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Reviewing</th></tr><tr><td class="sidebar-content"> <div class="plainlist"><ul><li><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_nominations/templates" title="Wikipedia:Good article nominations/templates">Templates</a></li><li><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_criteria" title="Wikipedia:Good article criteria">Criteria</a></li><li><a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_nominations/Instructions#Reviewing" title="Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions">Instructions</a></li></ul></div></td> </tr></tbody></table> <p><span class="plainlinks"><a href="/wiki/Arrangement_of_lines" title="Arrangement of lines"><b>Article</b></a> <span class="plainlinks">(<a href="/wiki/Special:EditPage/Arrangement_of_lines" title="Special:EditPage/Arrangement of lines">edit</a> | <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Arrangement_of_lines&veaction=edit">visual edit</a> | <a href="/wiki/Special:PageHistory/Arrangement_of_lines" title="Special:PageHistory/Arrangement of 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class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:48, 29 January 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20240129024800-GA_Review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20240129024800-GA_Review"></span> </p><p><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Electrou-20241008095000-GA_Review"></span>Reviewer:</b> <a href="/wiki/User:Electrou" title="User:Electrou">Electrou</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Electrou" title="User talk:Electrou">talk</a> <b>·</b> <a href="/wiki/Special:Contributions/Electrou" title="Special:Contributions/Electrou">contribs</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Electrou-20241008095000-GA_Review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">09:50, 8 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Electrou-20241008095000-GA_Review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Electrou-20241008095000-GA_Review"></span> </p><p><br/><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241014213500-GA_Review"></span> Article is clear and concise, no original research, no plagiarism, follows the Manual of Style guidelines, contains reliable sources and inline citations. I think it should have good article status. </p> <dl><dd><span class="template-ping">@<a href="/wiki/User:Electrou" title="User:Electrou">Electrou</a>:</span> Thanks, but should I expect a detailed review to come? The short text above does not meet the expected standards of depth and source checking for a review and you have also not followed the post-review steps from <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_nominations/Instructions" title="Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions">Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions</a>. As this appears to be your first GA review, perhaps <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_mentorship" title="Wikipedia:Good article mentorship">Wikipedia:Good article mentorship</a> would be helpful? —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241014213500-GA_Review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:35, 14 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241014213500-GA_Review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241014213500-GA_Review"></span></dd></dl> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Electrou-20241017184300-David_Eppstein-20241014213500"></span>Yes <span style="color:#183669"><a href="/wiki/User:Electrou" title="User:Electrou">Electrou (formerly Susbush)</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Electrou" title="User talk:Electrou">talk</a>) </span> <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Electrou-20241017184300-David_Eppstein-20241014213500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">18:43, 17 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Electrou-20241017184300-David_Eppstein-20241014213500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Electrou-20241017184300-David_Eppstein-20241014213500"></span> <dl><dd><b><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-DoctorWhoFan91-20241026055400-Electrou-20241017184300"></span>Comment</b>: Are you planning on reviewing this? Because other people would be willing to take it up for review, if you aren't gonna do it. <a href="/wiki/User:DoctorWhoFan91" title="User:DoctorWhoFan91">DoctorWhoFan91</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:DoctorWhoFan91" title="User talk:DoctorWhoFan91">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-DoctorWhoFan91-20241026055400-Electrou-20241017184300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:54, 26 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-DoctorWhoFan91-20241026055400-Electrou-20241017184300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-DoctorWhoFan91-20241026055400-Electrou-20241017184300"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading3"><h3 id="Crisco_1492" data-mw-thread-id="h-Crisco_1492-GA_Review-20241026164800"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Crisco_1492-GA_Review-20241026164800"></span>Crisco 1492<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Crisco_1492-GA_Review-20241026164800"></span></h3><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1&action=edit&section=2" title="Edit section: Crisco 1492"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241026164800-Crisco_1492"></span>Per WT:GAN, I will take over this review. As a caveat, please do not expect any comprehensiveness comments, as I am very much not a maths person. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241026164800-Crisco_1492" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:48, 26 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241026164800-Crisco_1492"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241026164800-Crisco_1492"></span></li></ul> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Image_review" data-mw-thread-id="h-Image_review-Crisco_1492-20241030035300"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Image_review-Crisco_1492-20241030035300"></span>Image review<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Image_review-Crisco_1492-20241030035300"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1&action=edit&section=3" title="Edit section: Image review"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><a href="/wiki/File:Complete-quads.svg" title="File:Complete-quads.svg"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review"></span>File:Complete-quads.svg</a> mentions quads, but not the involvement of lines. This may be confusing (well, for me is confusing) for lay readers clicking through. Licensing looks good. <ul><li>You mean, on the image description page? <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:GACR" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:GACR">WP:GACR</a> discusses only licensing and captions. The image description page also provides a link to <a href="/wiki/Complete_quadrangle" title="Complete quadrangle">Complete quadrangle</a> which explains the involvement of lines for readers clicking through. If a reader clicks through once, doesn't click through a second time, and doesn't directly see the lines in the image, I'm not sure what more to do. