facts upon a quick Google search which are not included in the article: for instance, <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://www.rollingstone.com/music/music-news/paul-mccartneys-maxwells-silver-hammer-lyrics-auction-1333215/">Rolling Stone</a> reported on the auctioning of the song's original handwritten lyrics, something which may or may not be trivia; discretion is necessary, but it certainly shows that the article is not yet comprehensive</li></ul></dd> <dd>These are just some of the things you should pay attention to if you plan to continue working through this article. Good luck, and happy holidays! <a href="/wiki/User:Leafy46" title="User:Leafy46">Leafy46</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Leafy46" title="User talk:Leafy46">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Leafy46-20241221163800-BernaBotto-20241216163400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:38, 21 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Leafy46-20241221163800-BernaBotto-20241216163400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Leafy46-20241221163800-BernaBotto-20241216163400"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="I_Feel_It_Coming" data-mw-thread-id="h-I_Feel_It_Coming-Arts-20241210072700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-I_Feel_It_Coming-Arts-20241210072700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/I_Feel_It_Coming/archive2" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/I Feel It Coming/archive2">I Feel It Coming</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-I_Feel_It_Coming-Arts-20241210072700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/I_Feel_It_Coming/archive2&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: I Feel It Coming"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/I_Feel_It_Coming" title="I Feel It Coming"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AskeeaeWiki-20241210072700-I_Feel_It_Coming"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/I_Feel_It_Coming" title="Special:EditPage/I Feel It Coming">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=I_Feel_It_Coming&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/I_Feel_It_Coming" title="Special:PageHistory/I Feel It Coming">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:I_Feel_It_Coming" title="Talk:I Feel It Coming"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:I_Feel_It_Coming" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:I Feel It Coming">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:I_Feel_It_Coming" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:I Feel It Coming">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=I_Feel_It_Coming&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/I_Feel_It_Coming/archive2&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/I_Feel_It_Coming/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/I Feel It Coming/archive1"><b>Previous peer review</b></a></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because, this is the second attempt for a Peer Review. I took this to FAC back in July, but it was rejected due to a lack of thorough research. However, I think there are more issues to weed out regarding this. I want this article to be my magnum opus on Wikipedia, like a final project, and making the first Featured article related to the Weeknd on Wikipedia would be an honor. Any help would be so appreciated, whether it be grammar, sources, I don't know how else I cna add sources without it seeming biased towards the Weeknd. </p><p>Thanks, <span style="color:brown;"><a href="/wiki/User:AskeeaeWiki" title="User:AskeeaeWiki">𝘮𝘪𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘦𝘭'𝘴 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘮𝘦𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘺,</a></span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AskeeaeWiki-20241210072700-I_Feel_It_Coming" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AskeeaeWiki-20241210072700-I_Feel_It_Coming"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AskeeaeWiki-20241210072700-I_Feel_It_Coming"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720-I_Feel_It_Coming-20241214151800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720-I_Feel_It_Coming-20241214151800"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720-I_Feel_It_Coming-20241214151800"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/I_Feel_It_Coming/archive2&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241214151800-Comments_from_Z1720"></span>I have added this article to the <a href="/wiki/Template:FAC_peer_review_sidebar" title="Template:FAC peer review sidebar">FAC PR sidebar</a> to try to get more responses. I suggest that you seek a <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAM" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAM">FAC mentor</a> that can guide you through the process and comment on this PR. I also suggest that you review articles at <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAC">WP:FAC</a> to build goodwill amongst editors and gain a better understanding of the <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FA%3F" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FA?">FA criteria</a>. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241214151800-Comments_from_Z1720" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:18, 14 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241214151800-Comments_from_Z1720"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241214151800-Comments_from_Z1720"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250118013100-Z1720-20241214151800"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:AskeeaeWiki" title="User:AskeeaeWiki">AskeeaeWiki</a>:</span> This article has been open for over a month without comment. Are you still interested in receiving feedback? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250118013100-Z1720-20241214151800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:31, 18 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250118013100-Z1720-20241214151800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250118013100-Z1720-20241214151800"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900-Z1720-20250118013100"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a>:</span> Absolutely! I'm sorry for not responding to some other PR articles, I've been focused on school and this has been a side project I've worked on for nearly a year. Thank you! <span style="color:brown;"><a href="/wiki/User:AskeeaeWiki" title="User:AskeeaeWiki">𝘮𝘪𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘦𝘭'𝘴 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘳 𝘮𝘦𝘭𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘭𝘺,</a></span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900-Z1720-20250118013100" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:39, 18 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900-Z1720-20250118013100"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900-Z1720-20250118013100"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250121210600-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:AskeeaeWiki" title="User:AskeeaeWiki">AskeeaeWiki</a>:</span> Since you are working towards your first successful FAC, I suggest getting a <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAM" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAM">featured article mentor</a> who can comment here on the article. I also suggest that you review articles at <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAC">WP:FAC</a> now: this will help you learn the <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FA%3F" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FA?">featured article criteria</a>, build goodwill amongst the FAC community (which will help your articles get reviews later) and demonstrate to the FAC community that you understand the criteria. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250121210600-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:06, 21 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250121210600-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250121210600-AskeeaeWiki-20250118063900"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Tyla_(album)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Tyla_(album)-Arts"><span id="Tyla_.28album.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Tyla_(album)-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tyla_(album)/archive3" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Tyla (album)/archive3">Tyla (album)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Tyla_(album)-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Tyla_(album)" title="Tyla (album)"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Tyla_(album)" title="Special:EditPage/Tyla (album)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tyla_(album)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Tyla_(album)" title="Special:PageHistory/Tyla (album)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Tyla_(album)" title="Talk:Tyla (album)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Tyla_(album)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Tyla (album)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tyla_(album)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tyla (album)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tyla_(album)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tyla_(album)/archive3&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tyla_(album)/archive3" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Tyla (album)/archive3">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 29 November 2024, 12:16 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 22 January 2025, 19:07 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)-Arts"><span id="Kill_Bill_.28SZA_song.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Kill Bill (SZA song)/archive1">Kill Bill (SZA song)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" class="mw-redirect" title="Kill Bill (SZA song)"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" title="Special:EditPage/Kill Bill (SZA song)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" title="Special:PageHistory/Kill Bill (SZA song)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" class="mw-redirect" title="Talk:Kill Bill (SZA song)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Kill Bill (SZA song)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Kill Bill (SZA song)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Kill_Bill_(SZA_song)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Kill Bill (SZA song)/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 19 November 2024, 12:46 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 16 February 2025, 08:23 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Midnights" data-mw-thread-id="h-Midnights-Arts"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Midnights-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Midnights/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Midnights/archive1">Midnights</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Midnights-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Midnights" title="Midnights"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Midnights" title="Special:EditPage/Midnights">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Midnights&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Midnights" title="Special:PageHistory/Midnights">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Midnights" title="Talk:Midnights"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Midnights" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Midnights">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Midnights" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Midnights">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Midnights&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Midnights/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Midnights/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Midnights/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 5 November 2024, 09:49 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 23 December 2024, 14:44 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" data-mw-thread-id="h-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds-Arts-20241009141400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds-Arts-20241009141400"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds/archive1">Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds-Arts-20241009141400"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Special:EditPage/Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Special:PageHistory/Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Talk:Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Eating Out 2: Sloppy Seconds">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to get it to feature article status at some point in the future, and I want to ensure that it is as complete as possible. If any additional changes could be made to the "Release" and "Reception" sections, please let me know. Moreover, if any additional sources exist that could be used to enlarge either one, I'll be happy to make the appropriate changes. </p><p>The section I'm most interested in improving is the film's "Production". I feel like I've exhausted my resources regarding either print or online sources, so if anyone is familiar with any additional sources that could be used, I'd really appreciate that. Lastly, if someone has access to a DVD of the film and could upload the audio commentary somewhere—a tall order, I know—that would be the most useful addition to the article after the behind-the-scenes documentary. </p><p>I appreciate any help. <a href="/wiki/User:PanagiotisZois" title="User:PanagiotisZois">PanagiotisZois</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PanagiotisZois" title="User talk:PanagiotisZois">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:14, 9 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400-Eating_Out_2:_Sloppy_Seconds"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Daniel_Case-20250108060800-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400"></span>OK. It's been almost three months since you put this up here. I will print it out and take a look. <a href="/wiki/User:Daniel_Case" title="User:Daniel Case">Daniel Case</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Daniel_Case" title="User talk:Daniel Case">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Daniel_Case-20250108060800-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:08, 8 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Daniel_Case-20250108060800-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Daniel_Case-20250108060800-PanagiotisZois-20241009141400"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Daniel_Case-20250117063700-Daniel_Case-20250108060800"></span>Unfortunately I lost the printout I had gone over it with a red pen.<p>While I will say there are places where the article's prose could be less wordy and more direct, it was still readable, and addressing that might be better left to the Copy Editors' Guild. I didn't see any serious issues there.</p><p>And as for your sources on those sections, having worked on a few film articles myself I don't really see any deficiencies there. It looks like you found everything there was to find except the DVD commentary. I wish I could help you with that; when you are able to find it it would likely be helpful. <a href="/wiki/User:Daniel_Case" title="User:Daniel Case">Daniel Case</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Daniel_Case" title="User talk:Daniel Case">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Daniel_Case-20250117063700-Daniel_Case-20250108060800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:37, 17 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Daniel_Case-20250117063700-Daniel_Case-20250108060800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Daniel_Case-20250117063700-Daniel_Case-20250108060800"></span> </p><dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Daniel_Case-20250122050300-Daniel_Case-20250117063700"></span>Good news! I just found the printout, and will be doing the copy edit soon. <a href="/wiki/User:Daniel_Case" title="User:Daniel Case">Daniel Case</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Daniel_Case" title="User talk:Daniel Case">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Daniel_Case-20250122050300-Daniel_Case-20250117063700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:03, 22 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Daniel_Case-20250122050300-Daniel_Case-20250117063700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Daniel_Case-20250122050300-Daniel_Case-20250117063700"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)-Arts"><span id="Ivan_the_Terrible_.281945_film.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)-Arts"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)/archive1">Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)-Arts"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Special:EditPage/Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Special:PageHistory/Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Talk:Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ivan_the_Terrible_(1945_film)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Ivan the Terrible (1945 film)/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 29 August 2024, 04:27 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 26 January 2025, 01:48 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Everyday_life" data-mw-thread-id="h-Everyday_life-20241125224300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Everyday_life-20241125224300"></span>Everyday life<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Everyday_life-20241125224300"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=2" title="Edit section: Everyday life"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Mario_Andretti" data-mw-thread-id="h-Mario_Andretti-Everyday_life-20250130194700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Mario_Andretti-Everyday_life-20250130194700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mario_Andretti/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Mario Andretti/archive1">Mario Andretti</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Mario_Andretti-Everyday_life-20250130194700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mario_Andretti/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Mario Andretti"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Mario_Andretti" title="Mario Andretti"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Namelessposter-20250130194700-Mario_Andretti"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Mario_Andretti" title="Special:EditPage/Mario Andretti">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mario_Andretti&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Mario_Andretti" title="Special:PageHistory/Mario Andretti">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Mario_Andretti" title="Talk:Mario Andretti"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Mario_Andretti" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Mario Andretti">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Mario_Andretti" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Mario Andretti">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mario_Andretti&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mario_Andretti/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review. It is a current Good Article, and I would like to nominate it for featured article status. I previously rewrote much of the article to forestall a good article reassessment. Article stability should not be a major concern moving forward, as Andretti has been retired for 30 years. With respect to importance, Andretti was named U.S. Driver of the Century in 2000. During his 35-year career, he was the 1978 F1 champion and a four-time IndyCar champion. (He is also a level-5 vital article, for what it's worth.) I'd appreciate any feedback you could give. </p><p>I'd like to front that <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">@Z1720</a> requested cuts to the article's length during their pre-GAR review. I trimmed the article to about 9500 words, but I'd be happy to make more cuts. I would appreciate your thoughts on whether the early-life and Formula One sections (in particular) have too much detail. I do note that Andretti has arguably the most convoluted career in motorsports history, since he raced in so many categories and kept on going until his 50s, so we should expect his article to be longer than other elite drivers'. </p><p>In addition, I would specifically appreciate your thoughts on whether there are any noteworthy aspects of Andretti's life that aren't already in the article. Some Wikipedia driver articles have sections on a driver's public persona and/or driving style, but the article is already quite long. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Namelessposter" title="User talk:Namelessposter">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Namelessposter-20250130194700-Mario_Andretti" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:47, 30 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Namelessposter-20250130194700-Mario_Andretti"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Namelessposter-20250130194700-Mario_Andretti"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720_2" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_2-Mario_Andretti-20250130200100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_2-Mario_Andretti-20250130200100"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720_2-Mario_Andretti-20250130200100"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mario_Andretti/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250130200100-Comments_from_Z1720_2"></span>Comments after a quick skim: </p> <ul><li>Are the sources in the "Further reading" section of a good quality? These might be used to replace some of the lower-quality sources in the article. Typically, I do not recommend FAs have sources listed in a Further reading section: either they should be used as inline citations or removed.</li> <li>IMDB (ref 226) should not be used as a reference.</li> <li>Per <a href="/wiki/MOS:ALLCAPS" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:ALLCAPS">MOS:ALLCAPS</a>, source titles in the references should be in sentence case, not all caps</li> <li>"Italian-American heritage" This is a weird heading title for awards he has won. Per <a href="/wiki/MOS:OVERSECTION" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:OVERSECTION">MOS:OVERSECTION</a> I think this can be combined with the previous section.</li> <li>I have not checked yet, but after the cuts ensure that all information in the lead and infobox are in the article body and cited.</li></ul> <p>Hope this helps. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250130200100-Comments_from_Z1720_2" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:01, 30 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250130200100-Comments_from_Z1720_2"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250130200100-Comments_from_Z1720_2"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Namelessposter-20250130204200-Z1720-20250130200100"></span>Hi there:</dd> <dd>Thank you for the quick response! I will review the sources in the Further Reading section to see if anything can be swapped out. In the meantime I will leave them there, but I will remove them eventually.</dd> <dd>I addressed your other points:</dd> <dd>- Removed the stray IMDb reference and upgraded sourcing. Thanks for catching that! It eluded my CTRL+F.</dd> <dd>- Changed all-caps source titles (will do another round of this and other source reformatting)</dd> <dd>- Removed the Italian-American heading</dd> <dd>Thanks again! <a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Namelessposter" title="User talk:Namelessposter">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Namelessposter-20250130204200-Z1720-20250130200100" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:42, 30 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Namelessposter-20250130204200-Z1720-20250130200100"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Namelessposter-20250130204200-Z1720-20250130200100"></span></dd> <dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Namelessposter-20250130223000-Z1720-20250130200100"></span>It turns out that the New York Public Library doesn't appear to have any of the books listed in the article. (!!!) Do you have an idea of where I might find them, short of buying them on Amazon? <a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Namelessposter" title="User talk:Namelessposter">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Namelessposter-20250130223000-Z1720-20250130200100" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:30, 30 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Namelessposter-20250130223000-Z1720-20250130200100"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Namelessposter-20250130223000-Z1720-20250130200100"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250130223700-Namelessposter-20250130223000"></span>archive.org sometimes has copies that you can borrow. Google books sometimes lets you see previews of the books, which is better than nothing. <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LIBRARY" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LIBRARY">WP:LIBRARY</a> might also have copies in some of the databases. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250130223700-Namelessposter-20250130223000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:37, 30 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250130223700-Namelessposter-20250130223000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250130223700-Namelessposter-20250130223000"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Namelessposter-20250131220000-Z1720-20250130223700"></span>Hi there - thank you for your comment. I reviewed most of the books in the further reading and autobiographies sections, and have integrated what I found useful into the main page. I provided some comments on these sources at the talk page (including comments on material that didn't make it into the main page), after which I deleted the sources from the main page. I left four books on the main page "further reading" list. The first two appear to be coffee table books and the third appears to be part of a series for younger readers. The fourth (Andretti's second autobiography, from 1994) looks like a useful source of material and I will review it when I get a chance, but I'm still working on getting a copy. Will you let me know if I can remove the remainder of the list? <a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Namelessposter" title="User talk:Namelessposter">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Namelessposter-20250131220000-Z1720-20250130223700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:00, 31 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Namelessposter-20250131220000-Z1720-20250130223700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Namelessposter-20250131220000-Z1720-20250130223700"></span></dd> <dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Namelessposter-20250211045000-Z1720-20250130223700"></span>Hello @<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> - I got a copy of Andretti's 1994 autobiography and it's a coffee table book published to celebrate the end of his career. I reviewed it for potential additions, but while it's interesting enough, it was not a very useful source for this article. Based on that and the above, do you think it would be appropriate to blank the "Further Reading" section? <a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Namelessposter" title="User talk:Namelessposter">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Namelessposter-20250211045000-Z1720-20250130223700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:50, 11 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Namelessposter-20250211045000-Z1720-20250130223700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Namelessposter-20250211045000-Z1720-20250130223700"></span></dd></dl></li></ul> <dl><dd><dl><dd><ul><li><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250213014400-Namelessposter-20250211045000"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Namelessposter" title="User:Namelessposter">Namelessposter</a>:</span> My view is that if a source cannot be used as an inline citation, it should not be listed in "Further reading". <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250213014400-Namelessposter-20250211045000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:44, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250213014400-Namelessposter-20250211045000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span 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I've successfully nominated GA's and FL's, but haven't had a Featured Article and would appreciate any feedback! </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Brindille1" title="User:Brindille1">Brindille1</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Brindille1" title="User talk:Brindille1">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Brindille1-20250119042000-New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:20, 19 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Brindille1-20250119042000-New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Brindille1-20250119042000-New_England_Revolution_in_international_competition"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" data-mw-thread-id="h-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-Everyday_life-20250117225900"><span id="LittleBigPlanet_.282008_video_game.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-Everyday_life-20250117225900"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)/archive1">LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-Everyday_life-20250117225900"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lazman321-20250117225900-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="Special:EditPage/LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="Special:PageHistory/LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="Talk:LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:LittleBigPlanet (2008 video game)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> After a successful GA nomination years ago, I plan on nominating this for FAC. Feedback is appreciated. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Lazman321" title="User:Lazman321">Lazman321</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lazman321" title="User talk:Lazman321">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lazman321-20250117225900-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:59, 17 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lazman321-20250117225900-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lazman321-20250117225900-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="BP!" data-mw-thread-id="h-BP!-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250119035000"><span id="BP.21"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-BP!-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250119035000"></span>BP!<span data-mw-comment-end="h-BP!-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250119035000"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: BP!"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000-BP!"></span>Can you italicize game titles in the citation titles per <a href="/wiki/MOS:CONFORMTITLE" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:CONFORMTITLE">MOS:CONFORMTITLE</a>? 🍕<a href="/wiki/User:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User:Boneless Pizza!"><span style="background:orange;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="font-weight:bold">B</span>P!</span></a>🍕 (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User talk:Boneless Pizza!">🔔</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000-BP!" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:50, 19 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000-BP!"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000-BP!"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lazman321-20250121022300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User:Boneless Pizza!">Boneless Pizza!</a>:</span> Done <a href="/wiki/User:Lazman321" title="User:Lazman321">Lazman321</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lazman321" title="User talk:Lazman321">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lazman321-20250121022300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:23, 21 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lazman321-20250121022300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lazman321-20250121022300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250119035000"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200-Lazman321-20250121022300"></span>I feel like the <i>Business Insider</i> as a source should be removed. It is not listed reliable or unreliable, but that website looks kinda <i>meh</i>. 🍕<a href="/wiki/User:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User:Boneless Pizza!"><span style="background:orange;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="font-weight:bold">B</span>P!</span></a>🍕 (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User talk:Boneless Pizza!">🔔</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200-Lazman321-20250121022300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:42, 24 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200-Lazman321-20250121022300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200-Lazman321-20250121022300"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lazman321-20250129193300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Boneless_Pizza!" title="User:Boneless Pizza!">Boneless Pizza!</a>:</span> I've removed it. <a href="/wiki/User:Lazman321" title="User:Lazman321">Lazman321</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lazman321" title="User talk:Lazman321">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lazman321-20250129193300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:33, 29 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lazman321-20250129193300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lazman321-20250129193300-Boneless_Pizza!-20250124044200"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl></li></ul> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="LunaEclipse" data-mw-thread-id="h-LunaEclipse-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250209123300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-LunaEclipse-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250209123300"></span>LunaEclipse<span data-mw-comment-end="h-LunaEclipse-LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)-20250209123300"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/LittleBigPlanet_(2008_video_game)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: LunaEclipse"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Discovery_(Daft_Punk_album)/archive1#Lazman321" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Discovery (Daft Punk album)/archive1"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-LunaEclipse-20250209123300-LunaEclipse"></span>Quid pro quo</a> :3 💽 <a href="/wiki/User:LunaEclipse" title="User:LunaEclipse"><span style="color: purple;">🌙<b>Eclipse</b></span></a> 💽 🌹 ⚧ (she/they/it) <sup><b><a href="/wiki/User_talk:LunaEclipse" title="User talk:LunaEclipse">talk</a>/<a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/LunaEclipse" title="Special:Contributions/LunaEclipse">edits</a></b></sup> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-LunaEclipse-20250209123300-LunaEclipse" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">12:33, 9 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-LunaEclipse-20250209123300-LunaEclipse"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-LunaEclipse-20250209123300-LunaEclipse"></span> </p><p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-LunaEclipse-20250213004300-LunaEclipse"></span>Apologies for being a lazy gal; here are my comments. </p><p>[69]: OK </p><p>[70]: OK </p><p>[155]: OK </p><p>[162]: OK </p><p>[143]: OK </p><p>[131]: The title is in bold and not in italics. </p><p>[45]: OK </p><p>[46]: OK </p><p>[124]: OK </p><p>[121]: OK </p><p>[118]: OK </p><p>[193]: OK </p><p><span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:Lazman321" title="User:Lazman321">Lazman321</a>:</span> ping. <a href="/wiki/User:LunaEclipse" title="User:LunaEclipse"><span style="color: purple;">🌙<b>Eclipse</b></span></a> (she/they/it • <a href="/wiki/User_talk:LunaEclipse" title="User talk:LunaEclipse">talk</a> • <a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/LunaEclipse" title="Special:Contributions/LunaEclipse">edits</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-LunaEclipse-20250213004300-LunaEclipse" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:43, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-LunaEclipse-20250213004300-LunaEclipse"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-LunaEclipse-20250213004300-LunaEclipse"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lazman321-20250213190000-LunaEclipse-20250213004300"></span>Strange, I'm surprised no one noticed until now. Thanks anyway. <a href="/wiki/User:Lazman321" title="User:Lazman321">Lazman321</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lazman321" title="User talk:Lazman321">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lazman321-20250213190000-LunaEclipse-20250213004300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:00, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lazman321-20250213190000-LunaEclipse-20250213004300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lazman321-20250213190000-LunaEclipse-20250213004300"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)-Everyday_life-20241125224300"><span id="Fenerbah.C3.A7e_S.K._.28basketball.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)-Everyday_life-20241125224300"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Fenerbahçe S.K. (basketball)/archive1">Fenerbahçe S.K. (basketball)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)-Everyday_life-20241125224300"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Fenerbahçe S.K. (basketball)"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)" title="Fenerbahçe S.K. (basketball)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Semih1994-20241125224300-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)" title="Special:EditPage/Fenerbahçe S.K. 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(basketball)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fenerbah%C3%A7e_S.K._(basketball)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because of a GA nomination. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Semih1994" title="User:Semih1994">Semih1994</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Semih1994" title="User talk:Semih1994">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Semih1994-20241125224300-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:43, 25 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Semih1994-20241125224300-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Semih1994-20241125224300-Fenerbahçe_S.K._(basketball)"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Engineering_and_technology" data-mw-thread-id="h-Engineering_and_technology"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Engineering_and_technology"></span>Engineering and technology<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Engineering_and_technology"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=3" title="Edit section: Engineering and technology"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Buangkok_MRT_station" data-mw-thread-id="h-Buangkok_MRT_station-Engineering_and_technology"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Buangkok_MRT_station-Engineering_and_technology"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Buangkok_MRT_station/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Buangkok MRT station/archive1">Buangkok MRT station</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Buangkok_MRT_station-Engineering_and_technology"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Buangkok MRT station"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Special:EditPage/Buangkok MRT station">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Buangkok_MRT_station&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Special:PageHistory/Buangkok MRT station">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Talk:Buangkok MRT station"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Buangkok MRT station">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Buangkok_MRT_station" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Buangkok MRT station">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Buangkok_MRT_station&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Buangkok_MRT_station/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Buangkok_MRT_station/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Buangkok MRT station/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 7 December 2024, 01:04 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 30 January 2025, 05:18 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="General" data-mw-thread-id="h-General-20241125012000"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-General-20241125012000"></span>General<span data-mw-comment-end="h-General-20241125012000"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=4" title="Edit section: General"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Fabienne_Wohlwend" data-mw-thread-id="h-Fabienne_Wohlwend-General-20241125012000"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Fabienne_Wohlwend-General-20241125012000"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fabienne_Wohlwend/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Fabienne Wohlwend/archive1">Fabienne Wohlwend</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Fabienne_Wohlwend-General-20241125012000"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fabienne_Wohlwend/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Fabienne Wohlwend"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Fabienne Wohlwend"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-MSportWiki-20241125012000-Fabienne_Wohlwend"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Special:EditPage/Fabienne Wohlwend">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fabienne_Wohlwend&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Special:PageHistory/Fabienne Wohlwend">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Talk:Fabienne Wohlwend"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Fabienne Wohlwend">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Fabienne_Wohlwend" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Fabienne Wohlwend">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Fabienne_Wohlwend&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Fabienne_Wohlwend/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I would like some external opinions on the article with the view of being upgraded in quality class, <i>potentially</i> to GA – I could not submit this for GA myself (if deemed to meet that criteria), having made multiple minor edits to the page (wikilinks, external links, cats, images from commons). Whilst the subject does not meet <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:NMOTORSPORT" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:NMOTORSPORT">notability guidelines for motorsport</a>, they do meet notability guidelines for national sports (Liechtenstein). It appears to be well-sourced and well-written, however page history indicates indirect edit wars over content layout. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:MSportWiki" title="User:MSportWiki">MSportWiki</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:MSportWiki" title="User talk:MSportWiki">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-MSportWiki-20241125012000-Fabienne_Wohlwend" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:20, 25 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-MSportWiki-20241125012000-Fabienne_Wohlwend"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-MSportWiki-20241125012000-Fabienne_Wohlwend"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Yoshi's_New_Island" data-mw-thread-id="h-Yoshi's_New_Island-General"><span id="Yoshi.27s_New_Island"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Yoshi's_New_Island-General"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Yoshi%27s_New_Island/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Yoshi's New Island/archive1">Yoshi's New Island</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Yoshi's_New_Island-General"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Yoshi's New Island"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Special:EditPage/Yoshi's New Island">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yoshi%27s_New_Island&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Special:PageHistory/Yoshi's New Island">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Talk:Yoshi's New Island"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Yoshi's New Island">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Yoshi%27s_New_Island" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Yoshi's New Island">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Yoshi%27s_New_Island&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Yoshi%27s_New_Island/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Yoshi%27s_New_Island/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Yoshi's New Island/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 30 December 2024, 22:54 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 14 February 2025, 21:29 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)-General-20250105141900"><span id="Paul_Hayes_.28radio_presenter.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)-General-20250105141900"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Paul Hayes (radio presenter)/archive1">Paul Hayes (radio presenter)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)-General-20250105141900"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a 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href="/wiki/User_talk:Jw93d59" title="User talk:Jw93d59">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jw93d59-20250105141900-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:19, 5 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jw93d59-20250105141900-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jw93d59-20250105141900-Paul_Hayes_(radio_presenter)"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Badger_Conference" data-mw-thread-id="h-Badger_Conference-General-20250123164700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Badger_Conference-General-20250123164700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Badger_Conference/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Badger Conference/archive1">Badger Conference</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Badger_Conference-General-20250123164700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Badger_Conference/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Badger Conference"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Badger_Conference" title="Badger Conference"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Moserjames79-20250123164700-Badger_Conference"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Badger_Conference" title="Special:EditPage/Badger Conference">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Badger_Conference&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Badger_Conference" title="Special:PageHistory/Badger Conference">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Badger_Conference" title="Talk:Badger Conference"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Badger_Conference" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Badger Conference">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Badger_Conference" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Badger Conference">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Badger_Conference&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Badger_Conference/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because it has been significantly revamped. Highlights include a revised history section with citations, updated membership tables, a membership timeline, list of state champions and inclusion of Wisconsin high school athletic conferences template. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Moserjames79&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Moserjames79 (page does not exist)">Moserjames79</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Moserjames79" title="User talk:Moserjames79">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Moserjames79-20250123164700-Badger_Conference" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:47, 23 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Moserjames79-20250123164700-Badger_Conference"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span 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href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Lakeshore Conference (Wisconsin)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Lakeshore Conference (Wisconsin)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Lakeshore_Conference_(Wisconsin)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I just completely overhauled the content, adding a History section with citations, a membership table, a membership timeline, a list of state champions to come from the conference, and the Wisconsin high school athletic conferences template. </p><p>Thanks, <a 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id="Geography_and_places" data-mw-thread-id="h-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"></span>Geography and places<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=5" title="Edit section: Geography and places"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Geography" data-mw-thread-id="h-Geography-Geography_and_places-20250117031700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Geography-Geography_and_places-20250117031700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Geography/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Geography/archive1">Geography</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Geography-Geography_and_places-20250117031700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Geography/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Geography"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Geography" title="Geography"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-GeogSage-20250117031700-Geography"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Geography" title="Special:EditPage/Geography">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Geography&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Geography" title="Special:PageHistory/Geography">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Geography" title="Talk:Geography"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Geography" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Geography">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Geography" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Geography">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Geography&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Geography/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I've done a lot of work on this page, but still think it has a lot of room for improvment. I think this is an extremely important page, and would like to see it at Good or featured article status one day. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:GeogSage" title="User:GeogSage"><span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC; color:grey">GeogSage</span></a> <sup> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:GeogSage" title="User talk:GeogSage"><span style="font-family:Blackadder ITC; color:grey">⚔Chat?⚔</span></a>) </sup> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-GeogSage-20250117031700-Geography" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:17, 17 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-GeogSage-20250117031700-Geography"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-GeogSage-20250117031700-Geography"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Taguig" data-mw-thread-id="h-Taguig-Geography_and_places-20250115165600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Taguig-Geography_and_places-20250115165600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Taguig/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Taguig/archive1">Taguig</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Taguig-Geography_and_places-20250115165600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Taguig/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Taguig"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Taguig" title="Taguig"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PH_0447-20250115165600-Taguig"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Taguig" title="Special:EditPage/Taguig">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taguig&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Taguig" title="Special:PageHistory/Taguig">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Taguig" title="Talk:Taguig"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Taguig" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Taguig">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Taguig" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Taguig">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Taguig&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Taguig/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> Good day! I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make it one of the "Good" or B or A-Class Articles in Wikipedia. I would like to know your feedback. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:PH_0447&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:PH 0447 (page does not exist)">PH 0447</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PH_0447" title="User talk:PH 0447">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PH_0447-20250115165600-Taguig" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:56, 15 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PH_0447-20250115165600-Taguig"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PH_0447-20250115165600-Taguig"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-RFNirmala-20250118100500-PH_0447-20250115165600"></span>Hi! A general points would be including sources in the article's paragraphs. For instance, what's the basis of <span class="example" style="font-family: Georgia, 'DejaVu Serif', serif; color: var(--color-content-added, #006400);">The name of the city is also spelled as "Tagig" or "Tagui"</span>? Claims on its history would need reliable sources. This may also apply to naming the city's informal districts. How is the Blue Mosque one of the most prominent ones?