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:53, 30 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300"></span>You are correct that the link between the quadrangle and lines is implied. That being said, as we are using the image to illustrate lines, not quadrangle, and although the caption in the article notes the value of the arrangement the image description does not currently support this point. This speaks to <a href="/wiki/MOS:IMAGEREL" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:IMAGEREL">MOS:IMAGEREL</a>, which <i>is</i> part of GACR. Adding "the complete quadrangle offers a simplicial arrangement of lines, while the complete quadrilateral offers a simple line arrangement" would help make the relevance explicit. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Decagon_simplicial_arrangement.svg" title="File:Decagon simplicial arrangement.svg"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review-1"></span>File:Decagon simplicial arrangement.svg</a> - Looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Roberts_triangle_theorem_n%3D7.svg" title="File:Roberts triangle theorem n=7.svg">File:Roberts triangle theorem n=7.svg</a> - Looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:17KobonDreiecke.svg" title="File:17KobonDreiecke.svg">File:17KobonDreiecke.svg</a> - Don't think PD simple really covers it. The discussion of the <a class="external text" href="https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Commons:Threshold_of_originality#Germany">threshold of originality in Germany</a> on Commons notes some things such as a triangular-based patio table as attracting copyright; consequently, the TOO may be quite low. If this was created by a user, ideally it should have a CC license. <ul><li>The link you give states "the aesthetic effect of the article can only provide a basis for copyright protection to the extent that it is not dictated by the article's utilitarian purpose". The only part of this figure not dictated by the utilitarian purpose of describing a mathematical construction (the 17-line <a href="/wiki/Kobon_triangle_problem" title="Kobon triangle problem">Kobon triangle problem</a> solution) is the choice of what color to use to shade in the triangles. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">03:53, 30 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-Image_review-1"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-1"></span>Is there only one 17-line solution to this problem? If not, a strictly utilitarian argument doesn't really hold weight. I note, for example, that the five line, five triangle solution in our article on the Kobon triangle problem is presented in two forms, with slightly different angles, and one with line segments rather than lines. This speaks to the possibility of a creative element beyond the colour. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:20, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002000-David_Eppstein-20241030035300-1"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Tiling_Dual_Semiregular_V4-8-8_Tetrakis_Square.svg" title="File:Tiling Dual Semiregular V4-8-8 Tetrakis Square.svg"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241030141600-Image_review"></span>File:Tiling Dual Semiregular V4-8-8 Tetrakis Square.svg</a> - Looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Tiling_Dual_Semiregular_V4-6-12_Bisected_Hexagonal.svg" title="File:Tiling Dual Semiregular V4-6-12 Bisected Hexagonal.svg">File:Tiling Dual Semiregular V4-6-12 Bisected Hexagonal.svg</a> - Looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Tiling_Regular_3-6_Triangular.svg" title="File:Tiling Regular 3-6 Triangular.svg">File:Tiling Regular 3-6 Triangular.svg</a> - Looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Pappos_pseudo.svg" title="File:Pappos pseudo.svg">File:Pappos pseudo.svg</a> - Licensing looks good</li> <li><a href="/wiki/File:Ageev_5X_circle_graph.svg" title="File:Ageev 5X circle graph.svg">File:Ageev 5X circle graph.svg</a> - Looks good, though my first impression was a "web of things" depiction of species and their interrelations... although, I see the caption mentions five colours but I'm only seeing one. Is this deliberate? <ul><li>Sort of. The point of this construction was not so much to find something that could be colored with five colors (that would be true of any such arrangement with no three mutually crossing arcs) but rather to find something for which there is no way of coloring it with four colors. It is not easy to depict "cannot be colored with four colors". Showing it with five colors should not suffice to convince anyone that fewer colors is impossible.</li></ul></li> <li>Not a GA criterion, but I think the explanation would definitely benefit from some sort of animation. <a href="/wiki/File:Missing_Square_Animation.gif" title="File:Missing Square Animation.gif">File:Missing Square Animation.gif</a> offers an excellent example of what could be done with animations. <ul><li>I have very little experience or available software setup for making animations. I'm much more comfortable with stills and svg-format vector images. And I don't think Wikimedia can handle animated svgs. But I think the only description that involves anything changing over time is the part about the incremental construction algorithm. Is that the one you meant? If a suitable animation has already been uploaded by someone else I'd be happy to include it. <ul><li>Or even the definitions (a line, two lines crossing, lines forming a cell). But as I said, that's a "nice to have". — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241030141600-Image_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">14:16, 30 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241030141600-Image_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241030141600-Image_review"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li></ul> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Prose_review" data-mw-thread-id="h-Prose_review-Crisco_1492-20241102235100"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Prose_review-Crisco_1492-20241102235100"></span>Prose review<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Prose_review-Crisco_1492-20241102235100"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1&action=edit&section=4" title="Edit section: Prose review"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review"></span>As I mentioned at WP:GAN, the lede is inadequate to explain all elements of the article subject. Not being a maths guy, I can't really help with that, but referring to FA examples like <a href="/wiki/Parity_of_zero" title="Parity of zero">Parity of zero</a> and <a href="/wiki/Euclidean_algorithm" title="Euclidean algorithm">Euclidean algorithm</a>, the lede should be simple enough that even a schlub like me can get the gist of it. So, for example, I'd recommend including the main categories of line arrangement, some overview of non-Euclidean arrangements vis-a-vis Euclidean ones, etc. Since this would mean a whole new lede, I'm not going to review the text yet.