</dd> <dd>This is a really broad review, so I might add some detailed comments later <a href="/wiki/User:RFNirmala" title="User:RFNirmala">RFNirmala</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:RFNirmala" title="User talk:RFNirmala">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-RFNirmala-20250118100500-PH_0447-20250115165600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">10:05, 18 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-RFNirmala-20250118100500-PH_0447-20250115165600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-RFNirmala-20250118100500-PH_0447-20250115165600"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" data-mw-thread-id="h-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert-Geography_and_places-20241126195700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert-Geography_and_places-20241126195700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District/archive1">List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert-Geography_and_places-20241126195700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" title="List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Gb321-20241126195700-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a 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talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:List of contributing properties in the Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" 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Issues I would like feedback on: </p><p>1) the lede needs to be significantly expanded, but since this list is a supporting article to <a href="/wiki/Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entertainment_District" title="Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District">Hollywood Boulevard Commercial and Entertainment District</a>, I'm not really sure what the lede here would be other than copying info from that article. </p><p>2) should coordinates be added to the table, maybe alongside addresses? The buildings are all in the same neighborhood, meaning the coordinates don't change much from entry to entry </p><p>3) there is no description column at the end of the table but there are several columns that give descriptive info, specifically "type", "style", and "architect". The table is getting pretty wide, so I'm not sure if another column describing the entry is helpful or not </p><p>4) any other thoughts you have </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Gb321&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Gb321 (page does not exist)">Gb321</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Gb321" title="User talk:Gb321">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Gb321-20241126195700-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:57, 26 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Gb321-20241126195700-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Gb321-20241126195700-List_of_contributing_properties_in_the_Hollywood_Boulevard_Commercial_and_Entert"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Hadhramaut" data-mw-thread-id="h-Hadhramaut-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Hadhramaut-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Hadhramaut/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Hadhramaut/archive1">Hadhramaut</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Hadhramaut-Geography_and_places-20240909090600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Hadhramaut/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Hadhramaut"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Hadhramaut" title="Hadhramaut"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Abo_Yemen-20240909090600-Hadhramaut"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Hadhramaut" title="Special:EditPage/Hadhramaut">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hadhramaut&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Hadhramaut" title="Special:PageHistory/Hadhramaut">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Hadhramaut" title="Talk:Hadhramaut"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Hadhramaut" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Hadhramaut">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Hadhramaut" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Hadhramaut">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Hadhramaut&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Hadhramaut/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to try to get this page to GA status soon. In addition to the standard stuff for peer reviews I want to know if there are any missing sections that are needed for an article about a geographical region. I also want to know how can I expand the Lede section of this article. Thanks, <b><a href="/wiki/User:Abo_Yemen" title="User:Abo Yemen"><span style="background:#9b360b;color:white;padding:2px;">Abo Yemen</span></a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Abo_Yemen" title="User talk:Abo Yemen"><span style="background:#9d6b06;color:white;padding:2px;">✉</span></a></b> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Abo_Yemen-20240909090600-Hadhramaut" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">09:06, 9 September 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Abo_Yemen-20240909090600-Hadhramaut"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Abo_Yemen-20240909090600-Hadhramaut"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Airship" data-mw-thread-id="h-Airship-Hadhramaut-20241031235600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Airship-Hadhramaut-20241031235600"></span>Airship<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Airship-Hadhramaut-20241031235600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Hadhramaut/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Airship"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship"></span>As requested, I will review this article from the point of view of achieving GA status. </p> <ul><li>One very important thing at GA is the presence of inline citations which verify every part of the prose content. This is not the case currently. Many sentences, and even sometimes paragraphs, in the first four sections do not have any citations.</li></ul> <ul><li>You have correctly identified that the lead section is too short. It is quite easy to expand the lead—all you need to do is make sure that every section in the article is summarised. At the moment, the "History", "Exploration", "Geography and geology", and "Economy" sections are not summarised. If you included those, making sure <a href="/wiki/MOS:LEADREL" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:LEADREL">to balance them appropriately</a> (so the history summary would take up more space than the economy summary), you could easily have a two or even three paragraph lead section.</li></ul> <ul><li>The sections an article needs often varies depending on the precise nature of the topic. One method that you can very often do is take a look at high-quality articles on similar topics (in this case, regions), which could give you an idea of what you could include. On regions, see <a href="/wiki/Dorset" title="Dorset">Dorset</a> (an FA), <a href="/wiki/Slavonia" title="Slavonia">Slavonia</a> (a GA), and <a href="/wiki/South_India" title="South India">South India</a> (a GA). Looking at them, I think a "Culture" section might be a good idea, maybe along with a "Politics" section and a "Demographics" section.</li></ul> <ul><li><ul><li>I also don't think that there is any real reason to separate the "History" and "Exploration" sections here: surely the latter can be merged into the former?</li></ul></li></ul> <ul><li>The prose is better than I expected; there are just a couple of errors in the "Economy" and "diaspora" sections. A visit to <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:GOCE" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:GOCE">WP:GOCE</a> would probably help iron out any remaining deficiencies.</li></ul> <p>In general, I think that there is an above-average foundation here, but that the article really needs some good work to polish into tip-top condition. Look at Dorset, Slavonia, or South India for inspiration if you get stuck. Feel free to ping me if you have any questions.<a href="/wiki/User:AirshipJungleman29" title="User:AirshipJungleman29">~~ AirshipJungleman29</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:AirshipJungleman29" title="User talk:AirshipJungleman29">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:56, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Cremastra" data-mw-thread-id="h-Cremastra-Hadhramaut-20241201171600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Cremastra-Hadhramaut-20241201171600"></span>Cremastra<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Cremastra-Hadhramaut-20241201171600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Hadhramaut/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Cremastra"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Cremastra-20241201171600-Cremastra"></span>First time giving, instead of receiving, feedback on a peer review... </p> <ul><li>Is it really necessary to list every tributary <i>wadi</i> in a bullet list? I'd give the number and mention the names (less than four) of any especially notable or large ones.</li></ul> <ul><li>Images are very dense at the top of the article, but nearly absent at the bottom.</li></ul> <ul><li>Prose itself looks pretty good.</li></ul> <ul><li><ul><li>First sentence of <a href="/wiki/Hadhramaut#Mountains" title="Hadhramaut">§ Mountains</a> too detailed... I'd 1) remove the bracketed transliterations <i>etc.</i> and replace "mountain range in Yemen" with something a little more specific. (nearby)</li></ul></li></ul> <ul><li><a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://web.archive.org/web/20080709015416/http://www.newstatesman.com/200710180041">Citation 25</a> doesn't verify the population stats nor mention Mukalla, unfortunately.</li></ul> <ul><li>Just my opinion: consider rolling in the (Arabic:) <i>etc.</i> from the lead into [note 1] to reduce clutter.</li></ul> <ul><li><a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://www.eia.gov/international/data/world#/?tl_type=p&tl_id=5-A&pa=0000000000000000000000000000000000g&ct=0&ord=SA&c=ruvvvvvfvtvnvv1urvvvvfvvvvvvfvvvou20evvvvvvvvvnvvuvo&f=A">Citation 37</a>: is a more specific link possible]?</li></ul> <p>Will say more soon. <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Cremastra" title="User talk:Cremastra"><i>Cremastra</i></a> ‹ <a href="/wiki/User:Cremastra" title="User:Cremastra">u</a> — <a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/Cremastra" title="Special:Contributions/Cremastra">c</a> › <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Cremastra-20241201171600-Cremastra" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:16, 1 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Cremastra-20241201171600-Cremastra"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Cremastra-20241201171600-Cremastra"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="History" data-mw-thread-id="h-History-20240909110400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-History-20240909110400"></span>History<span data-mw-comment-end="h-History-20240909110400"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=6" title="Edit section: History"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Mother_Solomon" data-mw-thread-id="h-Mother_Solomon-History"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Mother_Solomon-History"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mother_Solomon/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Mother Solomon/archive1">Mother Solomon</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Mother_Solomon-History"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Mother_Solomon" title="Mother Solomon"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Mother_Solomon" title="Special:EditPage/Mother Solomon">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mother_Solomon&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Mother_Solomon" title="Special:PageHistory/Mother Solomon">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Mother_Solomon" title="Talk:Mother Solomon"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Mother_Solomon" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Mother Solomon">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Mother_Solomon" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Mother Solomon">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Mother_Solomon&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mother_Solomon/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Mother_Solomon/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Mother Solomon/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 13 February 2025, 18:18 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 15 February 2025, 21:47 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Operation_Encore" data-mw-thread-id="h-Operation_Encore-History-20250210224300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Operation_Encore-History-20250210224300"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Operation_Encore/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Operation Encore/archive1">Operation Encore</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Operation_Encore-History-20250210224300"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Operation_Encore/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Operation Encore"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Operation_Encore" title="Operation Encore"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Llywrch-20250210224300-Operation_Encore"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Operation_Encore" title="Special:EditPage/Operation Encore">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Operation_Encore&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Operation_Encore" title="Special:PageHistory/Operation Encore">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Operation_Encore" title="Talk:Operation Encore"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Operation_Encore" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Operation Encore">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Operation_Encore" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Operation Encore">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Operation_Encore&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Operation_Encore/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I'm listing this article for peer review due to an admitted COI, as described on the Talk page. I'd like an objective opinion whether I should improve this article towards a high rating. Much thanks -- <a href="/wiki/User:Llywrch" title="User:Llywrch">llywrch</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Llywrch" title="User talk:Llywrch">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Llywrch-20250210224300-Operation_Encore" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:43, 10 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Llywrch-20250210224300-Operation_Encore"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Llywrch-20250210224300-Operation_Encore"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire" data-mw-thread-id="h-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire-History-20250210201500"><span id="ToNiePok.C3.B3j_escape_room_fire"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire-History-20250210201500"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/ToNiePokój escape room fire/archive1">ToNiePokój escape room fire</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire-History-20250210201500"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: ToNiePokój escape room fire"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="ToNiePokój escape room fire"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250210201500-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="Special:EditPage/ToNiePokój escape room fire">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="Special:PageHistory/ToNiePokój escape room fire">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="Talk:ToNiePokój escape room fire"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:ToNiePokój escape room fire">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:ToNiePokój escape room fire">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/ToNiePok%C3%B3j_escape_room_fire/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate it for Good Article status at some point and would like a second pair of eyes on it. </p><p>Thanks, <span style="background-color:black; color:white; padding: 1.5px;"><a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white">Grumpylawnchair</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Grumpylawnchair" title="User talk:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white"><b>talk</b></span></a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Grumpylawnchair-20250210201500-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:15, 10 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250210201500-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250210201500-ToNiePokój_escape_room_fire"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="SS_Dixie_Arrow" data-mw-thread-id="h-SS_Dixie_Arrow-History-20250206212000"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-SS_Dixie_Arrow-History-20250206212000"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/SS_Dixie_Arrow/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/SS Dixie Arrow/archive1">SS Dixie Arrow</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-SS_Dixie_Arrow-History-20250206212000"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/SS_Dixie_Arrow/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: SS Dixie Arrow"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="SS Dixie Arrow"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PhoenixCaelestis-20250206212000-SS_Dixie_Arrow"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="Special:EditPage/SS Dixie Arrow">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=SS_Dixie_Arrow&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="Special:PageHistory/SS Dixie Arrow">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="Talk:SS Dixie Arrow"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:SS Dixie Arrow">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:SS_Dixie_Arrow" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:SS Dixie Arrow">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=SS_Dixie_Arrow&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/SS_Dixie_Arrow/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what specifically I should improve on this article to get it up to an even better rating than it is now. Any sort of feedback is appreciated. <a href="/wiki/User:PhoenixCaelestis" title="User:PhoenixCaelestis">-Emily (PhoenixCaelestis)</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PhoenixCaelestis" title="User talk:PhoenixCaelestis">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PhoenixCaelestis-20250206212000-SS_Dixie_Arrow" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:20, 6 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PhoenixCaelestis-20250206212000-SS_Dixie_Arrow"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PhoenixCaelestis-20250206212000-SS_Dixie_Arrow"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Margaret_Sanger" data-mw-thread-id="h-Margaret_Sanger-History"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Margaret_Sanger-History"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Margaret_Sanger/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Margaret Sanger/archive1">Margaret Sanger</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Margaret_Sanger-History"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Margaret_Sanger" title="Margaret Sanger"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Margaret_Sanger" title="Special:EditPage/Margaret Sanger">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Margaret_Sanger&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Margaret_Sanger" title="Special:PageHistory/Margaret Sanger">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Margaret_Sanger" title="Talk:Margaret Sanger"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Margaret_Sanger" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Margaret Sanger">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Margaret_Sanger" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Margaret Sanger">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Margaret_Sanger&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Margaret_Sanger/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. 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Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Melisende,_Queen_of_Jerusalem/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Melisende, Queen of Jerusalem/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 29 January 2025, 18:36 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 14 February 2025, 02:40 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" data-mw-thread-id="h-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra-History-20250114164700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra-History-20250114164700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Japanese occupation of West Sumatra/archive1">Japanese occupation of West Sumatra</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra-History-20250114164700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Japanese occupation of West Sumatra"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Japanese occupation of West Sumatra"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Kaliper1-20250114164700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Special:EditPage/Japanese occupation of West Sumatra">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Special:PageHistory/Japanese occupation of West Sumatra">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Talk:Japanese occupation of West Sumatra"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Japanese occupation of West Sumatra">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Japanese occupation of West Sumatra">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because... I've viewed that the article has been written to my best and furthest capabilities. I view that it requires peer review to better its comprehensiveness from the different point of view, input, and feedback of others. Possibly, interested in reaching FA status. </p><p>Thank you, <a href="/wiki/User:Kaliper1" title="User:Kaliper1">Kaliper1</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Kaliper1" title="User talk:Kaliper1">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Kaliper1-20250114164700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:47, 14 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Kaliper1-20250114164700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Kaliper1-20250114164700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"></span> </p><p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Chipmunkdavis-20250202090700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"></span>A very interesting article. At a very quick read through: </p> <ul><li>The lead needs to be expanded to encompass more of the article, it doesn't seem to mention sections 3, 5, and 6. The statement that the occupation ended on 17 August 1945 also doesn't seem supported by the body. The Surrender section seems to suggest it was a gradual and uncertain process that began on 15 August.</li> <li>The sentence starting "The defeat of the British naval forces..." needs rewriting. It might be worth asking for a general copyedit if you want to reach FA status. There's a other few bits I couldn't quite figure out here and there.</li> <li>"Shortly before the arrival of the Imperial Japanese forces on the coasts of the Indonesian archipelago, Dutch officials in West Sumatra attempted to persuade the local population to cooperate with the colonial administration." is missing some context as to what cooperation was being sought, and what the previous non-cooperative situation was. Perhaps the paragraph needs to be reorganised, as there seems to be some relevant information near the end. "Thus, the Dutch however did not foresee the lack of support from the local population." doesn't read as linked to its surrounding sentences, why did the Dutch foresee support?</li> <li>There seems to be missing information at the end, between "Echoes of the Proclamation" and "Official signing". Presumably, during this period Republican forces assumed control from the Japanese over much of the island?</li> <li>There is a mix of dmy and mdy date formats. It seems dmy is the dominant one?</li> <li>I've changed a few direct interwiki links to <a href="/wiki/Template:Ill" class="mw-redirect" title="Template:Ill">Template:ill</a> links, the rest should be adjusted too.</li></ul> <p>Really good work. <a href="/wiki/User:Chipmunkdavis" title="User:Chipmunkdavis">CMD</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Chipmunkdavis" title="User talk:Chipmunkdavis">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Chipmunkdavis-20250202090700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">09:07, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Chipmunkdavis-20250202090700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Chipmunkdavis-20250202090700-Japanese_occupation_of_West_Sumatra"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" data-mw-thread-id="h-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh-History-20250112172300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh-History-20250112172300"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Ancient History Of Bangladesh/archive1">Ancient History Of Bangladesh</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh-History-20250112172300"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Ancient History Of Bangladesh"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/w/index.php?title=Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="Ancient History Of Bangladesh (page does not exist)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-GtAM6-20250112172300-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" title="Special:EditPage/Ancient History Of Bangladesh">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" title="Special:PageHistory/Ancient History Of Bangladesh">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="Talk:Ancient History Of Bangladesh (page does not exist)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Ancient History Of Bangladesh">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Ancient History Of Bangladesh">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to nominate it as a Good article and want to get feedback so I can improve this page. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:GtAM6" title="User:GtAM6">GtAM6</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:GtAM6" title="User talk:GtAM6">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-GtAM6-20250112172300-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:23, 12 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-GtAM6-20250112172300-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-GtAM6-20250112172300-Ancient_History_Of_Bangladesh"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jared_BioE-20250116003500-GtAM6-20250112172300"></span>Title -- rather vague. Is this term used in scholarly sources?</dd> <dd>First paragraph -- too vague, does not adequately establish topic <ul><li>"a period of time" and "multiple millennia" -- when exactly? Are you talking about the neolithic era? Bronze age? Are multiple periods included in this era? Does your period correspond to the demarcations used in scholarly sources?</li> <li>You shouldn't include "part of a series on the history of Bangladesh" in the first sentence. This is already in the info box. Your first sentence should focus on describing the subject.</li> <li>Which ages precedes this age (if any)? Which ages succeed it?</li> <li>"a sequence of different independent regional kingdoms and the various Magadha dynasties." -- again too vague, which kingdoms and dynasties specifically?</li> <li>" Due to this, many historians have been more partial to prioritising other, well documented or recent areas of the history of Bangladesh" -- this is more about the historiography of the era, rather than the era itself. It also comes off as slightly editorializing and critiquing historians for insufficient study of the era. If you are going to discuss how historian's have approached studying this era, then most articles would put that at the bottom of the page.</li> <li>No citations -- you should be citing all of these facts.</li></ul></dd> <dd>Overview. <ul><li>Your first paragraph is plagiarized from the source (<a rel="nofollow" class="external free" href="https://www.shu.edu.bd/history-of-bangladesh/">https://www.shu.edu.bd/history-of-bangladesh/</a>). It is inappropriate to directly copy, word for word, text someone else has written. <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Plagiarism" title="Wikipedia:Plagiarism">WP:Plagiarism</a></li> <li>Running this section through a plagiarism checker detected significant copying from other works. This is not appropriate for a Wikipedia article. Please correct this issue and remove all copied content.</li></ul></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/User:Jared_BioE" title="User:Jared BioE">Jared BioE</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jared_BioE" title="User talk:Jared BioE">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jared_BioE-20250116003500-GtAM6-20250112172300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:35, 16 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jared_BioE-20250116003500-GtAM6-20250112172300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jared_BioE-20250116003500-GtAM6-20250112172300"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jared_BioE-20250116012200-Jared_BioE-20250116003500"></span>Remember, we need to paraphrase sources rather than directly copying! (Although you may quote short parts of text, it should be surrounding by quotation marks and clearly specify the author. See <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Plagiarism" title="Wikipedia:Plagiarism">WP:Plagiarism</a> for a detailed explanation.)</dd> <dd>I assume you were unaware of these rules, but this really needs to be corrected, particularly before good article status nominations. If you nominate it as it is, it may be subject to deletion and you may get in trouble with admin.</dd> <dd>Best of luck with the editing ~ <a href="/wiki/User:Jared_BioE" title="User:Jared BioE">Jared BioE</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jared_BioE" title="User talk:Jared BioE">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jared_BioE-20250116012200-Jared_BioE-20250116003500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:22, 16 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jared_BioE-20250116012200-Jared_BioE-20250116003500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jared_BioE-20250116012200-Jared_BioE-20250116003500"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" data-mw-thread-id="h-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia-History-20250111173900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia-History-20250111173900"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia/archive1">8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia-History-20250111173900"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: 8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Vacant0-20250111173900-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="Special:EditPage/8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="Special:PageHistory/8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="Talk:8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:8th session of the Central Committee of the League of Communists of Serbia">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to nominate it to FAC. The article has seen slight changes since being promoted to GA, so I'm interested in getting a prose review and whether there is any missing info that could potentially benefit the readers. Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Vacant0" title="User:Vacant0"><span style="color:#5E9A4A;font-weight:bold">Vacant</span><span style="color:#A24B4B;font-weight:bold">0</span></a> <span style="font-size:small">(<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Vacant0" title="User talk:Vacant0">talk</a> • <a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/Vacant0" title="Special:Contributions/Vacant0">contribs</a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Vacant0-20250111173900-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:39, 11 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Vacant0-20250111173900-8th_session_of_the_Central_Committee_of_the_League_of_Communists_of_Serbia"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span 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Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Central_Powers/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Central Powers/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 24 December 2024, 01:14 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 14 February 2025, 00:11 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" data-mw-thread-id="h-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan-History-20241202113800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan-History-20241202113800"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/List of foreign-born samurai in Japan/archive1">List of foreign-born samurai in Japan</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan-History-20241202113800"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: List of foreign-born samurai in Japan"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="List of foreign-born samurai in Japan"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="Special:EditPage/List of foreign-born samurai in Japan">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="Special:PageHistory/List of foreign-born samurai in Japan">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="Talk:List of foreign-born samurai in Japan"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:List of foreign-born samurai in Japan">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:List of foreign-born samurai in Japan">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I implemented changes how it functioned. As a list, it described various definitions of samurai, and editors were expected to use their own judgement to see if the historical figures qualified. This was an invitation to SYNTH and disputes. I discussed it with other editors, and it was decided to rely on if the character is referred to as a samurai in RS. I wonder if the list can be further improved and changes made to further reflect reliable sources over OR. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Tinynanorobots" title="User:Tinynanorobots">Tinynanorobots</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Tinynanorobots" title="User talk:Tinynanorobots">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:38, 2 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800-List_of_foreign-born_samurai_in_Japan"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-LeChatiliers_Pupper-20250126050200-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800"></span>Why is the image of Eugène Collache included if they are not a member of the list? At least under the RS method for inclusion that you outline</dd> <dd>Would it be possible to include when the privileges were granted, within the information of the privileges column.</dd> <dd>Perhaps a slightly larger explanation as to the what the historical debate is regarding if these people were samurai, might improve the comprehensiveness of the topic <a href="/wiki/User:LeChatiliers_Pupper" title="User:LeChatiliers Pupper">LeChatiliers Pupper</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:LeChatiliers_Pupper" title="User talk:LeChatiliers Pupper">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-LeChatiliers_Pupper-20250126050200-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:02, 26 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-LeChatiliers_Pupper-20250126050200-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-LeChatiliers_Pupper-20250126050200-Tinynanorobots-20241202113800"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="4th_Army_(France)" data-mw-thread-id="h-4th_Army_(France)-History-20241130201600"><span id="4th_Army_.28France.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-4th_Army_(France)-History-20241130201600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/4th_Army_(France)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/4th Army (France)/archive1">4th Army (France)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-4th_Army_(France)-History-20241130201600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/4th_Army_(France)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: 4th Army (France)"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/4th_Army_(France)" title="4th Army (France)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Reader_of_Information-20241130201600-4th_Army_(France)"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/4th_Army_(France)" title="Special:EditPage/4th Army (France)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=4th_Army_(France)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/4th_Army_(France)" title="Special:PageHistory/4th Army (France)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:4th_Army_(France)" title="Talk:4th Army (France)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:4th_Army_(France)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:4th Army (France)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:4th_Army_(France)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:4th Army (France)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=4th_Army_(France)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/4th_Army_(France)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I translated it from the French Wiki into English albeit through Machine Translation as I'm not fluent in French. I would like an outsiders perspective on this please. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Reader_of_Information" title="User:Reader of Information">Reader of Information</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Reader_of_Information" title="User talk:Reader of Information">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Reader_of_Information-20241130201600-4th_Army_(France)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:16, 30 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Reader_of_Information-20241130201600-4th_Army_(France)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Reader_of_Information-20241130201600-4th_Army_(France)"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="William_D._Hoard" data-mw-thread-id="h-William_D._Hoard-History-20241030010300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-William_D._Hoard-History-20241030010300"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/William D. Hoard/archive1">William D. Hoard</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-William_D._Hoard-History-20241030010300"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: William D. Hoard"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/William_D._Hoard" title="William D. Hoard"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241030010300-William_D._Hoard"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/William_D._Hoard" title="Special:EditPage/William D. Hoard">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=William_D._Hoard&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/William_D._Hoard" title="Special:PageHistory/William D. Hoard">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:William_D._Hoard" title="Talk:William D. Hoard"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:William_D._Hoard" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:William D. Hoard">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:William_D._Hoard" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:William D. Hoard">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=William_D._Hoard&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I believe all comments from the FAC decline have been addressed and would love a final check before resubmitting. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241030010300-William_D._Hoard" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:03, 30 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241030010300-William_D._Hoard"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241030010300-William_D._Hoard"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Query_from_Z1720" data-mw-thread-id="h-Query_from_Z1720-William_D._Hoard-20241219153800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Query_from_Z1720-William_D._Hoard-20241219153800"></span>Query from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Query_from_Z1720-William_D._Hoard-20241219153800"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Query from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a>:</span> This PR has been open for over a month without comment. Are you still interested in receiving comments? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:38, 19 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241219153900-Z1720-20241219153800"></span>Yes please! <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241219153900-Z1720-20241219153800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:39, 19 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241219153900-Z1720-20241219153800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241219153900-Z1720-20241219153800"></span></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="750h" data-mw-thread-id="h-750h-William_D._Hoard-20241221192900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-750h-William_D._Hoard-20241221192900"></span>750h<span data-mw-comment-end="h-750h-William_D._Hoard-20241221192900"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: 750h"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-750h+-20241221192900-750h"></span>Hi <span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a>:</span>, i'd be happy to review once i have one comment addressed. i think as further reading sections are generally discouraged, it'd be best to use that source you use in the further reading or just not use it at all, but i'd opt for the former. <a href="/wiki/User:750h%2B" title="User:750h+">750</a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:750h%2B" title="User talk:750h+">h+</a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-750h+-20241221192900-750h" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:29, 21 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-750h+-20241221192900-750h"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-750h+-20241221192900-750h"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500-750h+-20241221192900"></span>Hi @<a href="/wiki/User:750h%2B" title="User:750h+">750h+</a>, that source isn't accessible to me. It's a thesis that is stored in the UW-Madison archives and has not been digitized. It can only be read in-person and I do not have a way to do so. I've removed the section. Thanks for being willing to review! <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500-750h+-20241221192900" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:25, 21 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500-750h+-20241221192900"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500-750h+-20241221192900"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-750h+-20241221202700-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500"></span>Okay, i'll do a review in a bit. <a href="/wiki/User:750h%2B" title="User:750h+">750</a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:750h%2B" title="User talk:750h+">h+</a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-750h+-20241221202700-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">20:27, 21 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-750h+-20241221202700-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-750h+-20241221202700-M4V3R1CK32-20241221202500"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading5"><h5 id="Comments" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments-750h-20241223084200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments-750h-20241223084200"></span>Comments<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments-750h-20241223084200"></span></h5><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/William_D._Hoard/archive1&action=edit&section=T-4" title="Edit section: Comments"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dt>lead</dt></dl> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-Comments"></span>Nothing wrong here. </p> <dl><dt>early life and education</dt></dl> <ul><li><span style="color:green;">Enos brought Hoard with him while purchasing</span> ==> "Enos brought Hoard while purchasing"</li> <li><span style="color:green;">other crops that led to the adoption</span> ==> "other crops, which led to the adoption"</li> <li><span style="color:green;">The price of the crop collapsed and Hoard gave up hop farming.</span> add a comma after "collapsed"</li></ul> <dl><dt>career</dt></dl> <ul><li><span style="color:green;">which Hoard had written prior to founding</span> ==> "which Hoard had written before founding"</li> <li><span style="color:green;">of scientific agricultural practices, and started a dairy</span> remove the comma</li> <li><span style="color:green;">The cost of producing oleomargarine was much lower than that of producing butter</span> choose a synonym for "producing" as you use it twice within the sentence <ul><li>Removed the second producing as it is not necessary. Good eye! <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-Comments" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:27, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-Comments"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-Comments"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span style="color:green;"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"></span>viewed the English only movement as an</span> add a comma between English and only <ul><li>Made this a hyphen to better reflect that article's title <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:27, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"></span></li></ul> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-750h+-20241223173300-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"></span>I'm just realising this, i meant a hyphen, not a comma <a href="/wiki/User:750h%2B" title="User:750h+">750</a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:750h%2B" title="User talk:750h+">h+</a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-750h+-20241223173300-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:33, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-750h+-20241223173300-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-750h+-20241223173300-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700"></span></dd></dl></li> <li><span style="color:green;"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-1"></span>the law's repeal, and called for Catholics</span> remove the comma</li> <li><span style="color:green;">radical positions, and began</span> remove the comma</li> <li><span style="color:green;">dictatorial style and being unable to</span> ==> "dictatorial style and inability to" <ul><li>Changed to "Hoard's inability to" for added clarity <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:27, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-1"></span></li></ul></li></ul> <dl><dt>legacy</dt></dl> <ul><li><span style="color:green;"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-750h+-20241223084200-Comments"></span>made a statue of Hoard which was placed</span> generally preferable to place a comma before "which"</li></ul> <p>thanks for the article <span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a>:</span>, very well written. If you don't mind, would you consider doing a spoken wikipedia for <a href="/wiki/Bart_Simpson" title="Bart Simpson">Bart Simpson</a> (whenever you're free, and don't feel obliged to). Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:750h%2B" title="User:750h+">750</a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:750h%2B" title="User talk:750h+">h+</a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-750h+-20241223084200-Comments" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:42, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-750h+-20241223084200-Comments"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-750h+-20241223084200-Comments"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700-750h+-20241223084200"></span>Thanks for the notes! More than happy to add it to the list. I'll leave my Nancy Cartwright impressions in the booth though. <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700-750h+-20241223084200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:17, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700-750h+-20241223084200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700-750h+-20241223084200"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700"></span>Made those changes as suggested unless otherwise noticed. Thanks again! <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:27, 23 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20241223152700-M4V3R1CK32-20241223151700"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250214000700-Comments"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a>:</span> It has been over a month since this has received a comment. Is this ready to be nominated at <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAC">WP:FAC</a>? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250214000700-Comments" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:07, 14 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250214000700-Comments"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250214000700-Comments"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20250214004700-Z1720-20250214000700"></span>It has in fact already been nominated and promoted! <a href="/wiki/User:M4V3R1CK32" title="User:M4V3R1CK32">M4V3R1CK32</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:M4V3R1CK32" title="User talk:M4V3R1CK32">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-M4V3R1CK32-20250214004700-Z1720-20250214000700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:47, 14 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-M4V3R1CK32-20250214004700-Z1720-20250214000700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-M4V3R1CK32-20250214004700-Z1720-20250214000700"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Nayib_Bukele" data-mw-thread-id="h-Nayib_Bukele-History-20241028092600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Nayib_Bukele-History-20241028092600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Nayib_Bukele/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Nayib Bukele/archive1">Nayib Bukele</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Nayib_Bukele-History-20241028092600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Nayib_Bukele/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Nayib Bukele"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Nayib_Bukele" title="Nayib Bukele"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PizzaKing13-20241028092600-Nayib_Bukele"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Nayib_Bukele" title="Special:EditPage/Nayib Bukele">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nayib_Bukele&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Nayib_Bukele" title="Special:PageHistory/Nayib Bukele">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Nayib_Bukele" title="Talk:Nayib Bukele"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Nayib_Bukele" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Nayib Bukele">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Nayib_Bukele" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Nayib Bukele">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Nayib_Bukele&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Nayib_Bukele/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I would like a review for neutrality, scope, and MOS covering the entire article in preparation for a potential FAC (which would be my first one), and in general any other advice to prepare this article for FAC. Thanks. <a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13"><span style="background:#0047AB;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="background-color:#0047AB;color:#F8BF45"><b>PizzaKing13</b></span></span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PizzaKing13" title="User talk:PizzaKing13"><i>¡Hablame!</i></a>) 🍕👑 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PizzaKing13-20241028092600-Nayib_Bukele" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">09:26, 28 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PizzaKing13-20241028092600-Nayib_Bukele"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PizzaKing13-20241028092600-Nayib_Bukele"></span> </p><p><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250118012100-Nayib_Bukele"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13">PizzaKing13</a>:</span> This has been open for a while without review. Are you still interested in receiving comments? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250118012100-Nayib_Bukele" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:21, 18 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250118012100-Nayib_Bukele"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250118012100-Nayib_Bukele"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PizzaKing13-20250118051800-Z1720-20250118012100"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a>:</span> Yes, I would still appreciate comments for this article. <a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13"><span style="background:#0047AB;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="background-color:#0047AB;color:#F8BF45"><b>PizzaKing13</b></span></span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PizzaKing13" title="User talk:PizzaKing13"><i>¡Hablame!</i></a>) 🍕👑 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PizzaKing13-20250118051800-Z1720-20250118012100" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:18, 18 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PizzaKing13-20250118051800-Z1720-20250118012100"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PizzaKing13-20250118051800-Z1720-20250118012100"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250121210300-PizzaKing13-20250118051800"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13">PizzaKing13</a>:</span> I suggest that you get a <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAM" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAM">featured article mentor</a>, since you are still working on your first successful FAC. A mentor will be able to comment here on the article. I also suggest that you review articles at <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAC">WP:FAC</a> now: this will help you learn the <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FA%3F" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FA?">featured article criteria</a>, build goodwill amongst the FAC community (which will help your article get reviews later) and demonstrate to the FAC community that you understand the criteria. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250121210300-PizzaKing13-20250118051800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:03, 21 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250121210300-PizzaKing13-20250118051800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250121210300-PizzaKing13-20250118051800"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PizzaKing13-20250121215100-Z1720-20250121210300"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a>:</span> Thanks, I'll be sure to do that, but I'd still like at least an overview to see if there are any major or glaring problems that I should address first. <a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13"><span style="background:#0047AB;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="background-color:#0047AB;color:#F8BF45"><b>PizzaKing13</b></span></span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PizzaKing13" title="User talk:PizzaKing13"><i>¡Hablame!</i></a>) 🍕👑 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PizzaKing13-20250121215100-Z1720-20250121210300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:51, 21 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PizzaKing13-20250121215100-Z1720-20250121210300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PizzaKing13-20250121215100-Z1720-20250121210300"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720_3" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_3-Nayib_Bukele-20250122010300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_3-Nayib_Bukele-20250122010300"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720_3-Nayib_Bukele-20250122010300"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Nayib_Bukele/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250122015000-Comments_from_Z1720_3"></span>Comments after a quick skim: </p> <ul><li>The article is 11,000 words, which <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:TOOBIG" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:TOOBIG">WP:TOOBIG</a> recommends <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:SPINOUT" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:SPINOUT">spinning out</a> sections in articles of this length. I suggest doing this in sections such as the lead, sections in his presidency, and the 2024 re-election campaign.</li></ul> <dl><dd>I'll go trimming it over time</dd></dl> <ul><li>Daily Sabah (ref 222) is considered an unreliable source and will need to be replaced.</li></ul> <dl><dd>Replaced</dd></dl> <ul><li>Forbes Contributors are not considered reliable (<a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FORBESCON" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FORBESCON">WP:FORBESCON</a>) so will need to be replaced.</li></ul> <dl><dd>Replaced</dd></dl> <ul><li>The sources listed in "Further reading" should either be used as inline citations in the article or removed.</li></ul> <dl><dd><dl><dd>"Further reading is primarily intended for publications that were not used by editors to build the current article content, but which editors still recommend." from <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Further_reading" title="Wikipedia:Further reading">Wikipedia:Further reading</a>? <ul><li><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FA%3F" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FA?">WP:FA?