</li> <li>Overall, to help the lay reader, I'd add more links to the text. For example, polygon may be a common word, but since it is part of the crux of this definition, a link will definitely be beneficial. Other beneficial links include line segments, rays, vertice, convex region, <ul><li>"Vertice" is not a word. The singular of vertices is vertex. Pet peeve aside, wikilinks added. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:51, 2 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review-1"></span>Intuitively, - Okay in a journal, but probably not on Wikipedia <ul><li>Do you have a similarly-concise replacement wording for "the following description is intended to appeal to the reader's visual intuition but is not rigorous mathematics"? —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:51, 2 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235100-Prose_review-1"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002200-David_Eppstein-20241102235100"></span>No. However, I do feel that <i>intuitively</i> would fall under the <a href="/wiki/MOS:EDITORIAL" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:EDITORIAL">words to watch</a> part of the MOS. If the adverb were omitted, would this be detrimental to the definition? — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241103002200-David_Eppstein-20241102235100" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:22, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002200-David_Eppstein-20241102235100"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241103002200-David_Eppstein-20241102235100"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103011400-Crisco_1492-20241103002200"></span>If you think that this part is mathematical definition, rather than intuition to help you understand the definition that is coming next, then this word has failed in its purpose. But "intuition" or variant forms of the same word is indeed a standard technical term for this part of a mathematical explanation; see e.g. <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://scholarship.claremont.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1874&context=jhm">this academic paper entitled "intuitive explanations in mathematical education"</a>. (Not to be confused with <a href="/wiki/Intuitionism" title="Intuitionism">intuitionism</a>.) Google Scholar has nearly 7000 hits for "mathematical intuition" including 145 where that phrase is part of the title. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103011400-Crisco_1492-20241103002200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:14, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103011400-Crisco_1492-20241103002200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103011400-Crisco_1492-20241103002200"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103012500-David_Eppstein-20241103011400"></span>I did not say that I saw it as part of the definition. My concern was that using the adverb could be understood to "indicate particular interpretive viewpoints", as per the wording of the MOS section I cited. Referring to each of the current maths FAs, I am not seeing the word in any of its forms used in Wikipedia's voice. I am seeing it book titles and quotations from other works. Consequently, I feel it best to <b>ask for a second opinion</b> about the use of this adverb. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241103012500-David_Eppstein-20241103011400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:25, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103012500-David_Eppstein-20241103011400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241103012500-David_Eppstein-20241103011400"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103012700-Crisco_1492-20241103012500"></span>Anyway, since this word appears to be conveying the incorrect and unintended impression that it is expressing an opinion about the content, rather than conveying the intended meaning that the following text is informal and intended to make the formal part that follows easier to understand, I have rewritten that part to call it "an informal thought experiment". It is wordier but maybe will provoke fewer such misunderstandings. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103012700-Crisco_1492-20241103012500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:27, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103012700-Crisco_1492-20241103012500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103012700-Crisco_1492-20241103012500"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103014200-David_Eppstein-20241103012700"></span>Perhaps. I am going to note here that, when I consulted the cited source, I saw <a rel="nofollow" class="external text" href="https://archive.org/details/arrangementsspre0000grun">Grunbaum doesn't use such a thought experiment</a>. He identifies on Page 2 that the material being covered is easy enough for a graduate student, which explains why he goes straight into the definitions on Page 4. As such, as it currently stands the thought experiment is not explicitly provided by a source. It does <i>follow</i> from what the sources indicate, and thus I think it still meets criterion 2b. ("All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph") — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241103014200-David_Eppstein-20241103012700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:42, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241103014200-David_Eppstein-20241103012700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241103014200-David_Eppstein-20241103012700"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300-Crisco_1492-20241103014200"></span>I am not sure I can help this, but is the phrase "roughly speaking" might help? Thought I don't mind to use "intuitively" or "by intuition" to say something informal thought experiment. <a href="/wiki/User:Dedhert.Jr" title="User:Dedhert.Jr">Dedhert.Jr</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Dedhert.Jr" title="User talk:Dedhert.Jr">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300-Crisco_1492-20241103014200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:13, 4 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300-Crisco_1492-20241103014200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300-Crisco_1492-20241103014200"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241104121500-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300"></span>I do think "roughly" or even "approximatively" better suits the letter of the MOS. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241104121500-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">12:15, 4 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241104121500-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241104121500-Dedhert.Jr-20241104021300"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241104175000-Crisco_1492-20241104121500"></span>Maybe, but I think both are a distortion of the intended meaning. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241104175000-Crisco_1492-20241104121500" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:50, 4 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241104175000-Crisco_1492-20241104121500"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241104175000-Crisco_1492-20241104121500"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl></li></ul></li></ul></li></ul></li></ul></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235600-Prose_review"></span>of the arrangement are isolated points belonging to two or more lines, where those lines cross each other - Worth including the word "intersection" somewhere, or does that have a definition in maths that doesn't really fit this context? <ul><li>If you have already formalized lines as being certain sets of points, then yes, each vertex is the unique element of the set of points formed by intersecting some two lines. Often the step of going from a one-element set to the unique member of the set is skipped over and people will say that a point is the intersection of two lines, but that language is a bit sloppy. And using sets is not necessary: it is possible and in many cases helpful to think of lines as indivisible objects and to think of point-line incidence being a <a href="/wiki/Binary_relation" title="Binary relation">binary relation</a> rather than as membership in a set. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241102235600-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:56, 2 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235600-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235600-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><i><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235800-Prose_review"></span>locally finite</i> - per <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:EMPHASIS" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:EMPHASIS">WP:EMPHASIS</a>, we should not add italics for emphasis. Previous instances were words as words, whereas this one is not a definition. <ul><li>It was intended as a definition: a locally finite arrangement is defined, in the next clause of the sentence, as being an arrangement "in which every bounded subset of the plane may be crossed by only finitely many lines". —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241102235800-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">23:58, 2 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235800-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241102235800-Prose_review"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105053700-David_Eppstein-20241102235800"></span>After some thought I changed up the wording to make it more clear that this is intended as a definition. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105053700-David_Eppstein-20241102235800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:37, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105053700-David_Eppstein-20241102235800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105053700-David_Eppstein-20241102235800"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103000000-Prose_review"></span>The same classification of points, and the same shapes of equivalence classes, can be used for infinite but <i>locally finite</i> arrangements, in which every bounded subset of the plane may be crossed by only finitely many lines, although in this case the unbounded cells may have infinitely many sides. - May be easier to read if split into at least two sentences <ul><li><span class="nowrap"><span typeof="mw:File"><span><img alt="" src="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/18px-Yes_check.svg.png" decoding="async" width="18" height="18" class="mw-file-element" srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/27px-Yes_check.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/36px-Yes_check.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="600" data-file-height="600"/></span></span><b> Done</b></span> —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103000000-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:00, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103000000-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103000000-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014400-Prose_review"></span>The study of arrangements was begun by <a href="/wiki/Jakob_Steiner" title="Jakob Steiner">Jakob Steiner</a>, who proved the first bounds on the maximum number of features of different types that an arrangement may have. - When? How long have the properties of line arrangement been discussed by mathematicians? Your reference has a year, but nothing is mentioned in the running text. We may not have an entire history section like <a href="/wiki/Euclidean_algorithm" title="Euclidean algorithm">Euclidean algorithm</a>, but it is good to have a rough idea as to how the discourse has emerged and developed. <ul><li>Moved to a new brief history section at the end of the article and expanded there, also addressing the "perhaps" issue that you bring up in the spot-check below. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103014400-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:44, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014400-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014400-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review"></span>Any arrangement can be rotated to avoid axis-parallel lines, without changing its number of cells. - Is that comma necessary? <ul><li>I think it's optional, but instead I removed the clause that follows as I don't think it's necessary. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:49, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review-1"></span>infinite-downward rays - Not sure I follow; if a ray is itself infinite, how can it have direction? Or does "downward" mean something else in this context? <ul><li>All rays are infinite, so writing it that way was redundant. Anyway, copyedited to clarify. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:49, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103014900-Prose_review-1"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103015300-Prose_review"></span>Again, this worst-case bound is achieved for simple arrangements. - Not feeling this one. You use "bound" for cell boundary above, but here we are talking about edges. Also, "again" and "worse-case" feels more like essay language than Wikipedia language. Would something like "A value of <span class="nowrap">at most <span class="mwe-math-element"><span class="mwe-math-mathml-inline mwe-math-mathml-a11y" style="display: none;"><math xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" alttext="{\displaystyle n^{2}}"> <semantics> <mrow class="MJX-TeXAtom-ORD"> <mstyle displaystyle="true" scriptlevel="0"> <msup> <mi>n</mi> <mrow class="MJX-TeXAtom-ORD"> <mn>2</mn> </mrow> </msup> </mstyle> </mrow> <annotation encoding="application/x-tex">{\displaystyle n^{2}}</annotation> </semantics> </math></span><img src="https://wikimedia.org/api/rest_v1/media/math/render/svg/ac9810bbdafe4a6a8061338db0f74e25b7952620" class="mwe-math-fallback-image-inline mw-invert skin-invert" aria-hidden="true" style="vertical-align: -0.338ex; width:2.449ex; height:2.676ex;" alt="{\displaystyle n^{2}}"/></span></span> is achieved in simple arrangements" be accurate? <ul><li>I think "attained" is maybe more idiomatic than "achieved". But anyway, I rewrote this "again" sentence much more simply: "Simple arrangements have exactly <span class="mwe-math-element"><span class="mwe-math-mathml-inline mwe-math-mathml-a11y" style="display: none;"><math xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1998/Math/MathML" alttext="{\displaystyle n^{2}}"> <semantics> <mrow class="MJX-TeXAtom-ORD"> <mstyle displaystyle="true" scriptlevel="0"> <msup> <mi>n</mi> <mrow class="MJX-TeXAtom-ORD"> <mn>2</mn> </mrow> </msup> </mstyle> </mrow> <annotation encoding="application/x-tex">{\displaystyle n^{2}}</annotation> </semantics> </math></span><img src="https://wikimedia.org/api/rest_v1/media/math/render/svg/ac9810bbdafe4a6a8061338db0f74e25b7952620" class="mwe-math-fallback-image-inline mw-invert skin-invert" aria-hidden="true" style="vertical-align: -0.338ex; width:2.449ex; height:2.676ex;" alt="{\displaystyle n^{2}}"/></span> edges." —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241103015300-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:53, 3 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241103015300-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241103015300-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105054200-Prose_review"></span>The best upper bound ... the best lower bound - How are bounds supposed to be "best" (or worst, as above)? <ul><li>I added the word "known" to make more clear that this reflects our state of knowledge rather than some notion of being mathematically impossible to improve. Anyway, a bound is better when it is closer to the thing it bounds. So an upper bound is better when it is smaller than some other upper bound, and a lower bound is better when it is larger than some other lower bound. But using minimum/maximum type words in alternation tends to be a bit confusing, so I didn't want to say "the least known upper bound" and "the greatest known lower bound", especially when those are so close to phrases like <a href="/wiki/Least_upper_bound" class="mw-redirect" title="Least upper bound">least upper bound</a> and <a href="/wiki/Greatest_lower_bound" class="mw-redirect" title="Greatest lower bound">greatest lower bound</a> that have a different and more technical meaning. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105054200-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:42, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105054200-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105054200-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review"></span>I'm seeing other uses of "bound" for maxima and minima. Again, given the use of "bound" to also refer to the boundary of the cell, I'm wondering if an alternative phrasing may be easier to follow. <ul><li>There isn't really any alternative phrase for <a href="/wiki/Upper_bound" class="mw-redirect" title="Upper bound">upper bound</a> or <a href="/wiki/Lower_bound" class="mw-redirect" title="Lower bound">lower bound</a> that I can think of offhand. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:51, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-1"></span>By Melchior (1940) - Per <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:PAREN" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:PAREN">WP:PAREN</a>, parenthetical referencing has been deprecated. I know that strictly speaking this is more of a "mention" than a parenthetical reference, but perhaps "by <a href="/wiki/Eberhard_Melchior" title="Eberhard Melchior">Eberhard Melchior</a> in 1940" would work better. <ul><li>Ok, but I kept the article-internal wikilink to the reference on "1940". —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:51, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-1"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-2"></span>Another parenthetical citation in #Triangles in arrangements <ul><li>In this one, it's more obviously article text, not a citation, because there's a footnote to the same reference (the actual citation) at the end of the same sentence. But I'm not convinced that the author names and dates are necessary in the article text, so I removed them. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-2" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:51, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-2"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055100-Prose_review-2"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055500-Prose_review"></span>the minimum number of triangles is n-2, by Roberts's triangle theorem. - Feels like this could be expressed more clearly <ul><li>I'm not sure what's unclear here. For Euclidean arrangements, every arrangement must have at least n-2 triangles, and there exist arrangements with exactly n-2 triangles. Therefore the minimum is n-2, rather than some other number. This is in contrast with the two previous sentences, which stated the same sort of thing for projective arrangements but with n instead of n-2. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241105055500-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">05:55, 5 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055500-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241105055500-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review"></span>For non-simple arrangements the maximum number of triangles is similar but more tightly bounded - Not understanding what "more tightly bounded" is meant to imply in this situation. A bit of clarification could help. <ul><li>I'm not sure any more what that was supposed to mean, either. The bounds are not tighter than in the simple case. Anyway, I stated the bounds from the three cited papers more explicitly. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:57, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review-1"></span>For some but not all values of n - A lay reader may think that n and n(n-2)/3 are part of the same equation. Reframing this sentence would help. <ul><li><span class="nowrap"><span typeof="mw:File"><span><img alt="" src="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/18px-Yes_check.svg.png" decoding="async" width="18" height="18" class="mw-file-element" srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/27px-Yes_check.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/36px-Yes_check.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="600" data-file-height="600"/></span></span><b> Done</b></span> —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">06:57, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106065700-Prose_review-1"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070000-Prose_review"></span>Another parenthetical in #Multigrids and rhombus tilings <ul><li>Rewritten, less because of the parenthetical and more because of the awkward capitalization of de Bruijn's name at the start of a sentence. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106070000-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:00, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070000-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070000-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070300-Prose_review"></span>families of parallel lines this construction just gives the familiar square tiling of the plane, and for three families of lines at 120-degree angles from each other (themselves forming a trihexagonal tiling) this produces the rhombille tiling - "just" and "familiar" could be nixed without affecting the meaning <ul><li><span class="nowrap"><span typeof="mw:File"><span><img alt="" src="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/18px-Yes_check.svg.png" decoding="async" width="18" height="18" class="mw-file-element" srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/27px-Yes_check.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/36px-Yes_check.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="600" data-file-height="600"/></span></span><b> Done</b></span> Adverbs duly eschewed. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106070300-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:03, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070300-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106070300-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review"></span>Constructing an arrangement means, given as input a list of the lines in the arrangement, computing a representation of the vertices, edges, and cells of the arrangement together with the adjacencies between these objects, for instance as a doubly connected edge list. - Might be easier to parse if separated into two sentences. <ul><li><span class="nowrap"><span typeof="mw:File"><span><img alt="" src="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/18px-Yes_check.svg.png" decoding="async" width="18" height="18" class="mw-file-element" srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/27px-Yes_check.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/36px-Yes_check.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="600" data-file-height="600"/></span></span><b> Done</b></span> —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:33, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-1"></span>Due to the zone theorem, - Is it a causal relationship, as implied by due, or is this <i>per</i> the zone theorem? <ul><li>It's really the analysis that uses the zone theorem, not the algorithm itself. Rewritten with this callout later. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:33, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-1"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-2"></span>However, the memory requirements of this algorithm are high, so it may be more convenient to report all features of an arrangement by an algorithm that does not keep the entire arrangement in memory at once. - Given that this paper is from 1989, is the claim about memory requirements still applicable? <ul><li>I'm sure it depends on the application. It's more a matter of how it scales than absolute numbers. If for some reason you wanted to compute arrangements with millions of lines, the time might still be possible but the space of computing the whole arrangement wouldn't be. But the claim of being "more convenient" and "more efficiently" is kind of an inappropriate editorialization (I think more than some of the other ones you've complained about earlier) so I replaced this by a more factual statement merely about the space being lower. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-2" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:33, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-2"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106073300-Prose_review-2"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074300-Prose_review"></span>but the general problem remains open. - citation needed <ul><li>It's kind of difficult to source a negative (this problem hasn't been solved yet) but I added a 2020 reference stating it as still open, much more recent than the other references in this part. It's a master's thesis, though, which you might object to. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106074300-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:43, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074300-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074300-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074800-Prose_review"></span>Pseudoline arrangement and arrangements of hyperbolic lines are bolded, which doesn't really segue with the rest of the discussion in the article. <ul><li>For the hyperbolic lines, I think this is fair, and I unbolded it. But <a href="/wiki/Pseudoline" class="mw-redirect" title="Pseudoline">pseudoline</a> redirects to this section; see <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Text_formatting#Article_title_terms" title="Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting">Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Text formatting § Article title terms</a> "This is also done at the first occurrence of a term (commonly a synonym in the lead) that redirects to the article or one of its subsections, whether the term appears in the lead or not". The whole phrase "pseudoline arrangement" is bolded rather than just "pseudoline" because it does not make much sense to talk about a curve as being a pseudoline outside the context of a system of other curves with which it forms a pseudoline arrangement. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106074800-Prose_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:48, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074800-Prose_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106074800-Prose_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li>Another parenthetical ref in #Non-Euclidean line arrangements <ul><li>In the caption? It's not really a reference (none of the captions currently have references), just a textual description of the context from which this arrangement comes. In this context it makes less sense to expand it out into a longer and unparenthesized form merely for the sake of avoiding parenthesized text because some editors had a bee in their bonnet about articles that formatted their references parenthetically rather than in footnotes and agreed to deprecate that syntax for actual references in an RfC that was on a discussion page for how to format references (not the MOS for how to write article text). Captions should be concise. Do you maybe have a similarly-concise way of saying the same thing with a different syntax?