</a> 1b "it neglects no major facts or details and places the subject in context;" and 1c "a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature;" If Further reading has sources listed that can be used in the article, then it puts into doubt whether the article is complete. These further reading sources can be used to replace lower-quality sources in the article, or removed if there are higher quality sources already used as inline citations. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250122015000-Comments_from_Z1720_3" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:50, 22 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250122015000-Comments_from_Z1720_3"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250122015000-Comments_from_Z1720_3"></span></li></ul></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250122010300-Comments_from_Z1720_3"></span>Hope this helps. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250122010300-Comments_from_Z1720_3" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:03, 22 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250122010300-Comments_from_Z1720_3"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250122010300-Comments_from_Z1720_3"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-PizzaKing13-20250122014600-Z1720-20250122010300"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a>:</span> Yea it did, thanks for the comments! <a href="/wiki/User:PizzaKing13" title="User:PizzaKing13"><span style="background:#0047AB;border-radius:9999px;padding:1px 8px;color:white;"><span style="background-color:#0047AB;color:#F8BF45"><b>PizzaKing13</b></span></span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:PizzaKing13" title="User talk:PizzaKing13"><i>¡Hablame!</i></a>) 🍕👑 <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-PizzaKing13-20250122014600-Z1720-20250122010300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:46, 22 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-PizzaKing13-20250122014600-Z1720-20250122010300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-PizzaKing13-20250122014600-Z1720-20250122010300"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Urien" data-mw-thread-id="h-Urien-History-20240909110400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Urien-History-20240909110400"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Urien/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Urien/archive1">Urien</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Urien-History-20240909110400"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Urien/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Urien"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Urien" title="Urien"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Tipcake-20240909110400-Urien"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Urien" title="Special:EditPage/Urien">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Urien&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Urien" title="Special:PageHistory/Urien">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Urien" title="Talk:Urien"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Urien" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Urien">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Urien" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Urien">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Urien&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Urien/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I've put a good deal of effort into it and would appreciate commentary on how to make it accessible to a wide audience, which Celtic Studies is historically lacking, making it subject to all sorts of pseudo historical writing in the public field. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Tipcake&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Tipcake (page does not exist)">Tipcake</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Tipcake" title="User talk:Tipcake">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Tipcake-20240909110400-Urien" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:04, 9 September 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Tipcake-20240909110400-Urien"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Tipcake-20240909110400-Urien"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Airship_2" data-mw-thread-id="h-Airship_2-Urien-20241031235800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Airship_2-Urien-20241031235800"></span>Airship<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Airship_2-Urien-20241031235800"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Urien/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Airship"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235800-Airship_2"></span>I have re-rated the article as C-class. I'll provide comments from a general perspective. </p> <ul><li>One area that you could work on is sourcing. Although general references are fine for lower-quality articles, higher review processes such as that for <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:GA" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:GA">good articles</a> or <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FA" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FA">featured articles</a> require that all material be cited using inline citations. There is quite a lot of material that isn't directly verified with inline citations. This also includes note-type references like number 13.</li></ul> <ul><li>Talking about references, another way of making it accessible is by using one of the <a href="/wiki/Help:Citation_Style_1" title="Help:Citation Style 1">the standardised citation templates</a> for sourcing. This helps especially people with <a href="/wiki/MOS:ACCESS" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:ACCESS">actual accessibility concerns</a>. You may also want to look at incorporating the suggestions at <a href="/wiki/MOS:DTAB" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:DTAB">MOS:DTAB</a> to improve the accessibility of the big table.</li></ul> <ul><li>However, in terms of making it accessible to a wide audience (<a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:MTAU" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:MTAU">WP:MTAU</a>), I think you have done quite well. There are good explanations for most unfamiliar concepts, and the prose is clear and smoothly organised.</li></ul> <ul><li>A popular culture section should definitely be cited using inline citations; it is otherwise liable to getting filled up with <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:TRIVIA" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:TRIVIA">WP:TRIVIA</a>. <a href="/wiki/User:AirshipJungleman29" title="User:AirshipJungleman29">~~ AirshipJungleman29</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:AirshipJungleman29" title="User talk:AirshipJungleman29">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235800-Airship_2" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:58, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235800-Airship_2"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235800-Airship_2"></span></li></ul> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Request_for_Reappraisal" data-mw-thread-id="h-Request_for_Reappraisal-Urien-20250127211300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Request_for_Reappraisal-Urien-20250127211300"></span>Request for Reappraisal<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Request_for_Reappraisal-Urien-20250127211300"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Urien/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Request for Reappraisal"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Tipcake-20250127211300-Request_for_Reappraisal"></span>Thanks for this. I have added many more citations and updated the citation templates. How does this look now? <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Tipcake&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Tipcake (page does not exist)">Tipcake</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Tipcake" title="User talk:Tipcake">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Tipcake-20250127211300-Request_for_Reappraisal" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:13, 27 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Tipcake-20250127211300-Request_for_Reappraisal"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Tipcake-20250127211300-Request_for_Reappraisal"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Natural_sciences_and_mathematics" data-mw-thread-id="h-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"></span>Natural sciences and mathematics<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=7" title="Edit section: Natural sciences and mathematics"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Outline_of_caves" data-mw-thread-id="h-Outline_of_caves-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250213174000"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Outline_of_caves-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250213174000"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Outline_of_caves/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Outline of caves/archive1">Outline of caves</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Outline_of_caves-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250213174000"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Outline_of_caves/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Outline of caves"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Outline_of_caves" title="Outline of caves"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Kingsmasher678-20250213174000-Outline_of_caves"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Outline_of_caves" title="Special:EditPage/Outline of caves">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Outline_of_caves&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Outline_of_caves" title="Special:PageHistory/Outline of caves">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Outline_of_caves" title="Talk:Outline of caves"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Outline_of_caves" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Outline of caves">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Outline_of_caves" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Outline of caves">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Outline_of_caves&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Outline_of_caves/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to take it to a featured list, and I'm wondering what I would need to add to get it there. I think that it's close, but I need a second (or third!) set of eyes. Thanks in advance! </p><p><a href="/wiki/User:Kingsmasher678" title="User:Kingsmasher678"><span style="color:green;"><b>Kingsmasher678</b></span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Kingsmasher678" title="User talk:Kingsmasher678"><span style="color:black;"><b>talk</b></span></a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Kingsmasher678-20250213174000-Outline_of_caves" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:40, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Kingsmasher678-20250213174000-Outline_of_caves"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Kingsmasher678-20250213174000-Outline_of_caves"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Carl_Friedrich_Gauss" data-mw-thread-id="h-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203232200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203232200"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss/archive2" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Carl Friedrich Gauss/archive2">Carl Friedrich Gauss</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203232200"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss/archive2&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Carl Friedrich Gauss"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss" title="Carl Friedrich Gauss"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" 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href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Carl_Friedrich_Gauss&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss/archive2&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Carl_Friedrich_Gauss/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Carl Friedrich Gauss/archive1"><b>Previous peer review</b></a></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I plan to nominate it as a featured article and I believe it meets all criteria. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Sushidude21!" title="User:Sushidude21!">Sushidude21!</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Sushidude21!" title="User talk:Sushidude21!">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Sushidude21!-20250203232200-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:22, 3 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Sushidude21!-20250203232200-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Sushidude21!-20250203232200-Carl_Friedrich_Gauss"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="European_rabbit" data-mw-thread-id="h-European_rabbit-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203174600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-European_rabbit-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203174600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/European_rabbit/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/European rabbit/archive1">European rabbit</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-European_rabbit-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250203174600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span 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href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:European_rabbit" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:European rabbit">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:European_rabbit" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:European rabbit">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=European_rabbit&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/European_rabbit/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make sure it is comprehensive of the subject. There are several sections that may seem missing - Biology and Mythology (in regards to cultural impact and appearance of the European rabbit, aside from their impact as an invasive species) - that I think are already covered as well as needs be in the articles <a href="/wiki/Rabbit" title="Rabbit">Rabbit</a> and <a href="/wiki/Domestic_rabbit" title="Domestic rabbit">Domestic rabbit</a>. If there are obvious missing parts of a species article that should be here, especially as well-studied a subject as this, that feedback is sorely needed. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Reconrabbit" title="User:Reconrabbit"><span style="color:#6BAD2D">Recon</span></a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Reconrabbit" title="User talk:Reconrabbit"><span style="color:#2F3833">rabbit</span></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Reconrabbit-20250203174600-European_rabbit" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:46, 3 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Reconrabbit-20250203174600-European_rabbit"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Reconrabbit-20250203174600-European_rabbit"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Esculenta-20250203182500-Reconrabbit-20250203174600"></span>A couple of quick comments (might be back for more later): <ul><li>the article is listed as being in British English, so check spelling throughout (e.g. color, recognized) <dl><dd>I used a script to change it. I am not an expert in either spelling method.</dd></dl></li> <li>please mention in taxonomy that Linnaeus was the first describer of this species, and consider citing his work with a link to the species page; as a bonus, you could add a few words about what he said about the species. Also, what was the 1874 work that transferred the taxon to its new genus? <dl><dd>Added name, date, reference. I don't know much Latin, but it doesn't seem like he wrote all that much about the species in the original account - "lives in southern Europe and Hispania, digging holes in sandy areas, its enemies are falcons, badgers, ferrets".</dd></dl></li> <li><i>Oryctolagus cuniculus</i> should be italicized through the article (in image captions and in references) <dl><dd>I did miss that in the first caption and later references, so should be corrected.</dd></dl></li></ul></dd> <dd><a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Esculenta&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Esculenta (page does not exist)">Esculenta</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Esculenta" title="User talk:Esculenta">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Esculenta-20250203182500-Reconrabbit-20250203174600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">18:25, 3 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Esculenta-20250203182500-Reconrabbit-20250203174600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Esculenta-20250203182500-Reconrabbit-20250203174600"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Homo_erectus" data-mw-thread-id="h-Homo_erectus-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Homo_erectus-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Homo_erectus/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Homo erectus/archive1">Homo erectus</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Homo_erectus-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Homo_erectus" title="Homo erectus"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Homo_erectus" title="Special:EditPage/Homo erectus">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Homo_erectus&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Homo_erectus" title="Special:PageHistory/Homo erectus">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Homo_erectus" title="Talk:Homo erectus"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Homo_erectus" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Homo erectus">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Homo_erectus" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Homo erectus">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Homo_erectus&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Homo_erectus/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Homo_erectus/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Homo erectus/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 28 January 2025, 01:54 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 9 February 2025, 17:34 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="54_(number)" data-mw-thread-id="h-54_(number)-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250109033200"><span id="54_.28number.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-54_(number)-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250109033200"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/54_(number)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/54 (number)/archive1">54 (number)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-54_(number)-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20250109033200"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/54_(number)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: 54 (number)"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/54_(number)" title="54 (number)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lethargilistic-20250109033200-54_(number)"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/54_(number)" title="Special:EditPage/54 (number)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=54_(number)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/54_(number)" title="Special:PageHistory/54 (number)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:54_(number)" title="Talk:54 (number)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:54_(number)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:54 (number)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:54_(number)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:54 (number)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=54_(number)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/54_(number)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I'm interested in taking it to GA, but there aren't that many number articles to go off of as models. I basically based this on <a href="/wiki/69_(number)" title="69 (number)">69 (number)</a>, <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:NUM/G" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:NUM/G">WP:NUM/G</a>, and <a href="/wiki/1" title="1">1</a> in that order. As you will see, because these articles are so abstract, they are kind of a list of properties without depth. I think that's fine because an explanation of the significance of, say, practical numbers does not actually belong in an article about the number unless the number is actually relevant to an applied use of that property. But it's not exactly inspiring reading either. </p><p>So, primarily, I want to know three things. 1) Where do you think the article too technical or too brisk? 2) Do you have an idea for a math topic I have not covered? 3) Do you have an idea for an applied-math or a cultural topic to cover? </p><p>I will be applying <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:NUM/NOT" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:NUM/NOT">WP:NUM/NOT</a> when considering 3, but we're very much in the "no bad ideas" space when it comes to brainstorming topics. I've been looking into a few numerology sources lately and 54 seems to be an odd enough number that it doesn't get attention from that crowd. </p><p>The material on Babylonian mathematics probably does not actually make sense yet because I need to condense and clarify it. The first paragraph of the Trigonometry section, similarly, probably leaps too quickly to the answer. I do welcome feedback on them, but I think I know generally what needs to change about them already. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Lethargilistic" title="User:Lethargilistic">lethargilistic</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lethargilistic" title="User talk:Lethargilistic">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lethargilistic-20250109033200-54_(number)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:32, 9 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lethargilistic-20250109033200-54_(number)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lethargilistic-20250109033200-54_(number)"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" data-mw-thread-id="h-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241230161600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241230161600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Valve-sparing aortic root replacement/archive1">Valve-sparing aortic root replacement</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241230161600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Valve-sparing aortic root replacement"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Valve-sparing aortic root replacement"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jarrod_Baniqued-20241230161600-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Special:EditPage/Valve-sparing aortic root replacement">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Special:PageHistory/Valve-sparing aortic root replacement">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Talk:Valve-sparing aortic root replacement"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Valve-sparing aortic root replacement">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Valve-sparing aortic root replacement">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this stub for peer review because it is lacking in images, the source I added for procedure duration may need replacing, and the “other words” sections need inspecting. Any suggestions on expanding the article are also welcome. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Jarrod_Baniqued" title="User:Jarrod Baniqued">Jarrod Baniqued (he/him)</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jarrod_Baniqued" title="User talk:Jarrod Baniqued">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jarrod_Baniqued-20241230161600-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:16, 30 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jarrod_Baniqued-20241230161600-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jarrod_Baniqued-20241230161600-Valve-sparing_aortic_root_replacement"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" data-mw-thread-id="h-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241224162700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241224162700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale/archive1">Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241224162700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Wolf20482-20241224162700-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Special:EditPage/Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Special:PageHistory/Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Talk:Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Japan Meteorological Agency seismic intensity scale">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I'm looking for further feedback and perspectives on this article because I'm planning to nominate it for GA status in the future. I'd like an overall review and suggestions for improvement, since it may still have various problems, especially sources predominantly being in Japanese (since suitable English sources for this topic are quite hard to find) </p><p>Thanks! <a href="/wiki/User:Wolf20482" title="User:Wolf20482">Wolf20482</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Wolf20482" title="User talk:Wolf20482">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Wolf20482-20241224162700-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:27, 24 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Wolf20482-20241224162700-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Wolf20482-20241224162700-Japan_Meteorological_Agency_seismic_intensity_scale"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Neurocysticercosis" data-mw-thread-id="h-Neurocysticercosis-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Neurocysticercosis-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Neurocysticercosis/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Neurocysticercosis/archive1">Neurocysticercosis</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Neurocysticercosis-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Neurocysticercosis" title="Neurocysticercosis"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Neurocysticercosis" title="Special:EditPage/Neurocysticercosis">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Neurocysticercosis&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Neurocysticercosis" title="Special:PageHistory/Neurocysticercosis">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Neurocysticercosis" title="Talk:Neurocysticercosis"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Neurocysticercosis" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Neurocysticercosis">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Neurocysticercosis" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Neurocysticercosis">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Neurocysticercosis&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Neurocysticercosis/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Neurocysticercosis/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Neurocysticercosis/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 3 December 2024, 21:46 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 2 February 2025, 16:17 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Stingless_bee" data-mw-thread-id="h-Stingless_bee-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Stingless_bee-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Stingless bee/archive1">Stingless bee</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Stingless_bee-Natural_sciences_and_mathematics-20241022190900"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Stingless bee"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Stingless_bee" title="Stingless bee"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Sintropepe-20241022190900-Stingless_bee"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Stingless_bee" title="Special:EditPage/Stingless bee">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Stingless_bee&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Stingless_bee" title="Special:PageHistory/Stingless bee">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Stingless_bee" title="Talk:Stingless bee"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Stingless_bee" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Stingless bee">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Stingless_bee" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Stingless bee">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Stingless_bee&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I want to submit it as a "good articles" or "featured articles" candidate. I'd like an overall review to see if it is adequate to continue the proccess. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Sintropepe" title="User:Sintropepe">Sintropepe</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Sintropepe" title="User talk:Sintropepe">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Sintropepe-20241022190900-Stingless_bee" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:09, 22 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Sintropepe-20241022190900-Stingless_bee"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Sintropepe-20241022190900-Stingless_bee"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Jens" data-mw-thread-id="h-Jens-Stingless_bee-20241023231600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Jens-Stingless_bee-20241023231600"></span>Jens<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Jens-Stingless_bee-20241023231600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Jens"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600-Jens"></span>Hi there, and thanks for working on an important article like this! I will quickly point out some general issues for now, but, if time allows, will be happy to do more detailed comments once you sorted these out: </p> <ul><li>There are many paragraphs without <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Inline_citation" title="Wikipedia:Inline citation">inline citations</a> towards the end of the article, and a number of "citation needed" tags. Every statement should be sourced with an inline citation, this is super important (or it will quick-fail at the good article nominees).</li> <li>The article seems quite unbalanced and goes into detail that is simply to much for this overview article. A good example are the two tables listing crops that benefit from pollination. The first one is ok I think (have it collapsed by default, though). The second one is definitely too much ("that are at least occasionally or potentially pollinated by stingless bees"). We should not write articles by shovelling in any detail that we can possibly find; we instead have to comprehensively cover the important aspects of the topic in a concise way. There should be a balance; it is not good to have sections that are very general and sections that are super detailed; the depth of detail should remain about equal throughout the article.</li> <li>Sections "Taxonomy" (including etymology and evolution) and "Description" are missing. The former could include a nice cladogram showing the interrelationships.</li> <li>The structure seems to be non-standard. I am not convinced that the grouping by geographical region (Stingless bees of Australia …) is a good choice. I recommend to have a look at some Featured Articles, such as <a href="/wiki/Mantis" title="Mantis">Mantis</a>, <a href="/wiki/Coccinellidae" title="Coccinellidae">Coccinellidae</a>, or <a href="/wiki/Mayfly" title="Mayfly">Mayfly</a>, and use these as a template.</li> <li>There is also a strong bias in the article as stingless bees of Africa do not really seem to be discussed.</li> <li>Hope that helps for a start! If you have any questions, let me know. --<a href="/wiki/User:Jens_Lallensack" title="User:Jens Lallensack">Jens Lallensack</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jens_Lallensack" title="User talk:Jens Lallensack">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600-Jens" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:16, 23 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600-Jens"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600-Jens"></span></li></ul> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Sintropepe-20241031210800-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600"></span>Hey <a href="/wiki/User:Jens_Lallensack" title="User:Jens Lallensack">Jens Lallensack</a> Thank you so much! Your comments were already helpful and clear. I'll answer some points and proceed to the article's improvement. <ul><li><i>Lack of inline citations</i>: I'll try either to find sources or delete the information. This last part of the article was left by me from the previous version.</li> <li><i>Regional sections:</i> This was also information left from the previous version. I don't see it adequate either, but I focused more in adding new verified info than in deleting previous content. I'll see these examples and organize it differently</li> <li><i>African bias:</i> The article definitely ended up with this bias, but there's not much literature produced about African stingless bees. You can notice that Brazil (where I'm from) is the center not only in biodiversity, but in scientific production and beekeeping techniques. Anyways, I'll search deeper for publications with these especies.</li></ul></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/User:Sintropepe" title="User:Sintropepe">Sintropepe</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Sintropepe" title="User talk:Sintropepe">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Sintropepe-20241031210800-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:08, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Sintropepe-20241031210800-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Sintropepe-20241031210800-Jens_Lallensack-20241023231600"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241031221800-Sintropepe-20241031210800"></span>Glad to hear that these where helpful! I personally strongly recommend to follow the structure of existing FAs instead of the current sectioning based on region. Organising by region might make sense within the "Relationships with humans" section (if you can find sources for Africa), but not when discussing their general biology. I fear that the article will have major problems at GAN or FAC with this current structure. --<a href="/wiki/User:Jens_Lallensack" title="User:Jens Lallensack">Jens Lallensack</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jens_Lallensack" title="User talk:Jens Lallensack">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jens_Lallensack-20241031221800-Sintropepe-20241031210800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:18, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241031221800-Sintropepe-20241031210800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Jens_Lallensack-20241031221800-Sintropepe-20241031210800"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Query_from_Z1720_2" data-mw-thread-id="h-Query_from_Z1720_2-Stingless_bee-20241219153800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Query_from_Z1720_2-Stingless_bee-20241219153800"></span>Query from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Query_from_Z1720_2-Stingless_bee-20241219153800"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Query from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720_2"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Sintropepe" title="User:Sintropepe">Sintropepe</a>:</span> It has been over a month since the last comment in this PR. Is this ready to be closed and the article nominated to <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:FAC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:FAC">WP:FAC</a>? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720_2" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:38, 19 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720_2"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241219153800-Query_from_Z1720_2"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Sintropepe-20241220131100-Z1720-20241219153800"></span>Not yet! I am finishing the "African stingless bees" content and I'll give a last check on "citation needed" tags! As soon as I finish, I'll notify you. Thanks for the reminder @<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> <a href="/wiki/User:Sintropepe" title="User:Sintropepe">Sintropepe</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Sintropepe" title="User talk:Sintropepe">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Sintropepe-20241220131100-Z1720-20241219153800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">13:11, 20 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Sintropepe-20241220131100-Z1720-20241219153800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Sintropepe-20241220131100-Z1720-20241219153800"></span></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Review_updated_version" data-mw-thread-id="h-Review_updated_version-Stingless_bee"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Review_updated_version-Stingless_bee"></span>Review updated version<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Review_updated_version-Stingless_bee"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Stingless_bee/archive1&action=edit&section=T-4" title="Edit section: Review updated version"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> and <a href="/wiki/User:Jens_Lallensack" title="User:Jens Lallensack">Jens Lallensack</a>:</span> I think I addressed the items that we discussed. What do you think about its current content? Thanks again for your time. </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Language_and_literature" data-mw-thread-id="h-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"></span>Language and literature<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=8" title="Edit section: Language and literature"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Grammar_Nazi" data-mw-thread-id="h-Grammar_Nazi-Language_and_literature-20250127022900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Grammar_Nazi-Language_and_literature-20250127022900"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Grammar_Nazi/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Grammar Nazi/archive1">Grammar Nazi</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Grammar_Nazi-Language_and_literature-20250127022900"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Grammar_Nazi/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Grammar Nazi"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Grammar_Nazi" title="Grammar Nazi"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Anchovyx-20250127022900-Grammar_Nazi"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Grammar_Nazi" title="Special:EditPage/Grammar Nazi">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grammar_Nazi&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Grammar_Nazi" title="Special:PageHistory/Grammar Nazi">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Grammar_Nazi" title="Talk:Grammar Nazi"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Grammar_Nazi" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Grammar Nazi">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Grammar_Nazi" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Grammar Nazi">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grammar_Nazi&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Grammar_Nazi/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> In my perusing of the wiki, I came across this article. It had very poorly written content, pedaled a particular viewpoint, and appeared to rely heavily on a single source, copying some sections nearly verbatim. See <span class="plainlinks"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Grammar_Nazi&oldid=1270278095">the article prior to my revisions</a></span>. <br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I have spent the last couple of days completely overhauling the article, adding relevant sources, writing to a neutral point of view, and revising the flow. I'm looking to get this article reclassified to at least B-class, so I'd appreciate some experienced eyes upon it. Any suggestions to improve it are also appreciated! </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Anchovyx" title="User:Anchovyx"><span style="color:#e02407;"><b>anchovy</b></span></a> <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Anchovyx" title="User talk:Anchovyx"><sup><span style="color:#e8566e">TALK</span></sup></a>⁄<a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/Anchovyx" title="Special:Contributions/Anchovyx"><sub><span style="color:#85051a">CONT</span></sub></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Anchovyx-20250127022900-Grammar_Nazi" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:29, 27 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Anchovyx-20250127022900-Grammar_Nazi"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Anchovyx-20250127022900-Grammar_Nazi"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_LEvalyn" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_LEvalyn-Grammar_Nazi-20250202033900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_LEvalyn-Grammar_Nazi-20250202033900"></span>Comments from LEvalyn<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_LEvalyn-Grammar_Nazi-20250202033900"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Grammar_Nazi/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from LEvalyn"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-LEvalyn-20250202033900-Comments_from_LEvalyn"></span>Thanks for tackling an article which certainly was in a dire state. The newly-detailed "History" section is particularly an improvement. As some suggestions for the next places to improve, I have a few thoughts: </p> <ul><li>Most vital would be sourcing the two remaining unsourced sections: the bit about the soup nazi, and the second half of the "Grammatical purism" section. There will surely be sources you can crib from at the <a href="/wiki/Soup_Nazi" class="mw-redirect" title="Soup Nazi">Soup Nazi</a> article, but for the latter, you may have to do a bit of digging.</li> <li>The "Cultural impact" section feels lightweight and disjointed. If it were me, I think I'd put the two humorous songs together in one paragraph as another part of "Widespread use", and I move the bit about education -- which is about grammar pedantry rather than the specific term Grammar Nazi -- to somewhere in the "Grammatical purism" section.</li> <li>I wonder if there are better subject heading titles for the "Criticisms" sections. What we have here is one section criticizing 'grammar nazis' <i>themselves</i>, and one section criticizing the <i>term</i> grammar nazi. Both certainly belong in this article, but could be distinguished more from each other. Maybe the article needs a section called something like "Characteristics of a 'Grammar Nazi'"?</li> <li>The lead mentions that corrections are often humorous, but the article doesn't say much about that. Perhaps <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s10993-014-9344-9">this source</a> would allow for saying more.</li> <li><a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://discovery.ucl.ac.uk/id/eprint/10104661/">This source</a> might also be useful for discussing the 'dilution' of Nazi as a term.</li></ul> <p>Good luck with your continued work on this article! <a href="/wiki/User:LEvalyn" title="User:LEvalyn"><span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> 🌸</small></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:LEvalyn" title="User talk:LEvalyn">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-LEvalyn-20250202033900-Comments_from_LEvalyn" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:39, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-LEvalyn-20250202033900-Comments_from_LEvalyn"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-LEvalyn-20250202033900-Comments_from_LEvalyn"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Anchovyx-20250202110000-LEvalyn-20250202033900"></span>Thanks a ton for your insight!</dd> <dd>Distinguishing between "Grammar Nazi", <i>the term</i>, and Grammar pedantry in general, isn't something I had considered.</dd> <dd>The subject lines were carry-overs from the article's previous state. Out of respect for previous editors and per my own inexperience, I kept the original headings. I'll definitely have a look at reworking them.</dd> <dd>I'll also dissolve <i>Cultural impact</i> per your suggestion.</dd> <dd>Another huge thanks for finding me those sources. It was a struggle trying to find sources that specifically talk about the dilution of the term "nazi", as I just kept finding studies on Nazi-era and post-Nazi-era literature, among other general studies about the holocaust and holocaust denial. I'll check those sources out and probably include them.</dd> <dd>On the "humor" mention in the lead, it was another thing I took from the previous version and just improved the language without really double checking it was mentioned in the body.</dd> <dd>I cannot thank you enough, you've gone above and beyond what I was expecting from this process.</dd> <dd>Much love and happy editing! <a href="/wiki/User:Anchovyx" title="User:Anchovyx"><span style="color:#e02407;"><b>anchovy</b></span></a> <a href="/wiki/User_talk:Anchovyx" title="User talk:Anchovyx"><sup><span style="color:#e8566e">TALK</span></sup></a>⁄<a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/Anchovyx" title="Special:Contributions/Anchovyx"><sub><span style="color:#85051a">CONT</span></sub></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Anchovyx-20250202110000-LEvalyn-20250202033900" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:00, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Anchovyx-20250202110000-LEvalyn-20250202033900"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Anchovyx-20250202110000-LEvalyn-20250202033900"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-LEvalyn-20250202193000-Anchovyx-20250202110000"></span>Often a fresh set of eyes can see things totally differently! Happy to help. <a href="/wiki/User:LEvalyn" title="User:LEvalyn"><span style="color: #6703fc">~ L</span><small> 🌸</small></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:LEvalyn" title="User talk:LEvalyn">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-LEvalyn-20250202193000-Anchovyx-20250202110000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">19:30, 2 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-LEvalyn-20250202193000-Anchovyx-20250202110000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-LEvalyn-20250202193000-Anchovyx-20250202110000"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Lucky_Loser_(book)" data-mw-thread-id="h-Lucky_Loser_(book)-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"><span id="Lucky_Loser_.28book.29"></span><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Lucky_Loser_(book)-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Lucky_Loser_(book)/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Lucky Loser (book)/archive1">Lucky Loser (book)</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Lucky_Loser_(book)-Language_and_literature-20240926185500"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Lucky_Loser_(book)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Lucky Loser (book)"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Lucky Loser (book)"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lisha2037-20240926185500-Lucky_Loser_(book)"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Special:EditPage/Lucky Loser (book)">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lucky_Loser_(book)&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Special:PageHistory/Lucky Loser (book)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Talk:Lucky Loser (book)"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Lucky Loser (book)">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Lucky_Loser_(book)" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Lucky Loser (book)">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Lucky_Loser_(book)&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Lucky_Loser_(book)/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because... </p><p>Hi. I recently created this article on a book written by two Pulitzer Prize winning authors. It’s about Donald trump’s financial and business life and is bound to reach #1 on the NYT list. Looking for people to improve the summary and maybe add a new section or two covering release and promotion. Also open to feedback on language and prose. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Lisha2037" title="User:Lisha2037">Lisha2037</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lisha2037" title="User talk:Lisha2037">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lisha2037-20240926185500-Lucky_Loser_(book)" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">18:55, 26 September 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lisha2037-20240926185500-Lucky_Loser_(book)"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lisha2037-20240926185500-Lucky_Loser_(book)"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720_4" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_4-Lucky_Loser_(book)-20241219232900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_4-Lucky_Loser_(book)-20241219232900"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720_4-Lucky_Loser_(book)-20241219232900"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Lucky_Loser_(book)/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241219232900-Comments_from_Z1720_4"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Lisha2037" title="User:Lisha2037">Lisha2037</a>:</span> I am sorry that it has taken so long to get feedback. Some comments below: </p> <ul><li>The second half of the "Critical reception" follows an "X said Y" format, and relies upon quotes. I think this can be summarised and reworded to focus on themes, rather than choosing specific reviewers to highlight their comments.</li> <li>I am surprised that there haven't been more sources about this book. I suggest looking in Google News, <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LIBRARY" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LIBRARY">WP:LIBRARY</a>, or your local library system to find additional sources.</li> <li>Is there any information on sales of the book?</li> <li>" "ABOUT LUCKY LOSER"." Per <a href="/wiki/MOS:ALLCAPS" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:ALLCAPS">MOS:ALLCAPS</a>, this should be in sentence case.</li></ul> <p>I hope this helps. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241219232900-Comments_from_Z1720_4" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:29, 19 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241219232900-Comments_from_Z1720_4"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241219232900-Comments_from_Z1720_4"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Philosophy_and_religion" data-mw-thread-id="h-Philosophy_and_religion"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Philosophy_and_religion"></span>Philosophy and religion<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Philosophy_and_religion"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=9" title="Edit section: Philosophy and religion"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Orphic_Hymns" data-mw-thread-id="h-Orphic_Hymns-Philosophy_and_religion"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Orphic_Hymns-Philosophy_and_religion"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Orphic_Hymns/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Orphic Hymns/archive1">Orphic Hymns</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Orphic_Hymns-Philosophy_and_religion"></span></h3></div> <dl><dd><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Orphic_Hymns" title="Orphic Hymns"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Orphic_Hymns" title="Special:EditPage/Orphic Hymns">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Orphic_Hymns&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Orphic_Hymns" title="Special:PageHistory/Orphic Hymns">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Orphic_Hymns" title="Talk:Orphic Hymns"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Orphic_Hymns" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Orphic Hymns">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Orphic_Hymns" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Orphic Hymns">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Orphic_Hymns&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <span class="plainlinksneverexpand"><a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Orphic_Hymns/archive1&action=watch">Watch review</a></span></dd> <dd>This review is too large to display here. Please <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Orphic_Hymns/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Orphic Hymns/archive1">go to the review directly</a>.