</li></ul></li></ul> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Source_review" data-mw-thread-id="h-Source_review-Crisco_1492-20241031163900"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Source_review-Crisco_1492-20241031163900"></span>Source review<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Source_review-Crisco_1492-20241031163900"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1&action=edit&section=5" title="Edit section: Source review"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106075600-Source_review"></span>I see that you cite four of your own publications. Given the number of references to other mathematicians, as well as the fact that the article is built predominantly on their work, I do not think that this falls afoul of <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:COI" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:COI">WP:COI</a>. <ul><li>Thanks. I try not to cite my own publications when something else will suffice, but I'm not sure that's true in this case. The E/Falmagne/Ovchinnikov book is the most replaceable, but even for it I don't know where to find a similar discussion of the varied definitions of pseudolines (except a blog post also by me on the same thing, on which I based that content in the book, and I try more strongly to avoid citing my blog). —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106075600-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">07:56, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106075600-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106075600-Source_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review"></span>All of the references in #Algorithms are at least twenty years old. Given the emphasis on computer-assisted mathematics in this section, and the advances in computing in this time frame (based on a quick Google search, my tower has north of ten thousand times more <a href="/wiki/Floating_point_operations_per_second" title="Floating point operations per second">flops</a> than a CRAY-1), it would be beneficial to have more recent references. <ul><li>One doesn't generally need to find new algorithms merely because one is using a faster computer. And many of the basics are long settled. But I found and added three recent algorithms in the footnotes for the middle paragraph of this section. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:31, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review-1"></span>Based on my understanding of the article, the focus is on discussion of line arrangement in planes (i.e., two-dimensional spaces). Is there literature on line arrangements in <i>n</i> dimensions, or is that covered under the hyperbolic arrangement? <ul><li>There is a qualitative difference between lines in 2d and in higher dimensions: in 2d, they split the plane into cells, but in higher dimensions the free space is all one piece, and disjoint lines can be moved continuously from any system of positions to any other system of positions. It's the same for points in 1d vs in higher dimensions. Instead, the closest analogous concept in higher dimensions is <a href="/wiki/Arrangement_of_hyperplanes" title="Arrangement of hyperplanes">Arrangement of hyperplanes</a>, something we have a (linked) separate article for. One can still study lines in higher dimensions. I think there is also some study of complex lines (that is, spaces coordinatized by a single complex number) in 3-dimensional complex spaces (coordinatized by triples of complex numbers) hinted at in <a href="/wiki/Quadrisecant" title="Quadrisecant">quadrisecant</a> but I think this would be a little esoteric for a mention in this article, except maybe as a see-also link if we had an article to link to. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:31, 6 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241106083100-Source_review-1"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107021200-Source_review"></span>Your use of page numbers is not standardized. Refs 1 through 3 use them, and a couple others, but most everything is a whole-article reference. Page numbers would help verifiability. <ul><li>The intent was to cite specific page numbers in books, and for citations to specific claims mentioned in passing in article references, but not to repeat the whole page range for articles that are largely or entirely about the cited claim. I added pages for several more footnotes according to this criterion. Leighton really should have a page number but I do not have a copy from which I can obtain this, and very many other sources just cite Leighton as the standard reference for this claim without further specifics. Grünbaum 1972 also should have pages, but I don't have access to this at home. I'll check later whether I have a physical copy in my office. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241107021200-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">02:12, 7 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107021200-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241107021200-Source_review"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107215000-David_Eppstein-20241107021200"></span>It was in my office. Page numbers added. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241107215000-David_Eppstein-20241107021200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:50, 7 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107215000-David_Eppstein-20241107021200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241107215000-David_Eppstein-20241107021200"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review"></span>"Sequence A000124 (Central polygonal numbers (the Lazy Caterer's sequence))" stands out as the only non-SFN in the article. I'd convert it to an SFN reference as well, just for the sake of uniformity. <ul><li><span class="nowrap"><span typeof="mw:File"><span><img alt="" src="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/18px-Yes_check.svg.png" decoding="async" width="18" height="18" class="mw-file-element" srcset="//upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/27px-Yes_check.svg.png 1.5x, //upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/thumb/f/fb/Yes_check.svg/36px-Yes_check.svg.png 2x" data-file-width="600" data-file-height="600"/></span></span><b> Done</b></span>, after some fuss trying to get the sfn link to work. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:07, 7 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review-1"></span>Some of your references are in title case, while others are in sentence case. Per <a href="/wiki/MOS:REF" class="mw-redirect" title="MOS:REF">MOS:REF</a>, we should be consistent. <ul><li>The intended convention is to use italic-font title case (most words capitalized) for titles of journals and books, and upright-font sentence case (capitals only for the first word, the first word after a colon, proper nouns, and German nouns) for titles of articles in journals and books. A quick scan found two books (and the new master's thesis) not following this convention; fixed. I suppose you're aware that the GA rule about reference formatting does not actually require consistency of formatting, but that is something I like to do anyway. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review-1" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">00:07, 7 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review-1"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241107000700-Source_review-1"></span> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-David_Eppstein-20241107000700"></span>Interesting, since "Editors may use any citation method they choose, but it should be consistent within an article." But yes, I see that there is a footnote in the criteria. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-David_Eppstein-20241107000700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:18, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-David_Eppstein-20241107000700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-David_Eppstein-20241107000700"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><a class="external text" href="https://copyvios.toolforge.org/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=1&title=Arrangement_of_lines"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-Source_review"></span>Earwig</a> doesn't see anything to worry about.</li> <li>Spotcheck, using <a class="external text" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Arrangement_of_lines&oldid=1251610391">this revision</a> as a basis. <ul><li>[4] - Not quite what the source says. Source says Steiner was <i>perhaps</i> the first, waffling in case an earlier paper existed. <ul><li>Addressed above. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:22, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-Source_review"></span></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-David_Eppstein-20241108082200"></span>[5] - Not going to lie, I don't see the exact formula rendered here. That being said, I'm aware it may be rendered differently and I don't have the baseline knowledge to see it. The fact that simple arrangements achieve the maximum bound is supported <ul><li>This comment refers to the first bullet of "Complexity of arrangements", now footnote [4] after moving the history caused some renumbering. The reference gives a formula for the number of cells of a variable dimension in an arrangement of variable dimension. Plugging in cell dimension k=0 and arrangement dimension d=2, one gets a sum with a single term i=0, for which the term is (2 choose 0)(n choose 2). This simplifies to the given formula by observing that (2 choose 0)=1. I think this falls under <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:CALC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:CALC">WP:CALC</a>: this simplification is a trivial calculation if only one is familiar with the notation used by the source and how to apply it to this specific case. As <a href="/wiki/Wikipedia:CALC" class="mw-redirect" title="Wikipedia:CALC">WP:CALC</a> recommends, I added a note to the footnote explaining the calculation. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-David_Eppstein-20241108082200" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">08:22, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-David_Eppstein-20241108082200"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241108082200-David_Eppstein-20241108082200"></span></li></ul></li></ul></li> <li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241031163900-Source_review"></span>Other spotchecks are currently hindered by the lack of page numbers, as well as my own limitations as a lay reader. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241031163900-Source_review" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">16:39, 31 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241031163900-Source_review"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241031163900-Source_review"></span></li></ul> <div class="mw-heading mw-heading4"><h4 id="Conclusion" data-mw-thread-id="h-Conclusion-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="h-Conclusion-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"></span>Conclusion<span data-mw-comment-end="h-Conclusion-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"></span></h4><span class="mw-editsection"><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">[</span><a href="/w/index.php?title=Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1&action=edit&section=6" title="Edit section: Conclusion"><span>edit</span></a><span class="mw-editsection-bracket">]</span></span></div> <ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241026171400-Conclusion"></span>Overall, <i>as a lay person</i>, this appears to be fairly solid. The lede will need work, and I have questions about #Algorithms, but I do feel like it's close to GA status. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241026171400-Conclusion" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">17:14, 26 October 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241026171400-Conclusion"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241026171400-Conclusion"></span></li></ul> <dl><dd><ul><li><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"></span>Alright, thank you for the discussion and the timely resolution of most concerns. I do still feel that the lede needs to summarize the content better, but we're almost there. — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-Crisco_1492-20241026171400" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">11:18, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241108111800-Crisco_1492-20241026171400"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108213700-Crisco_1492-20241108111800"></span>Ok, thanks for reminding me of that point, which I was delaying until the rest of the article stabilized again. I'll take another look at that. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241108213700-Crisco_1492-20241108111800" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">21:37, 8 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241108213700-Crisco_1492-20241108111800"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241108213700-Crisco_1492-20241108111800"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-David_Eppstein-20241110015600-David_Eppstein-20241108213700"></span>Ok, lead expanded. —<a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:David_Eppstein" title="User talk:David Eppstein">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-David_Eppstein-20241110015600-David_Eppstein-20241108213700" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">01:56, 10 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-David_Eppstein-20241110015600-David_Eppstein-20241108213700"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-David_Eppstein-20241110015600-David_Eppstein-20241108213700"></span> <dl><dd><span data-mw-comment-start="" id="c-Crisco_1492-20241111185600-David_Eppstein-20241110015600"></span>Hi <a href="/wiki/User:David_Eppstein" title="User:David Eppstein">David Eppstein</a>, I've reviewed the new lede and I think that this article now meets the GA criteria. Congratulations! — <a href="/wiki/User:Crisco_1492" title="User:Crisco 1492">Chris Woodrich</a> (<a href="/wiki/User_talk:Crisco_1492" title="User talk:Crisco 1492">talk</a>) <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Arrangement_of_lines/GA1#c-Crisco_1492-20241111185600-David_Eppstein-20241110015600" class="ext-discussiontools-init-timestamplink">18:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC)</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-buttons" data-mw-thread-id="c-Crisco_1492-20241111185600-David_Eppstein-20241110015600"><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">[</span><a class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-reply" role="button" tabindex="0" href="">reply</a><span class="ext-discussiontools-init-replylink-bracket">]</span></span><span data-mw-comment-end="c-Crisco_1492-20241111185600-David_Eppstein-20241110015600"></span></dd></dl></dd></dl></dd></dl></li></ul></dd></dl> <div style="padding-left: 1.6em; font-style: italic; border-top: 1px solid #a2a9b1; margin: 0.5em 0; padding-top: 0.5em">The discussion above is closed. <b style="color: var(--color-error, red);">Please do not modify it.</b> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. 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