</dd> <dd><b>Date added</b>: 8 February 2025, 14:09 UTC</dd> <dd><b>Last edit</b>: 15 February 2025, 00:39 UTC</dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Social_sciences_and_society" data-mw-thread-id="h-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"></span>Social sciences and society<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=10" title="Edit section: Social sciences and society"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Senior_assassin" data-mw-thread-id="h-Senior_assassin-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217183600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Senior_assassin-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217183600"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Senior_assassin/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Senior assassin/archive1">Senior assassin</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Senior_assassin-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217183600"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Senior_assassin/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Senior assassin"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Senior_assassin" title="Senior assassin"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Johnson524-20250217183600-Senior_assassin"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Senior_assassin" title="Special:EditPage/Senior assassin">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Senior_assassin&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Senior_assassin" title="Special:PageHistory/Senior assassin">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Senior_assassin" title="Talk:Senior assassin"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Senior_assassin" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Senior assassin">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Senior_assassin" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Senior assassin">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Senior_assassin&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Senior_assassin/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I am happy with the sources of the article, but want to know if it reads well to someone other than myself, especially as these games are due to start up soon. Cheers! <a href="/wiki/User:Johnson524" title="User:Johnson524"><b><span style="color:orange;">Johnson</span></b></a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Johnson524" title="User talk:Johnson524"><b><span style="color:blue;">524</span></b></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Johnson524-20250217183600-Senior_assassin" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">18:36, 17 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Johnson524-20250217183600-Senior_assassin"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Johnson524-20250217183600-Senior_assassin"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Elliot_Rodger" data-mw-thread-id="h-Elliot_Rodger-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217041700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Elliot_Rodger-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217041700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Elliot_Rodger/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Elliot Rodger/archive1">Elliot Rodger</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Elliot_Rodger-Social_sciences_and_society-20250217041700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Elliot_Rodger/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Elliot Rodger"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Elliot_Rodger" title="Elliot Rodger"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Shoot_for_the_Stars-20250217041700-Elliot_Rodger"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Elliot_Rodger" title="Special:EditPage/Elliot Rodger">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Elliot_Rodger&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Elliot_Rodger" title="Special:PageHistory/Elliot Rodger">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Elliot_Rodger" title="Talk:Elliot Rodger"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Elliot_Rodger" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Elliot Rodger">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Elliot_Rodger" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Elliot Rodger">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Elliot_Rodger&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Elliot_Rodger/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I am wanting to bring it to GA. I want to make sure everything is good before nominating. <a href="/wiki/User:Shoot_for_the_Stars" title="User:Shoot for the Stars">Shoot for the Stars</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Shoot_for_the_Stars" title="User talk:Shoot for the Stars">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Shoot_for_the_Stars-20250217041700-Elliot_Rodger" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:17, 17 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Shoot_for_the_Stars-20250217041700-Elliot_Rodger"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Shoot_for_the_Stars-20250217041700-Elliot_Rodger"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Evolutionary_economics" data-mw-thread-id="h-Evolutionary_economics-Social_sciences_and_society-20250213160200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Evolutionary_economics-Social_sciences_and_society-20250213160200"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Evolutionary_economics/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Evolutionary economics/archive1">Evolutionary economics</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Evolutionary_economics-Social_sciences_and_society-20250213160200"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Evolutionary_economics/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Evolutionary economics"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Evolutionary_economics" title="Evolutionary economics"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Econ_angoryushev-20250213160200-Evolutionary_economics"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Evolutionary_economics" title="Special:EditPage/Evolutionary economics">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Evolutionary_economics&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Evolutionary_economics" title="Special:PageHistory/Evolutionary economics">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Evolutionary_economics" title="Talk:Evolutionary economics"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Evolutionary_economics" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Evolutionary economics">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Evolutionary_economics" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Evolutionary economics">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Evolutionary_economics&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Evolutionary_economics/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> This article explores the origins and follows the development of the evolutionary approach in economics. The article lay dormant for many years before a major revamp in 2023-2025 and a reassessment in 2025. It would be great if one could give advise on whether to go straight to FAC or try GA/A-class first and introduce further improvements to the article. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/w/index.php?title=User:Econ_angoryushev&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="User:Econ angoryushev (page does not exist)">Econ angoryushev</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Econ_angoryushev" title="User talk:Econ angoryushev">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Econ_angoryushev-20250213160200-Evolutionary_economics" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:02, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Econ_angoryushev-20250213160200-Evolutionary_economics"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Econ_angoryushev-20250213160200-Evolutionary_economics"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Victoria_Starmer" data-mw-thread-id="h-Victoria_Starmer-Social_sciences_and_society-20250212172300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Victoria_Starmer-Social_sciences_and_society-20250212172300"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Victoria_Starmer/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Victoria Starmer/archive1">Victoria Starmer</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Victoria_Starmer-Social_sciences_and_society-20250212172300"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Victoria_Starmer/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Victoria Starmer"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Victoria_Starmer" title="Victoria Starmer"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-MSincccc-20250212172300-Victoria_Starmer"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Victoria_Starmer" title="Special:EditPage/Victoria Starmer">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Victoria_Starmer&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Victoria_Starmer" title="Special:PageHistory/Victoria Starmer">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Victoria_Starmer" title="Talk:Victoria Starmer"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Victoria_Starmer" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Victoria Starmer">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Victoria_Starmer" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Victoria Starmer">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Victoria_Starmer&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Victoria_Starmer/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p><p>I've listed this article for peer review as it has recently been expanded, and I believe its quality can be further improved. <a href="/wiki/Victoria_Starmer" title="Victoria Starmer">Victoria Starmer</a>, known for her work in the legal sector and public service, is the wife of Sir <a href="/wiki/Keir_Starmer" title="Keir Starmer">Keir Starmer</a>, the <a href="/wiki/Prime_Minister_of_the_United_Kingdom" title="Prime Minister of the United Kingdom">Prime Minister of the United Kingdom</a>. All suggestions are welcome, as I'd like to hear the community's thoughts on the article. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:MSincccc" title="User:MSincccc">MSincccc</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:MSincccc" title="User talk:MSincccc">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-MSincccc-20250212172300-Victoria_Starmer" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:23, 12 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-MSincccc-20250212172300-Victoria_Starmer"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-MSincccc-20250212172300-Victoria_Starmer"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-RoySmith-20250212224000-MSincccc-20250212172300"></span>Per your request, I took a look at the article. I know this is going to sound harsh, but please take it in the helpful and supportive way it is intended: I honestly don't see how this person is notable, i.e. why we need an article about them at all. I think the lead says it pretty well: <style data-mw-deduplicate="TemplateStyles:r1244412712">.mw-parser-output .templatequote{overflow:hidden;margin:1em 0;padding:0 32px}.mw-parser-output .templatequotecite{line-height:1.5em;text-align:left;margin-top:0}@media(min-width:500px){.mw-parser-output .templatequotecite{padding-left:1.6em}}</style><blockquote class="templatequote"><p>Starmer has generally kept a low public profile, rarely engaging in political activities or media appearances. Despite this, she has occasionally been seen supporting her husband at key political events.</p></blockquote> which makes it sound like interest in her is only due to who she's married to. See <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:NOTINHERITED" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:NOTINHERITED">WP:NOTINHERITED</a>. Things like the details of her religious observances or the dietary practices of her children seem like minor details that shouldn't be covered in an encyclopedia article. I'm sorry I couldn't be more positive. <a href="/wiki/User:RoySmith" title="User:RoySmith">RoySmith</a> <a href="/wiki/User_talk:RoySmith" title="User talk:RoySmith">(talk)</a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-RoySmith-20250212224000-MSincccc-20250212172300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">22:40, 12 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-RoySmith-20250212224000-MSincccc-20250212172300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-RoySmith-20250212224000-MSincccc-20250212172300"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-MSincccc-20250213034000-RoySmith-20250212224000"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:RoySmith" title="User:RoySmith">RoySmith</a> Thanks for your suggestions. I have dropped the mention of her children's religious practices. Any further suggestions will be also appreciated. Regards. <a href="/wiki/User:MSincccc" title="User:MSincccc">MSincccc</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:MSincccc" title="User talk:MSincccc">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-MSincccc-20250213034000-RoySmith-20250212224000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:40, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-MSincccc-20250213034000-RoySmith-20250212224000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-MSincccc-20250213034000-RoySmith-20250212224000"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Economy_of_Tanzania" data-mw-thread-id="h-Economy_of_Tanzania-Social_sciences_and_society-20250113060100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Economy_of_Tanzania-Social_sciences_and_society-20250113060100"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Economy_of_Tanzania/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Economy of Tanzania/archive1">Economy of Tanzania</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Economy_of_Tanzania-Social_sciences_and_society-20250113060100"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Economy_of_Tanzania/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Economy of Tanzania"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Economy of Tanzania"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Brachy0008-20250113060100-Economy_of_Tanzania"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Special:EditPage/Economy of Tanzania">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Economy_of_Tanzania&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Special:PageHistory/Economy of Tanzania">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Talk:Economy of Tanzania"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Economy of Tanzania">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Economy_of_Tanzania" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Economy of Tanzania">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Economy_of_Tanzania&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Economy_of_Tanzania/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because im looking to improve it to GA. <s>(i did this for a dare)</s> </p><p>it would help expand my scope of articles a bit, as i have never set foot on anything related to tanzania </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Brachy0008" title="User:Brachy0008"><b><span style="color:blue">brachy</span><small><span style="color:black">08</span></small></b></a> <sub><small><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Brachy0008" title="User talk:Brachy0008"><span style="color:green">(chat here lol)</span></a></small></sub> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Brachy0008-20250113060100-Economy_of_Tanzania" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:01, 13 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Brachy0008-20250113060100-Economy_of_Tanzania"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" 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(UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-TarnishedPath-20250101101800-Ben_Roberts-Smith"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-TarnishedPath-20250101101800-Ben_Roberts-Smith"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Tham_Nguyen" data-mw-thread-id="h-Tham_Nguyen-Social_sciences_and_society-20241222143700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Tham_Nguyen-Social_sciences_and_society-20241222143700"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tham_Nguyen/archive2" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Tham Nguyen/archive2">Tham Nguyen</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Tham_Nguyen-Social_sciences_and_society-20241222143700"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span 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title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Tham Nguyen">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tham_Nguyen" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Tham Nguyen">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Tham_Nguyen&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tham_Nguyen/archive2&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd> <dd><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Tham_Nguyen/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Tham Nguyen/archive1"><b>Previous peer review</b></a></dd></dl> <p><br/> Just wanted to improve the article! Broaden some more information and rewrite some of the grammar so it's better. :) <a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Arconning" title="User talk:Arconning">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Arconning-20241222143700-Tham_Nguyen" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:37, 22 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Arconning-20241222143700-Tham_Nguyen"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Arconning-20241222143700-Tham_Nguyen"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700-Arconning-20241222143700"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a>:</span> This isn't a review but I have some quick comments. Sorry it took so long for someone to respond. I fixed some minor punctuation issues myself because it would be quicker than typing out things like "please add a comma between these two phrases". <ul><li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">She and her husband had opened up a CrossFit gym in Baldoyle</q> - should be "have opened up"</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Her first competition after stopping for six years was the 2022 World Weightlifting Championships</q> - "after stopping for six years" in the middle of the sentence sounds a bit awkward to my ears, maybe change it to "Her first competition in six years"?</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Through her brother's contacts, she got into contact</q> - repetitive</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">She also trains with coach Beata Jung, the national coach of the Irish team.</q> - remove coach from in front of Jung's name, since it is redundant with "national coach" immediately after. I suggest you also put "national" right after "Irish" - so <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">She also trains with Beata Jung, the coach of the Irish national team</q> is my suggestion for the sentence since "national coach" makes it sound like she's a coach for the entire country of Ireland.</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">she then found out about Olympic weightlifting in a gym</q> - sounds awkward but I can't quite figure out why - maybe change "found out" to "discovered"?</li> <li>In the lead, the majority of the sentences have the dependent clause in front of the independent clause - maybe reorder them so that it feels less repetitive and easier to read? For example, changing <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">Having narrowly failed to qualify for the 2024 Summer Olympics, she retired in April 2024</q> to <link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">She retired in April 2024 after narrowly failing to qualify for the 2024 Summer Olympics</q>? In my example, you immediately know what the subject of the sentence did and the reason why, which is less important (in my opinion at least), is after. Just my two cents on the matter.</li></ul></dd> <dd>If you have any questions, feel free to leave them here. Hope this helps (brilliant article by the way). Best regards, <span style="background-color:black; color:white; padding: 1.5px;"><a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white">Grumpylawnchair</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Grumpylawnchair" title="User talk:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white"><b>talk</b></span></a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700-Arconning-20241222143700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:37, 11 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700-Arconning-20241222143700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700-Arconning-20241222143700"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Arconning-20250211050400-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair">Grumpylawnchair</a> Thanks for the compliment! Hopefully I've addressed these, do you have any more comments to add? <a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Arconning" title="User talk:Arconning">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Arconning-20250211050400-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:04, 11 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Arconning-20250211050400-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Arconning-20250211050400-Grumpylawnchair-20250211043700"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800-Arconning-20250211050400"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a>:</span> I still think that "Irish national team" sounds more natural than "national Irish team", but that's your call. I'll analyze the article's grammar and sourcing deeper tomorrow, when I have more spare time, if that's alright with you. <span style="background-color:black; color:white; padding: 1.5px;"><a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white">Grumpylawnchair</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Grumpylawnchair" title="User talk:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white"><b>talk</b></span></a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800-Arconning-20250211050400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:08, 11 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800-Arconning-20250211050400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800-Arconning-20250211050400"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Arconning-20250211051000-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair">Grumpylawnchair</a> All good :) <a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Arconning" title="User talk:Arconning">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Arconning-20250211051000-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:10, 11 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Arconning-20250211051000-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Arconning-20250211051000-Grumpylawnchair-20250211050800"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Arconning-20250215100500-Arconning-20250211051000"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair">Grumpylawnchair</a> Just an update, would you have any more comments? <a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Arconning" title="User talk:Arconning">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Arconning-20250215100500-Arconning-20250211051000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">10:05, 15 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Arconning-20250215100500-Arconning-20250211051000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Arconning-20250215100500-Arconning-20250211051000"></span> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250215155200-Arconning-20250215100500"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a>:</span> Sorry, I suddenly got very ill with a stomach infection. I'll take a look at it in the next couple of days. Sorry for the delay! Regards, <span style="background-color:black; color:white; padding: 1.5px;"><a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white">Grumpylawnchair</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Grumpylawnchair" title="User talk:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white"><b>talk</b></span></a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Grumpylawnchair-20250215155200-Arconning-20250215100500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:52, 15 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250215155200-Arconning-20250215100500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250215155200-Arconning-20250215100500"></span></dd></dl></dd> <dd><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250218043900-Arconning-20250211051000"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Arconning" title="User:Arconning">Arconning</a>:</span> I have no further comments. Your article is really thorough and you should be proud. :) Regards, <span style="background-color:black; color:white; padding: 1.5px;"><a href="/wiki/User:Grumpylawnchair" title="User:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white">Grumpylawnchair</span></a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Grumpylawnchair" title="User talk:Grumpylawnchair"><span style="color:white"><b>talk</b></span></a>)</span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Grumpylawnchair-20250218043900-Arconning-20250211051000" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:39, 18 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Grumpylawnchair-20250218043900-Arconning-20250211051000"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span 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title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Troubled teen industry">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Troubled_teen_industry&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Troubled_teen_industry/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because there is room for improvement and I could advice from more experinced editors on how to improve this article. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:1keyhole" title="User:1keyhole">1keyhole</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:1keyhole" title="User talk:1keyhole">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-1keyhole-20241222021300-Troubled_teen_industry" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:13, 22 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-1keyhole-20241222021300-Troubled_teen_industry"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-1keyhole-20241222021300-Troubled_teen_industry"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Gitmo_playlist" data-mw-thread-id="h-Gitmo_playlist-Social_sciences_and_society-20241027073100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Gitmo_playlist-Social_sciences_and_society-20241027073100"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Gitmo_playlist/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Gitmo playlist/archive1">Gitmo playlist</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Gitmo_playlist-Social_sciences_and_society-20241027073100"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a 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href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Gitmo_playlist" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Gitmo playlist">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Gitmo_playlist" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Gitmo playlist">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Gitmo_playlist&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Gitmo_playlist/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I think I got this article as far as I can apart from a few minor things, but I'm not super experienced with writing, nor was I super familiar with this topic before I started researching. I was hoping to get some feedback to bring up the quality of the article. Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Based5290" title="User:Based5290">Based5290 :3</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Based5290" title="User talk:Based5290">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Based5290-20241027073100-Gitmo_playlist" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:31, 27 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Based5290-20241027073100-Gitmo_playlist"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Based5290-20241027073100-Gitmo_playlist"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Airship_3" data-mw-thread-id="h-Airship_3-Gitmo_playlist-20241031235700"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Airship_3-Gitmo_playlist-20241031235700"></span>Airship<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Airship_3-Gitmo_playlist-20241031235700"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Gitmo_playlist/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Airship"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700-Airship_3"></span>Article looks generally good, and ready for a formal review process like GA, which I've kept in mind while reading it. My only comment is that the title chosen is somewhat odd. By the looks of it, there are four names for the "playlist", but no actual playlist is known to have existed and the songs seem to have been more semi-randomly chosen by guards. In addition, most of the article is not about anything that can be called a "playlist", but instead about the mechanisms and reception of the torture. I would thus suggest renaming the article to "Auditory torture at Guantanamo Bay" or something similar. </p><p>You may also want to expand the background section to go into more detail on use of auditory torture by US forces outside Guantanamo Bay. For example, <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/middle_east/3042907.stm">this 2003 BBC News article</a> talks about auditory torture being used in Iraq. You could also specify specific songs or incidents: see <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://www.mic.com/articles/87851/11-popular-songs-the-cia-used-to-torture-prisoners-in-the-war-on-terror">this list of songs used on prisoners</a>, or <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://www.andyworthington.co.uk/2008/12/15/a-history-of-music-torture-in-the-war-on-terror/">this fairly comprehensive source</a> published by a subject-matter expert, so you don't have to worry about <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:SELFPUB" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:SELFPUB">WP:SELFPUB</a>. <a href="/wiki/User:AirshipJungleman29" title="User:AirshipJungleman29">~~ AirshipJungleman29</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:AirshipJungleman29" title="User talk:AirshipJungleman29">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700-Airship_3" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:57, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700-Airship_3"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700-Airship_3"></span> </p> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Based5290-20241101012500-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700"></span>The title apparently came about from someone copy pasting a bunch of text from a newspaper to start this article, but I wouldn't be opposed to changing it. However, by a very rough count, only about half of the sources focus on Gitmo specifically, while the others generally lump it in with the other detention centers. Maybe it should be renamed to something like "Auditory torture in the War on Terror" (which should be as simple as moving some info from background to use and changing a few words around)?</dd> <dd>Thanks for the suggestion to include more information in the background section and this review in general. <a href="/wiki/User:Based5290" title="User:Based5290">Based5290 :3</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Based5290" title="User talk:Based5290">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Based5290-20241101012500-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:25, 1 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Based5290-20241101012500-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Based5290-20241101012500-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235700"></span></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720_5" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_5-Gitmo_playlist-20241129141100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_5-Gitmo_playlist-20241129141100"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720_5-Gitmo_playlist-20241129141100"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Gitmo_playlist/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241129141100-Comments_from_Z1720_5"></span>Comments after a quick skim: </p> <ul><li>Per <a href="/wiki/MOS:ALLCAPS" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:ALLCAPS">MOS:ALLCAPS</a>, titles in a citation probably should not be in all caps.</li> <li>Some paragraphs are quite long, making it hard to read (especially on a mobile device). I suggest splitting up some of the paragraphs: my recommended target length is 4-6 sentences per paragraph.</li> <li><a class="external text" href="https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page">Wikimedia Commons</a> might have some images that could be added to the article.</li> <li>Additional places that you might find sources are <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://scholar.google.com/">Google Scholar</a>, <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://archive.org/">Archive.org</a>, <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LIBRARY" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LIBRARY">WP:LIBRARY</a> or your local library system.</li></ul> <p>I hope this helps. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241129141100-Comments_from_Z1720_5" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:11, 29 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241129141100-Comments_from_Z1720_5"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241129141100-Comments_from_Z1720_5"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Cisnormativity" data-mw-thread-id="h-Cisnormativity-Social_sciences_and_society-20241004215500"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Cisnormativity-Social_sciences_and_society-20241004215500"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cisnormativity/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Cisnormativity/archive1">Cisnormativity</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Cisnormativity-Social_sciences_and_society-20241004215500"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cisnormativity/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Cisnormativity"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Cisnormativity" title="Cisnormativity"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241004215500-Cisnormativity"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Cisnormativity" title="Special:EditPage/Cisnormativity">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cisnormativity&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Cisnormativity" title="Special:PageHistory/Cisnormativity">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Cisnormativity" title="Talk:Cisnormativity"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Cisnormativity" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Cisnormativity">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Cisnormativity" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Cisnormativity">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cisnormativity&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cisnormativity/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I would like to hear how close this article is to passing a featured article candidacy. It is largely unchanged since I brought it to GA last December. At the time, I remember doing as comprehensive a review as I possibly could of the available academic sources discussing the topic, but I've never touched the FA process before, so any input is very welcome! </p><p>Thanks, <b style="font-family:Monospace">-- <a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User talk:Maddy from Celeste">WAVEDASH</a>)</b> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241004215500-Cisnormativity" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:55, 4 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241004215500-Cisnormativity"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241004215500-Cisnormativity"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Airship_4" data-mw-thread-id="h-Airship_4-Cisnormativity-20241031235600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Airship_4-Cisnormativity-20241031235600"></span>Airship<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Airship_4-Cisnormativity-20241031235600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cisnormativity/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Airship"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship_4"></span>As requested, I'll do a review similar to what I would provide at FAC, in order to help you get a good idea of what reviewers might pick up on. I'm not that familiar with the topic, so it'll likely focus more on prose than sourcing, coverage, or other, less superficial areas. </p> <ul><li>Very good first paragraph. Fulfils <a href="/wiki/MOS:INTRO" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:INTRO">MOS:INTRO</a> as good as any I have seen.</li> <li>The second sentence of the second paragraph is a bit lengthy and long-winded. This paragraph is also quite focused on the effects on cisnormativity on the healthcare of transgender people; as <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LEAD" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LEAD">WP:LEAD</a> favours summarising the whole article, it would be nice if the other effects outlined in "Manifestations" were also summarised in the lead. For example, a sentence summarising "Education" would be nice.</li> <li>I suppose "trans" is a common enough word to not need one, but perhaps "cis" as the shortened form of "cisgender" could use a gloss before its first use?</li></ul> <dl><dt>Body</dt></dl> <ul><li>I would put Serano's quote later in the first paragraph, and start with the when/where coinage of "cisnormativity". Starts the article body off more focused/encyclopedic and less essay-like.</li> <li>Although the separation between the first and third lead paragraphs works better, I feel that the sections "Definition" and "Intersectionality..." could be merged, especially as the "Definition" section already considers related concepts.</li> <li>I must compliment this article's prose, I'm really finding very little to pick at.</li> <li>Take care with the images though—<a href="/wiki/MOS:IRELEV" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:IRELEV">MOS:IRELEV</a> notes that they <span style="color:green;">"must be significant and relevant in the topic's context, not primarily decorative"</span>. With the caption, the poster image is a little tangential—not completely significant in the topic's context. The simple sex-segregated diagram is however an excellent representation.</li> <li>Short paragraphs generally do not warrant their own subsections per <a href="/wiki/MOS:OVERSECTION" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:OVERSECTION">MOS:OVERSECTION</a>. Consider ways to combine short subsections, so that the prose is less cluttered.</li> <li>Although "Transmedicalism" is a section heading, its meaning is never actually explained, and it is a <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:SEEALSO" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:SEEALSO">WP:SEEALSO</a> link. The reader is sort of left wondering.</li></ul> <p>Otherwise, extremely high-quality article, in my opinion. I'll almost certainly support if you ping me at the FAC nom. <a href="/wiki/User:AirshipJungleman29" title="User:AirshipJungleman29">~~ AirshipJungleman29</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:AirshipJungleman29" title="User talk:AirshipJungleman29">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship_4" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:56, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship_4"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600-Airship_4"></span> </p> <ul><li><span class="template-ping"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241129140600-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"></span>@<a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a>:</span> Are you still interested in receiving more comments, or should this be closed? <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241129140600-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:06, 29 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241129140600-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241129140600-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241129151900-Z1720-20241129140600"></span>Oh, thank you, Z1720 and AirshipJungleman29. I haven't been very active this month and didn't see these comments. Will take some time this weekend to address these! <b style="font-family:Monospace">-- <a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User talk:Maddy from Celeste">WAVEDASH</a>)</b> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241129151900-Z1720-20241129140600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">15:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241129151900-Z1720-20241129140600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241129151900-Z1720-20241129140600"></span></dd></dl></li></ul> <dl><dd><ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"></span>Changed the few occurrences of <i>cis</i> to <i>cisgender</i></li> <li>Merged the intersectionality section into definition.</li> <li>Removed the image in question.</li> <li>Changed the section heading to the more general "internalized transphobia", which is explained and wikilinked.</li> <li>Adjusted the second lead paragraph for balance of topics</li></ul></dd> <dd><div class="paragraphbreak" style="margin-top:0.5em"></div>@<a href="/wiki/User:AirshipJungleman29" title="User:AirshipJungleman29">AirshipJungleman29</a>: I'm sorry that it took so long. I've done some simpler revisions now. I'm not quite awake enough today to think about the overall structure of the manifestations section, so I'll try to get back to you on that tomorrow. <b style="font-family:Monospace">-- <a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User talk:Maddy from Celeste">WAVEDASH</a>)</b> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:42, 1 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200-AirshipJungleman29-20241031235600"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241206232600-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200"></span>Welp, I did not in fact get back on to this tomorrow. It hasn't been a very "getting things done" kind of couple of weeks. I'll definitely look at this when I can, but if y'all want to close this request in the meantime, that's find by me. <b style="font-family:Monospace">-- <a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User talk:Maddy from Celeste">WAVEDASH</a>)</b> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241206232600-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:26, 6 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241206232600-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241206232600-Maddy_from_Celeste-20241201174200"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="RoySmith" data-mw-thread-id="h-RoySmith-Cisnormativity-20250214000500"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-RoySmith-Cisnormativity-20250214000500"></span>RoySmith<span data-mw-comment-end="h-RoySmith-Cisnormativity-20250214000500"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cisnormativity/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: RoySmith"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20250214000500-RoySmith"></span>Just a few quick comments: </p> <ul><li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">The term cisnormativity was coined in a 2009 article</q> How do we know that article was the first use of the term? Also, it seems odd that this is cited to one source but the next statement ("which defines...") is cited to a different source. Are you sure that's correct?</li> <li><link rel="mw-deduplicated-inline-style" href="mw-data:TemplateStyles:r1248585704"><q class="inline-quote-talk">According to the 2009 JANAC article</q> I would have phrased this as "According to Tordoff et al".</li> <li>I'm not sure that "erase", used in the context you are using it here, i.e. <a href="/wiki/Queer_erasure" title="Queer erasure">Queer erasure</a>, is appropriately formal language for an encyclopedia, per <a href="/wiki/MOS:NEO" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:NEO">MOS:NEO</a>, at least without defining it here.</li></ul> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:Maddy_from_Celeste" title="User:Maddy from Celeste">Maddy from Celeste</a>:</span> Comments above. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20250214000500-RoySmith" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:05, 14 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20250214000500-RoySmith"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20250214000500-RoySmith"></span></dd></dl> <p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Spoiler_effect" data-mw-thread-id="h-Spoiler_effect-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Spoiler_effect-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Spoiler_effect/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Spoiler effect/archive1">Spoiler effect</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Spoiler_effect-Social_sciences_and_society-20241001001200"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Spoiler_effect/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Spoiler effect"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Spoiler_effect" title="Spoiler effect"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Closed_Limelike_Curves-20241001001200-Spoiler_effect"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Spoiler_effect" title="Special:EditPage/Spoiler effect">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Spoiler_effect&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Spoiler_effect" title="Special:PageHistory/Spoiler effect">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Spoiler_effect" title="Talk:Spoiler effect"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Spoiler_effect" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Spoiler effect">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Spoiler_effect" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Spoiler effect">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Spoiler_effect&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Spoiler_effect/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because it seems like an important topic in this field, gets a lot of traffic, and needs some more work to become a solid article. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Closed_Limelike_Curves" title="User:Closed Limelike Curves">– Closed Limelike Curves</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Closed_Limelike_Curves" title="User talk:Closed Limelike Curves">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Closed_Limelike_Curves-20241001001200-Spoiler_effect" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:12, 1 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Closed_Limelike_Curves-20241001001200-Spoiler_effect"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Closed_Limelike_Curves-20241001001200-Spoiler_effect"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comments_from_Z1720_6" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_6-Spoiler_effect-20241129140400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comments_from_Z1720_6-Spoiler_effect-20241129140400"></span>Comments from Z1720<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comments_from_Z1720_6-Spoiler_effect-20241129140400"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Spoiler_effect/archive1&action=edit&section=T-2" title="Edit section: Comments from Z1720"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <p><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Z1720-20241129140400-Comments_from_Z1720_6"></span>Comments after a quick skim: </p> <ul><li>There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum (except for the lead)</li> <li>Don't bold text in a citation (Santucci, Jack; Shugart, Matthew; Latner, Michael S. (2023-10-16))</li> <li>Keep working to find additional sources that can be added to the article. Sources can be found at <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://scholar.google.ca/">Google Scholar</a>, <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://archive.org/">Archive.org</a>, <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:LIBRARY" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:LIBRARY">WP:LIBRARY</a> or your local library system.</li></ul> <p>Hope this helps. <a href="/wiki/User:Z1720" title="User:Z1720">Z1720</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Z1720" title="User talk:Z1720">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Z1720-20241129140400-Comments_from_Z1720_6" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:04, 29 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Z1720-20241129140400-Comments_from_Z1720_6"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Z1720-20241129140400-Comments_from_Z1720_6"></span> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Comment_from_lethargilistic" data-mw-thread-id="h-Comment_from_lethargilistic-Spoiler_effect-20250109045600"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Comment_from_lethargilistic-Spoiler_effect-20250109045600"></span>Comment from lethargilistic<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Comment_from_lethargilistic-Spoiler_effect-20250109045600"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Spoiler_effect/archive1&action=edit&section=T-3" title="Edit section: Comment from lethargilistic"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Lethargilistic-20250109045600-Comment_from_lethargilistic"></span>One thing that leaps out to me immediately is that the article exclusively treats the spoiler effect as definitely real. This is disputed in at least two major ways. <ul><li>First, it is disputed on ideological grounds by third-party candidates and people who do not believe in electoral politics. And by the latter, I do not mean people who are anti-democracy or anti-collective-decision-making. I mean people who criticize electoral politics as a mechanism for democratic decision making, which is not uncommon among anti-state political movements. I am not necessarily saying that the article needs to cover this perspective <i>a lot</i>. However, not covering it at all seems to be a POV problem. <ul><li>Obviously, I am <i>not</i> suggesting that you put any of the following directly into the article because I am not a reliable source. However, I remembered writing an argument from this perspective not too long ago, so I share it in the interest of giving you some idea of what to look for. (Selfishly, really, so you don't accidentally find a fascist anti-democracy source first and interpret my suggestion through that lens.) <style data-mw-deduplicate="TemplateStyles:r1237805129">.mw-parser-output .talkquote{color:var(--color-base,#202122);background-color:#eaf8f4;border-left:3px solid #008560;padding:0 .8em;margin:0}.mw-parser-output .talkquote-by,.mw-parser-output .talkquote-source{margin-left:1.6em}.mw-parser-output .skin-vector-2022 .talkquote>:last-child{padding-bottom:0}@media screen{html.skin-theme-clientpref-night .mw-parser-output .talkquote{background-color:#0d261f}}@media screen and (prefers-color-scheme:dark){html.skin-theme-clientpref-os .mw-parser-output .talkquote{background-color:#0d261f}}</style><blockquote class="talkquote"><p>[In response to someone expressing initial skepticism of an argument from the spoiler effect and wondering what others thought.] It's leveraging the spoiler fallacy, which says that failing to vote for one person makes it more likely that the other one will win. Statistically, it has no effect because you are not part of the voting population. But interpersonally it feels true. The reason for that is obvious and non-trivial. Ultimately, the spoiler fallacy is (at my most generous) undecidable.<br/>Democrats prefer to direct people's anger towards spoilers rather than do politics that inspires people to vote. Because the Democrats are a capitalist party that is an antagonist of the left, using the spoiler fallacy to alienate the left is literally a win-win for them, too. It's easier. Lots of people are willing to go with it, especially since the Republicans are cartoon characters.</p></blockquote></li></ul></li> <li>Second, it is disputed by people who look at the data and observe that elections are very rarely decided within a margin where third-party votes actually cover the gap between the major parties. And that's just of the voting population; most elections everywhere where people are not forced to vote actually "decide" that nobody should win because abstention wins the popular vote. The article understandably focuses on cases where the third party candidate actually did get a significant portion of the vote, but that is rare. <ul><li>Additionally, when a third-party candidate does actually get a large share of the vote, consider the POV inherently involved in calling that third-party candidate a "spoiler." The major-party candidate who cries "spoiler" when they lose a three-way election was never <i>entitled</i> to win. The overall article should call the spoiler candidate a spoiler candidate because that perspective is what the article is <i>about</i>. However, it should not do so uncritically. As a Wikipedia article, the purpose of this text is not to validate (or, for that matter, disprove) the existence of the spoiler problem. It is to cover it from all significant sides, and that includes critique of the description of the problem.</li></ul></li></ul></li> <li>Additionally, when you say the spoiler effect is "unfair" in the article, it is unclear to me whom the article is saying it is unfair to. Major party candidates often say it is unfair to them because they perceive themselves as hindered by spoilers, as I just described. (For the purposes of this comment, take that at face value.) Minor party candidates often say the spoiler problem is unfair to them because the perception that someone voting their conscience is contributing to "spoiling" the election or is "voting for the other side" depresses interest in their campaigns and creates self-fulfilling prophecies.</li></ul> <p>Cheers, <a href="/wiki/User:Lethargilistic" title="User:Lethargilistic">lethargilistic</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Lethargilistic" title="User talk:Lethargilistic">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Lethargilistic-20250109045600-Comment_from_lethargilistic" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">04:56, 9 January 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Lethargilistic-20250109045600-Comment_from_lethargilistic"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Lethargilistic-20250109045600-Comment_from_lethargilistic"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="Lists" data-mw-thread-id="h-Lists-20241216114800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Lists-20241216114800"></span>Lists<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Lists-20241216114800"></span></h2><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review&action=edit&section=11" title="Edit section: Lists"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-bar"><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-metadata"></div><div class="ext-discussiontools-init-section-actions"></div></div></div> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" data-mw-thread-id="h-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates-Lists-20250213134100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates-Lists-20250213134100"></span><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates/archive1" title="Wikipedia:Peer review/Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates/archive1">Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates</a><span data-mw-comment-end="h-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates-Lists-20250213134100"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates/archive1&action=edit&section=T-1" title="Edit section: Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <dl><dd><div class="noprint plainlinks pr-header"><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates"><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Jolielover-20250213134100-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates"></span>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Special:EditPage/Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Special:PageHistory/Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Talk:Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Talk:Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates"><b>Article talk</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Talk:Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Special:EditPage/Talk:Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates">edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Talk:Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" title="Special:PageHistory/Talk:Invasive species in the United Arab Emirates">history</a>)</span> <b>·</b> <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates&action=watch"><b>Watch</b></a></span> • <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Peer_review/Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates/archive1&action=watch">Watch peer review</a><br/></div></dd></dl> <p><br/> I've listed this article for peer review because I wish for it to achieve Featured List status. I am welcome for improvements to it. I am also unsure of whether to change the title to "List of invasive species in the United Arab Emirates". I would like advice on whether I should do it or not; the list also does not cover every single invasive species, just the more notable ones discussed in a variety of sources. I hope that is fine. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Jolielover" title="User:Jolielover"><b style="font-family:helvetica;color:#7C0A02">jolielover♥</b></a><a href="/wiki/User_talk:Jolielover" title="User talk:Jolielover"><b style="font-family:helvetica;border:transparent;padding:0 9px;background:linear-gradient(#8B0000,black);color:#ff8c8c;border-radius:6px">talk</b></a> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Jolielover-20250213134100-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">13:41, 13 February 2025 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Jolielover-20250213134100-Invasive_species_in_the_United_Arab_Emirates"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span 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I wanted other editors opinions on how to broaden the scope of the outline/improve it. I have recently been adding legislation passed into law by George Washington into the outline, though I am unsure whether to continue with this direction. Any feedback would be much appreciated. </p><p>Thanks, <a href="/wiki/User:Atakes_Ris" title="User:Atakes Ris">Atakes Ris</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Atakes_Ris" title="User talk:Atakes Ris">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review#c-Atakes_Ris-20241216114800-Outline_of_George_Washington" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:48, 16 December 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Atakes_Ris-20241216114800-Outline_of_George_Washington"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Atakes_Ris-20241216114800-Outline_of_George_Washington"></span> </p><p><br/> </p> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading2 ext-discussiontools-init-section"><h2 id="WikiProject_peer_reviews" 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